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Your Expert Opinion (Please)

by ragstworiches
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Hi Warriors,

If you could check out my sales page and give some possible tips and hints that would be awesome.

The Racing Tipsters - Professional Horse Racing Tips Service

Its a work in progress, you'll probably notice the lack of proof, but these are still to be added.

*Testimonials
* Video proof of earnings

My main concerns are:

* The Bull***t gif - is this acceptable?

* the FAQ - should this be on a separate page?

* Is it actually clear what you are buying

* Should I have a picture of myself?


Cheers, Phil
#expert #opinion
  • Profile picture of the author damagex
    Is this about the sports betting page? It's a bit unclear where you're refering to.
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  • Profile picture of the author travlinguy
    Looks like you're trying to be all things to all people and accomplishing nothing. Decide what you want from this page. That seems to be affiliate sign-ups. So be about it. Make your case for why people should be your affiliate and get all the rest of that stuff off the page.

    You don't need to show potential affiliates all of the tools you're offering. Create a different page for that stuff. And for God's sake, get all those live links off your page unless you want people clicking away never to return. You have a lot of work to do. Good luck
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    • Profile picture of the author ragstworiches
      Salespage link now added (sorry for the omission)

      Cheers, Phil
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      • Profile picture of the author damagex
        I think you should delete the bull**** part, It really doesn't fit the page,
        other then that I think it looks nice. It had some proof that would make people commit to your product so that's fine.
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