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HEADLINE challenge!

by lakshaybehl
12 replies
OK...

So this is it!

Lets just get our creative juices flowing and start creating headlines that attract attention!

you know what headlines are, right?

So the idea is this: You have a product to sell on free targeted traffic methods which we all keep talking about in the war room!

And you need a headline for a sales letter and a squeeze page...

What would you use?

Now remember, Headlines are like Skirts... shorter the better.

Secondly- no point in using headlines that do not create "Absurd yet relevant" images in the minds of the reader!

ready, GO!

(Ill not particpiate as I'll keep scores, so to speak!)
#copywriting #headline challenge #headlines #secret traffic videos #traffic
  • Profile picture of the author lakshaybehl
    Strange, No one's up???

    Come on Warriors, Lets just see some headlines!
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    • Profile picture of the author Lance K
      Sorry, I'm a bit slow tonight. But are you asking for headlines for a "methods to get free targeted traffic" type product? That's what I understand your request to be, but just wanted to make sure before I offered one up and made myself look like a complete fool.
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      • Profile picture of the author Tirmizi
        Dear Lakash,

        what sort of healines are you talking about , lets be a bit more sepcific so it will be more interesting to see if within a niche whats sort of ideas can be poped up ... by other warriors
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        • Profile picture of the author Tsnyder
          I'll start...

          "The following information is intense... not recommended
          reading for small children or those with artificial pacemakers..."

          Tsnyder
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          • Profile picture of the author Tsnyder
            Here's one I used with great success in a direct mail piece.
            I've never used it on a website...

            "I earned more than $200,000 last year...
            You probably didn't"

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            • Profile picture of the author Dennis Sim
              Copywriting is not my cup of tea. But I'd like to give it a try.

              "Discover How A Broke Guy Generate Unstoppable of Targeted Traffic To His Website And Rake In Continuos Income Streams Without Spending A Single Dime!"

              - Dennis
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  • Profile picture of the author Steve Garrett
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    • Profile picture of the author Lance K
      Originally Posted by Steve Garrett View Post

      Since I started a post on this very topic, I figure i should join in on the fun as well.

      So, how about this one, it comes from the most successful direct mail piece I've ever done:

      Can I Have Your
      Opinion On This?

      That sets up so many things, and is possible for any market on the planet.

      This fails the WIIFM test.

      Especially given the fact that you're targeting people looking for information on getting free targeted traffic. So your headline isn't targeting a certain market, but rather you're counting on touching basic human psychology in anyone who reads it.

      The question MAY be powerful enough to pull them in due to curiosity, but you better get to the point quick with the follow up.

      Worth a test though, I suppose.
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  • Profile picture of the author Steven Fullman
    Originally Posted by lakshaybehl View Post

    Headlines are like Skirts... shorter the better.
    I partially disagree!

    A headline should be short enough to be interesting, but long enough to be exciting...



    ...Just like a skirt, in fact.

    Lulz,
    Steve
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    • Profile picture of the author Steven Fullman
      OK...so now I've got my 'observation' out of the way...

      "Free Traffic. No Strings Attatched"

      "Free Targeted Traffic...Without The Jam!"


      I've got a ton of ideas about this one...

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    • Profile picture of the author lakshaybehl
      Originally Posted by Steven Fullman View Post

      I partially disagree!

      A headline should be short enough to be interesting, but long enough to be exciting...



      ...Just like a skirt, in fact.

      Lulz,
      Steve
      Cool!

      Well... I just meant short enough to be readable and digestible!
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  • Profile picture of the author Zeus66
    Make Your Site the Low Spark of High Heeled Boys

    Yeah, so it's obscure as hell.... but I bet it'd make you curious and if you got it the pun might give you a chuckle or two. Or not. LOL
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