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Forum: Copywriting 13th November 2014, 07:31 PM
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Posted By justinmahar
Re: [Critique request] Please give me your expert and BRUTALLY HONEST opinion.

George, have a look at these two videos by Eben Pagan.

"Rules for Online Marketing Beginners"
"7 Rules For Great Marketing Design"

... and take notes.

Then apply them.

Doing this will...
Forum: Copywriting 11th November 2014, 06:27 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 2,182
Posted By justinmahar
Re: [Critique request] Please give me your expert and BRUTALLY HONEST opinion.

Also, your headline (at the time of this post) says "STRANGE WordPress plugin WOWs your visitors - and generates opt-ins and sales like crazy, in just 1 minute..."

What's strange about it? I'm...
Forum: Copywriting 11th November 2014, 06:19 PM
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Views: 2,182
Posted By justinmahar
Re: [Critique request] Please give me your expert and BRUTALLY HONEST opinion.

Hey George, nice work on the landing page.

After I read the headline, I was left wondering... What takes 1 minute? To install it? Set it up? Configure it?

This benefit is in your product...
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