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Review my Website

by shaaam2007
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Hello freinds!

I am old member of this forum and have also delivered some useful ventures. You critics and suggestion always help to me take step toward perfection; My recent deliverable is http://www.mobilestore.pk. All friends are requested to review my website and give me suggestion to improve my website.
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  • Profile picture of the author lanotdesign
    HI shaaam2007
    I like your website, it''s both functional and well designed. The layout is okay, doesn't look crowded at all. I also like the color, not too bright but not boring as well. Good job.
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  • Profile picture of the author lem0n
    Hi shaaam2007!
    I like your main banner/header image and the simple/clean look of the layout. However I'd like to suggest making the first advertisement stand out a little bit more. For example when I go to the "samsung" page my first thought was that the search bar was also an ad. So perhaps you should add some contrast there to make sure people don't get confused and not search (thinking it just redirects them to an ad page etc.).

    Also I would somehow re-style the contact form. Add light color or something to the fields so they stand out a little more. Also you might want to give the ' placeholder="" ' attribute a try so you don't have to have the "example: ..." lines under the fields. HOWEVER the way it is now looks quite good too.

    All in all I think it's a good looking website with a simple user interface!
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    • Profile picture of the author shaaam2007
      Originally Posted by lem0n View Post

      Hi shaaam2007!
      I like your main banner/header image and the simple/clean look of the layout. However I'd like to suggest making the first advertisement stand out a little bit more. For example when I go to the "samsung" page my first thought was that the search bar was also an ad. So perhaps you should add some contrast there to make sure people don't get confused and not search (thinking it just redirects them to an ad page etc.).

      Also I would somehow re-style the contact form. Add light color or something to the fields so they stand out a little more. Also you might want to give the ' placeholder="" ' attribute a try so you don't have to have the "example: ..." lines under the fields. HOWEVER the way it is now looks quite good too.

      All in all I think it's a good looking website with a simple user interface!
      First I would thanks you for your precious time for my work. I gave 100% weight age of your opinion and nice analysis. In short "if i am not wrong" you said that ads colors and website element colors should be distinguish . Yes good point you raised. Only behind the idea of using color blend was that at max. there should be less mess on page. page should be sleek not shaggy at all. so I tried to my best to keep clean the page first. You are right if there is some text add on banner placeholder then user might confused.

      As for as form is concern I have almost 6 years experience of website development and user experience of a web application. the Word "example" I put that the target audience of my website have not much literate so I tried to choose easiest word to guide them some how this also made some uniqueness in form design .

      Thanks for so valuable suggestion
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  • Profile picture of the author apnavarun
    I liked your website design. The above fold is very good but below fold you can work for more perfection (just my opinion images are not too attractive )
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    • Profile picture of the author shaaam2007
      Originally Posted by apnavarun View Post

      I liked your website design. The above fold is very good but below fold you can work for more perfection (just my opinion images are not too attractive )
      Okey I will try to improve footer too. can you please put some example image that need be improved ?
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  • Profile picture of the author store6152
    Are you examine my site as well?
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  • Profile picture of the author jay walters
    Originally Posted by shaaam2007 View Post

    Hello freinds!

    I am old member of this forum and have also delivered some useful ventures. You critics and suggestion always help to me take step toward perfection; My recent deliverable is Mobile App Store for Free Downloads, Mobile Apps, Games, Wallpapers, Mobile Phones Daily Updated Prices. All friends are requested to review my website and give me suggestion to improve my website.
    Your site looks amazing and awesome. It is clean and great
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  • Profile picture of the author bolista
    Looks ok to me. good luck with it
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