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Forum: Copywriting 22nd October 2012, 07:52 AM
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Posted By Steve The Copywriter
Re: Please critique my direct mail sales letter

To be fair your letter has got a reasonable "structure" - it's the wording that let's it down. It doesn't flow well.

The benefits are getting lost in the formality of your writing.

There's not...
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