Michael Masterson's 4U's- Tip your response rate over the edge to the "hyper-responsive" side

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Hi fellow warriors,

I have posted a thread here asking for critique before.
Knowing that I am really suck at copywriting, I have
spend some time studying it...seriously.

It might be a good idea to post some of my notes about
copywriting here because

1. No harm adding more contents to the forum right?

2. Someone might actually get some benefits from it

3. Perhaps you have something to say about my notes-
Maybe I am wrong about some ideas... maybe you have
a better example... maybe you can elaborate more

----------------Note Begins Here----------------------------
Every marketer knows it doesn't matter whether
your emails are written by the top-notch, most
sought-after copywriter...that can "magically"
convert your readers into hungry buyers...if they
are simply trashed by a single click of "delete".

Michael Masterson, the man behind the famous "AWAI
Six Figures Copywriting Course" , has come out
with the "4 U's". It is like a check list to make
sure you have a strong headline...strong enough to
make sure the readers want to read on.


Here are the "4 U's":


Urgent

leisure: "Dime sale on XXX",
Urgent: "Dime sale closing this mid-night".

Paint the picture of something important, big, and
heavy is pressing on you...fast. The point is to
force your readers to do something
immediately...or they might lose something. Think
about the bills you receive every month, nothing
can be more urgent!


Unique


Everyday, vanilla headline : "Free Sample of xxx"


Unique headline : "We spend $15,000 so that you
can try this...FREE!"


Most of us are essentially blind to the ads...we
have trained ourselves to look throught the noise
bad ads.


It is your job to throw them out of their zombie
state...make them surprise, make them awake, give
them something to brag in front of their friends.


Ultra-Specific


Vague headline: "The Fastest Way To Get Rich".


Specific headline : "How a college drop-out makes
$500/day before his smart-ass, first class honor
graduated classmate gets his first promotion...if
ever"

Make sure what you say is related to the reader's
life.

You can describe a heart-pounding, sweat-soaking
love scene in every minute details to a 4 years
old, and you have a boring listener.
On the other hand, even if just mention the name
of his favourite cartoon, all the vivid
images come to his mind immediately.


Know your prospect.


Useful

Useless headline: "101 ways to turn water into
steam...without electricity and fire...under 5
minutes"

Useful healine: "Read me if you want to make more
money"


Which one is gonna get more click?

(Ok. Maybe the first one...I don't know because I
haven't tried it out...but you get the idea...if
you apply all the bell and whistles in the first
example to the second, you can have explosive
responds.)


Stress the benefits to the readers.
#edge #hyperresponsive #masterson #michael #rate #response #side #tip
  • Profile picture of the author Harlan
    There is no such person as Michael Masterson.

    His name is Mark Ford.
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    • Profile picture of the author Rezbi
      Originally Posted by Harlan View Post

      There is no such person as Michael Masterson.

      His name is Mark Ford.
      Not that, again, Harlan, plenty of people use pen names and pseudonyms.
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    • Profile picture of the author celestrist
      Originally Posted by Harlan View Post

      There is no such person as Michael Masterson.

      His name is Mark Ford.
      This I didn't know.

      Glad that you point it out.

      However, a rose by any other name smell as sweet.
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  • Profile picture of the author max5ty
    Thanks for taking the time to post some useful information.

    It's always interesting to read new hints.
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    • Profile picture of the author BartsTreasures
      Here's another handy acronym... FIGS

      Fear of loss
      Instant Gratification
      Greed
      Sense of Urgency

      If your copy presents all of these, you are well on your way.
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  • Profile picture of the author celestrist
    Well, here is more tips on copywriting - from the master
    Michael Fortin himself. (Maybe Harlan can enlighten us again
    by telling us whether this is a real name. LoL)

    1. UPWORDS Formula

    “Universal picture words or relatable, descriptive sentences.”

    “Up words” are picture words, mental imagery, metaphors, analogies, examples, allegories, etc so that all people in a given target market can quickly, easily, and intimately relate to and grasp, in their minds, your message and its meaning.

    2. QUEST Formula

    Qualify, Understand, Educate, Stimulate, and Transition.

    As if your readers are going “on a quest” so to speak, it’s the process your prospects go through when reading your sales copy. In addition to the famous AIDA formula used in advertising (i.e., attention, interest, desire, then action), it guides people as they progress through your copy until they take the prescribed action.

    3. FAB Formula

    Features, Advantages, and Benefits.

    Simply, this one is to not only help remember but also understand what true benefits are. Features are what products have. Advantages (what people often mistakenly think are benefits) are what those features do. But benefits are what they mean — at a personal, intimate level. They are real benefits. You can also call them “end-results.”

    4. OATH Formula

    Oblivious, Apathetic, Thinking, or Hurting.

    It’s like asking, “Is your prospect ready to take an oath?” They are the four stages of your market’s awareness. From not knowing they have a problem at all, to desperately seeking a solution, your market falls in either one of these. Knowing this helps to determine not only how to write your copy but also how much copy is warranted.

    5. FORCEPS Formula

    Factual, Optical, Reversal, Credential, Evidential, Perceptual, and Social proof.

    Finally, these are the various proof elements you can include in your copy. While proof is always important in building trust, credibility, and believability, this is particularly helpful when your product is new or unheard of. Proof is the single greatest requirement in all sales copy, especially online — the lack thereof is the biggest killer of sales, too.

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