Craigslist Ad Help!
so heres my ad
TIME IS TICKING! Music Video Shoot
The next wave of stars is here, you are one of them!?
I have been making music videos for well over 3 years now, really 7 if you count the early ones. I believe I have the eye to take you to the next level, visually. Getting great angles, and chopping the best of the best shots into a phenomenal music video. Its not exactly an easy job, shooting for hours at a time, then having the patience to craft it all together masterfully in a video editor program. But to me it is well worth the time invested.
I never went to school for this stuff, I am self taught. I have all my own equipment. Which I have spent thousands of dollars acquiring. A big risk on my behalf but to me following your dreams and passions, is worth it. All of my previous clients have agreed. The money spent for the service was well worth it. Heres what one had to say "Thank you Chris! You are an outstanding filmmaker and excellent director. It was an honor and pleasure to work with you. There will be many more projects to come."
So heres the offer, a 3-4 minute story based music video, shot on professional HD cameras, for a full 8 hour day, 3 - 5 locations, then to top it off a 24 hour edit process (separated into 8 hour shifts) with two revisions.
Now how this could benefit you?
* Build credibility
* Bank off my creativity to get your own attention grabbing video
* Build your brand, your portfolio, your self-image
* Attract the masses
What I am offering is an opportunity. These don't come everyday.
How much does an opportunity cost?
How much would it cost you if you missed this opportunity?
Heres the sweet part. If you are not totally satisfied with your video after you have had final product in your hands with two revisions, then I will personally refund all of your money. No questions asked, with the only exception being the video will be taken down.
So with that satisfaction guarantee being said. The only thing you have to lose is, well nothing!
* Pay In Installments
* Personal Guarantee
Give me a shot to take your videos to the next level. I am certain you will love it. Your friends will think highly of you. And with the guarantee, you really have nothing to lose. So hit that reply button, and take advantage of this opportunity now!
* $899
Best Regards,
Chris
Water Video Productions
So thats my ad, if i could get some help with it that would be wonderful, attached to the ad are some screen caps of music videos i shot and my company logo...
Chris
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