Need opinons with autoresponder msg
I need a quick review/analysis of a women's skin care product autoresponder message. Female advice would be greatly appreciated!
-----------------------------
SUBJECT: Aging occurs on two fronts, internally and externally
Treating wrinkles and aging skin is a complex process that requires more than "gap filler" to completely repair. That's why the new and improved XXX line simultaneously works with both the external and the internal needs of your skin, to fix the problems at their core.
Benefits of XXX Anti-Aging cream :
* Natural, FDA-Approved, and effective ingredients
* Easy to apply on your skin, use daily as needed
* Suits any skin type (discoloration, oily, dry, rugged, etc)
* Pro FX Skin products nourish and treat your skin pores
* Ensures firmness to the skin texture through internal toning
"I discovered that my skin felt younger and more toned after I used it for two days. It feels great and it still seems to be working."
Erica S.
Sand Diego, CA
By treating existing wrinkles, lines, sagging skin, and and internal toning issues, XXX products reignite your glow one day at a time. By aiding the processes that your body naturally uses to rejuvenate cells, XXX can turn back the clock on wrinkles and aging.
Order today with our 60 Day Money-Back Guarantee. If you don't see amazing results within days, we'll refund your order. Thousands of women agree, XXX is the best!
Order Now, Save 25%!
-------------------------------
Thanks again!
Learn IM From the Experts Who Are Already Doing It!
"Sammy-approved, baby!" -- Offline Brat Pack
Work hard, live a happy life, cherish your family and friends. Be thankful for every day.
Work hard, live a happy life, cherish your family and friends. Be thankful for every day.
Always looking for badass direct-response copywriters. PM me if we don't know each other and you're looking for work.
Work hard, live a happy life, cherish your family and friends. Be thankful for every day.
Work hard, live a happy life, cherish your family and friends. Be thankful for every day.
Work hard, live a happy life, cherish your family and friends. Be thankful for every day.