Help Me Beat My Squeeze Page Control
How's it going? I wonder if any of you copy writing geniuses have some time to kill and fancy a bit of amusement in the form of helping me beat my control squeeze page? I will come back and let you know if your idea increased conversions so there are bragging right up for play here
(Also you may get a warm fuzzy feeling inside for knowing you helped out a struggling entrepreneur in a tough econom...... well, you get the idea. No need to labour the point. I can't afford to hire a copywriter right now and stand here with pot in hand ready to consume your words of wisdom like a tramp on chips).
I am driving traffic to the squeeze page with Google PPC so there are a few regulations about what I can do on this page.
- I can't take peoples details in return for a freebie
- I have to provide some information and unique content on the page
- I can only collect details for "legitimate business purpose"
My buyers are split roughly half and half between:
1. Professionals - Already work in the industry and just want a quick cheap and easy method to get certified.
2. Beginners - have heard about certification but have no experience. Will probably need some careers advice (which i provide via email/online chat/phone and may not meet requirements of this course so would be recommended to start with easier course (included in same package so they can still sign up regardless)
USP: My Competition generally charge a lot more and they also do not have the easy in easy out subscription plans I do. Most companies will make you sign up for a 2 year finance contract in order to get a low monthly payment. I am doing an easy in easy out offer.
OK, the scene is set, now onto My Control...
Below is the current copy that is working best for me although I feel there is massive room for improvement.
Google Ad Box
MCSE Training $39/Month
Just Pay For The Access You Need.
Get Your First Week For Just $1
mydomain.com/MCSE_Cert
Landing Page
MCSE Certification Training Course $39/month. Study From Anywhere!
So... Are you a gamer? Are you read to prove to the world you are the King of conversion or the Queen of signups? :rolleyes:
Seriously though, I am truly thankful for any help and advice that you mighty wordsmiths can give me that will increase my conversions.
Any images/layout changes/copy changes that you think could help will be collated and put into my control beater.
Many thanks in advance.
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