Landing page p.2

13 years ago

It looks very, very lovely. I am talking from a consumer's point of view BTW.

I love the idea of having boxes of what people will learn in each book.

I would amp it up, and be a little more bolder with it, but that's just me. If you want I can download them and give you some feedback.

The Dating/Sex niche is sooooo Huge!

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Souldja

13 years ago

Originally Posted by Joey89

It looks very, very lovely. I am talking from a consumer's point of view BTW.

I love the idea of having boxes of what people will learn in each book.

I would amp it up, and be a little more bolder with it, but that's just me. If you want I can download them and give you some feedback.

The Dating/Sex niche is sooooo Huge!

Thanks, yes, I want!! :rolleyes:

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Naeem Sikandar

13 years ago

Originally Posted by Joey89

It looks very, very lovely. I am talking from a consumer's point of view BTW.

I love the idea of having boxes of what people will learn in each book.

I would amp it up, and be a little more bolder with it, but that's just me. If you want I can download them and give you some feedback.

The Dating/Sex niche is sooooo Huge!

it's sexy....

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Souldja 13 years ago

Originally Posted by Naeem Sikandar

it's sexy....

What do you mean?
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Tracy411

13 years ago

Hi,

I actually really like this page

You have your opt-in box above the fold, which is good. You also give a clear, specific description of what your opt-ins will be receiving from you when they sign-up and there is a clear call to action.

A few points to ponder:

1- you say '...lovemaking techniques...' in your above the tile question. Maybe it is me, but that could lead people to wonder if you are providing tips about sex. If you are, then that's cool, but if not, I might suggest changing or omitting that part of the question.

2- This one is very minor, but you need to make these words plural by adding an 's' to 'relationship' and 'thing' in the description box for your first giveaway. Like I said, it is minor, but hey, if you see it, you might want to correct it.

3- I am not sure the pop-up box is a great idea here. Maybe other warriors could weigh in here. I know they are very common, and I have zero problem with their use. In fact, I know they can greatly increase opt-ins on blogs & websites. The only reason I question it here is because this is a simple one page landing page. Again, I would be interested to hear from other warriors who perhaps have tried doing this as you are as I haven't.

I hope this helps.

Great job! I wish you many subscribers

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zeekstern

13 years ago

The pop up box is too much. Your page has very little content, and 2 opt-in boxes. I would get rid of the pop up, or add a lot more content.

It appears that the keywords you are targeting is "relationship guides" or best relationship guides. Your first line talks about lovemaking techniques and romantic ideas. While they are certainly related, they can be 2 very different areas/niches.

You might want to consider split testing. In fact, you better split test

) But first, decide on what keywords you want to target. Go the lovemaking route or relationship, but not both at the same time.

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Souldja

13 years ago

Originally Posted by zeekstern

The pop up box is too much. Your page has very little content, and 2 opt-in boxes. I would get rid of the pop up, or add a lot more content.

It appears that the keywords you are targeting is "relationship guides" or best relationship guides. Your first line talks about lovemaking techniques and romantic ideas. While they are certainly related, they can be 2 very different areas/niches.

You might want to consider split testing. In fact, you better split test

) But first, decide on what keywords you want to target. Go the lovemaking route or relationship, but not both at the same time.

One man told me that I should using more option boxes..
You say I don't..)
This is my first email in newsletter:
http://i56.tinypic.com/6if8cy.png
What do You thunk about it?

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ChrisMcDonald

13 years ago

Originally Posted by Souldja

One man told me that I should using more option boxes..
You say I don't..)
This is my first email in newsletter:
http://i56.tinypic.com/6if8cy.png
What do You thunk about it?

I'll send you a PM

Chris

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Edie47 13 years ago

Good first try. The one thing I don't like is the pop-up box. I'm finding them all over the web and it annoys me so much I immediately leave the site no matter how much I want the information. Otherwise, as you listen to the suggestions of others - and they seem like good suggestions - ultimately it needs to be a page you are proud of.
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Trieu

13 years ago

Not the sort of squeeze page I have come across before. It would be good if you put some info above the fold so that the user dont have to scroll down before they opt in. Or maybe you could decide to just giveaway one guide instead?

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shireen

13 years ago

Hi:

Shireen here :-)

I think your landing page is great.

It has all the benefits & call to action.

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Souldja

13 years ago

My main topic in newsletter is lovemaking, sex techniques. But these ebooks about relationships, not sex. How can I combine it?

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ChrisMcDonald

13 years ago

PM sent, I believe I can help you

Chris

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guicoe11

13 years ago

i have a business opportunity available for you were i can promote your ebook and we can each get some of the subscribers. pm me or you can find me at guicoe11 at gmail

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corsleymaxwell

13 years ago

Look great! ... Excellent!

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stufftheme

13 years ago

from the appearance point of view it awesome and customers will like to visit it

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Souldja

13 years ago

Thanks a lot. And please I have last question now. One Warrior advice me:
"Each page of your website should only have one main focus. As soon as you start adding options for the user your message gets diluted. I suggest you create a separate page for each report you want to give away."
Should I do it, is it really more profitable? Can I concentrate on traffic now?

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