Who wants a free Video Critique of their sales copy?

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I have some new video software I want to master so I am offering 3 warriors the chance to have their sales copy critiqued for free.

Only 3 rules:

1. Sales copy must already be complete and on a webpage anyone can access
2. I can share the copy critiques with anyone at a later date
3. You will provide me feedback (good and bad) on the critiques
3.5. You post your request here with the webpage included. First three get them.

Thanks.

Tim
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  • Profile picture of the author Dmitry
    Hi Tim,

    I'd like to hear your thoughts on the sales copy I'm asking for help on here:

    http://www.warriorforum.com/copywrit...e-request.html

    Thanks!
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  • Profile picture of the author greatbizideas
    Tim,

    Right timing....

    I need some help with my copy on my website.... I posted another thread but no one responded.

    I agree to all your conditions. Please visit my site Get Paid To Take Surveys Online

    Appreciate your offer...

    Thanks
    SA
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  • Profile picture of the author Daniel Scott
    A video on ball handling?

    Now that's just asking for trouble.

    -Dan
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    Always looking for badass direct-response copywriters. PM me if we don't know each other and you're looking for work.

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    • Profile picture of the author Craig Dawber
      Hi Tim,

      I would like to take you up on your offer for the salescopy critique.

      Here's my site:

      Your No.1 Source For Internet Marketing Private Label Video Tutorials

      Let me know if you'd like to proceed.

      Thanks

      Craig
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    • Profile picture of the author AlexMaroko
      Originally Posted by Daniel Scott View Post

      A video on ball handling?

      Now that's just asking for trouble.

      -Dan
      Wow...it just took me a good 30 seconds to get that....is that good or bad?
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      Sorry if this makes too much sense.

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      • Profile picture of the author Daniel Scott
        Originally Posted by AlexMaroko View Post

        Wow...it just took me a good 30 seconds to get that....is that good or bad?
        Alex,

        I admit my humor is super-sophisticated.

        It's rumored that men have died trying to comprehend my brilliance.

        You have survived, my friend; you have survived.

        And that is more than many men can attest to.

        -Dan
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        Always looking for badass direct-response copywriters. PM me if we don't know each other and you're looking for work.

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