Register Advertise with usHelp Desk Today's Posts Search

Showing results 1 to 1 of 1
Search took 0.24 seconds.
Search: Posts Made By: kenboss
Forum: Copywriting 25th March 2009, 01:11 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 552
Posted By kenboss
Re: Critique this headline

Hi David

The whole thing is much too wordy.

I would lose the question at the top - not necessarily because it's a question, but because it is limiting - it assumes that the reader has tried...
Showing results 1 to 1 of 1

 
Forum Jump


All times are GMT -6. The time now is 05:42 AM.