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Forum: Copywriting 12th January 2011, 11:52 PM
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Posted By Bruce Wedding
Re: First Press Release - Looking for Some Critique

Its damn good. You understand how to write a press release. All I'd do is edit passive sentences, substitute simple for complex sentences. (There's not too much of either)

Example:

"Also...
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