Should I remove a story from my squeeze page?

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Hi Warriors.
I asked people about my squeeze page. And some people said to me that I should remove my story and just go straight to the bullets. I don't know why? I think it will help me to build trust with visitors, won't it? Or maybe I'm too stupid to understand... please, explain me which way my squeeze page will work better..

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  • Profile picture of the author Presto Smith
    I think you could go either way with it. If you want to remove it you could always put your story into one of the follow-up emails from the squeeze page sign-up. Also, the best way to get the answer is to test it. Put up one landing page with the story and one without. Then run analytics to see which offers a higher conversion rate. That way your market will give you the answer.
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