Need Private Feedback On Copy, Please
Hi ya'll!
I'm planning a product launch in October for a home study course I created a few years ago, and I've re-worked my copy based on some suggestions from J-Mo (who kindly chatted with me about my sales page on Skype--thanks Jason! You're uber-cool, dude, no matter what Frank says!)
Anyway, I was hoping to maybe coerce a few of you "top-notcher's" to pop over and view my sales page and then let me know what you think still may need work. (Jason's busy house-hunting, you know?)
But...I don't wanna link to my copy here on the forum. I hope it isn't bad form to ask this, but if you're willing to give it a look-see and then offer suggestions without giving away the farm, please send me a PM and I'll shoot you the URL.
Thanks muches!
Tina
I'm planning a product launch in October for a home study course I created a few years ago, and I've re-worked my copy based on some suggestions from J-Mo (who kindly chatted with me about my sales page on Skype--thanks Jason! You're uber-cool, dude, no matter what Frank says!)
Anyway, I was hoping to maybe coerce a few of you "top-notcher's" to pop over and view my sales page and then let me know what you think still may need work. (Jason's busy house-hunting, you know?)
But...I don't wanna link to my copy here on the forum. I hope it isn't bad form to ask this, but if you're willing to give it a look-see and then offer suggestions without giving away the farm, please send me a PM and I'll shoot you the URL.
Thanks muches!
Tina
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