Looking for some quality feedback regarding my seduction blog

Now I know what you mean. I guess I did overdo it a bit in the first paragraph..

Hey Convictie,

I took a lot at your blog and I see you added a photo on the home page which definitely adds something in terms of eye candy.

I think adding thumbnail for each post would be even better for people to want to click
Instead of letting wordpress create excerpts for you, you should probably create more enticing text so people have more incentive to read each blog post.

The blog posts are a bit stiffly written, they should inject more fun and liveliness which would tend to be a result from someone very happy because they are getting laid a lot from the lovely ladies of their choice

A quick question:

Did you choose this topic because you are truly interested in it and would be involved in it whether or not you would be creating a blog? Or is it a topic you chose where you thought it would be a good niche to 'make money'?

If you aren't truly committed to the subject and having some successes, people will notice.
You picked a very competitive niche so there are tons of great blogs with great information. So first, to even have a chance and not just be lumped into the group of average watered down version of a quality blog ( a me too blog), you need to have something unique in the experience of interacting with your blog.

If you are committed then you need to be aware of which blogs are your closest and most similar competitors. Know what they are writing about, focusing on and what their followers are talking about (and asking). You basically want to play off of what the community is talking about and find a unique stance, position, persona, angle (or even controversial viewpoint - aka they are idiots, or us vs them)

A persona needs to come through so people can feel there's a real person behind this blog.

Get a cool pic with you and at least 1 or 2 hot girls fawning over you.

You need to get your writing to flow more, get someone to help you correct the spelling and grammar mistakes and help to clear up the vague or confusing points. Inject some personality and fun into it!

Your reviews are so generic!

There's barely any real experiential insight into the product. I don't just want to know "what's included". I want to know how an expert related to the information from a more insider's viewpoint (which ideas can you relate with? Which ideas do you have a better solution for yourself? etc)

I read the Tao of Badass and I thought it was one of the best books I read in that genre and it would have been cool for you to dig into it enough to see that you relate with the ideas (or don't - aka contrarian and why) like I do.

Once you get some of these things figured out and get your persona to stand out a bit, then maybe some people would want to see what you are up to.

If you are just trying a 'mechanical' SEO strategy to 'get traffic' and see who doesn't bounce.. I think this project will fall flat.. there are simply too many people out there who have killer info to want to bother investing time into a soulless blog.

If you are serious about finding ways to succeed with this and are committed to the material, then pm me.. I can give you some more ideas as you move forward on this.