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I need some constructive criticism on my website

by neo4evr
17 replies
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Hi friends,

Hope you are doing great

I would love to get your constructive criticism on my company website at:

Especially on the slider.... I want to make it more catchy, do you have any ideas?

Thanks in Advance!
#constructive #criticism #website
  • Profile picture of the author Aniblow
    Your site is pretty cool... I'd suggest you have more than 1 button for visitors to contact you for a quote. I think you should have at least 1 further down the page or better still link each of your services to that page. It gives the visitor a feeling of instant service.
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  • Profile picture of the author neo4evr
    Thank you. I appreciate your suggestion.

    Do you think the slider is okay? And is the grammar usage proper? I wrote the content all by myself without the help of any professional content writer so I am not sure if the grammar is proper.
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  • Profile picture of the author savidge4
    Neo,

    You really really need to work on your load time. I am going to guess you have some CSS errors or the like. it took well over a minute to get your page to load. You need to get some of that script out of the head section .

    Speaking of code.. why even bother with disabling right click? Its just using resources for nothing really.


    QUOTE=neo4evr;9139258]Hi friends,

    Hope you are doing great

    I would love to get your constructive criticism on my company website at Designing your Dreams | Web Design | Web Development | Graphic Design Services - Maxx Coders

    Especially on the slider.... I want to make it more catchy, do you have any ideas?

    Thanks in Advance![/QUOTE]
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  • Profile picture of the author neo4evr
    Hi, thanks. I have optimized the scripts and code. Is it loading faster now?

    Checked with the tools at pingdom, and the speed is showing really good...
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  • Profile picture of the author laurencewins
    Your load time almost made me click off. Your slider at the top is way too big.
    You do need attention to grammar as you have the wrong tenses at times, among other things. All in all, not a site I would revisit.
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  • Profile picture of the author midolyon
    The load time is way too long, i don't think that your fix did anything to it. And your slider is very big, taking all the creen and causing some browsers to crash.
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  • Profile picture of the author andreiluca
    Blocking select/right click is so 2007, please don't do that.
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    • Profile picture of the author neo4evr
      Hi. Thanks for all feedback!
      I disabled the Slider entirely for now...
      Also, I combined and minified the JS and CSS, is the website loading any faster?
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  • Profile picture of the author Zachary Evans
    Load time is taking about 3-5 seconds.

    The design of your website looks very professional to me but the copy does not. Spend a bit of money and hire a content writer to get your copy up to the standard of your design.
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    • Profile picture of the author neo4evr
      I am looking for a professional writer, is it possible to find someone through Warrior Forums?
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  • Profile picture of the author theory816
    One thing I hate is cheap looking buttons with a circle behind it. You see this in alot of landing pages. It has a fake ad feel to it. But maybe its just me though. Other then that site looks professional
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  • Profile picture of the author jasonracer
    load time varies a lot from my location.
    sometimes I get gateway-timeout, sometimes it loads in 8 seconds, third time in 2,5 seconds
    page speed score is really high:
    WebPagetest Test Result - Dulles : www.maxxcoders.com/ - 04/29/14 11:55:07

    other than that, I like the visual appeal.
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  • Profile picture of the author UMS
    Getting a professional writer/editor should be high on your priority list to correct the spelling and grammatical errors on the page.
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  • Profile picture of the author neo4evr
    Thank you everyone ! Appreciate your feedback Helped a lot
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  • Profile picture of the author Bemmax50
    Looks good and loads fast enough, just don't forget to add your "Portfolio", to clear doubts of potential clients about your skills.
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  • Profile picture of the author rosarionet
    I have checked your website and noticed that something is wrong with that WordPress. It takes over 5 seconds to be loaded in full. Here is what you can do to speed it up:

    1) Optimize images
    2) Load jQuery from Google. It seems G. Servers are faster than yours.
    3) Check your .css file. It has a lot of white spaces ( not well optimized one ).
    4) Give a try to CDN. CloudFlare offers a free trial.
    5) You have an external resource to demo.co which takes almost 3 seconds. Perhaps this is the source of the whole case with the speed. I recommend you to review your code ( WordPress and its plugins ) and remove that bg-integrity-1.png

    Drop a line if you want me to take a closer look again
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  • Profile picture of the author damoncloudflare
    Originally Posted by neo4evr View Post

    Hi friends,

    Hope you are doing great

    I would love to get your constructive criticism on my company website at:

    Especially on the slider.... I want to make it more catchy, do you have any ideas?

    Thanks in Advance!
    You can identify potential performance issues by looking at this waterfall for your site.
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