A good review of the website

Benj25204 · 6th Sep 2015, 01:04 PM

Hello. Have a new ecommerce website and the conversion rate isnt too good. I know its early days but would love a quick review to see if there is anything worth changing. The site is Brand new electronics uk - Cameras tablets laptops and mobile phones – Bang-on-electronics

askmarcus · 9th Sep 2015, 07:57 AM

why there is 2 parts of bar?
top bar and side bar, use one of them will do...
and why there is a about us content at the main page?

missing the title of your webpage...
you might wanna refer to ebay or amazon... to see how they do the layout for their page...

iseultmca · 9th Sep 2015, 08:01 AM

I suggest bigger pictures and font, as it is the page is quite sparse which makes it look cheap.

KyleChapman · 9th Sep 2015, 11:48 AM

You're missing a strong headline. While a free warranty is great, it's just a perk. Unless that's your unique selling proposition that is... in which case I think you could still get a better headline.

I need to know why I should buy from you instead of your competition.

Benj25204 · 10th Sep 2015, 07:39 AM

Thanou thats some great feedback. Ill change some of them . thanks alot

AyiamDigital · 11th Sep 2015, 08:07 PM

Originally Posted by KyleChapman

You're missing a strong headline. While a free warranty is great, it's just a perk. Unless that's your unique selling proposition that is... in which case I think you could still get a better headline.

I need to know why I should buy from you instead of your competition.

Yes, you're definitely missing a strong headline. I read over some of your website to give you some to work with:

#1: "High-Quality Electronics. Excellent Customer Service. Best Prices in Town."

#2: "Great Service & Quality Electronics at the Lowest Price. Guaranteed."

Rajbir1994 · 11th Sep 2015, 08:22 PM

I didn't find anything while visiting your site. Looks really good. Carry on@

6th Sep 2015, 01:04 PM	#1
Benj25204 STA Mobiles Join Date: 2015 Posts: 15 Thanks: 3 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	A good review of the website Share on: Hello. Have a new ecommerce website and the conversion rate isnt too good. I know its early days but would love a quick review to see if there is anything worth changing. The site is Brand new electronics uk - Cameras tablets laptops and mobile phones – Bang-on-electronics
	UK supplier of brand new and used smartphones and electronics.http://www.stamobiles.co.uk

9th Sep 2015, 08:01 AM	#3
iseultmca Active Warrior Join Date: 2015 Location: Ireland Posts: 36 Thanks: 16 Thanked 14 Times in 14 Posts	Re: A good review of the website Share on: I suggest bigger pictures and font, as it is the page is quite sparse which makes it look cheap.
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9th Sep 2015, 11:48 AM	#4
KyleChapman Conversion Specialist Join Date: 2015 Location: United States Posts: 51 Thanks: 0 Thanked 10 Times in 10 Posts	Re: A good review of the website Share on: You're missing a strong headline. While a free warranty is great, it's just a perk. Unless that's your unique selling proposition that is... in which case I think you could still get a better headline. I need to know why I should buy from you instead of your competition.
	I've done conversion work for many big companies such as Expedia, The Boston Globe, Kobo Books, Firestone and more... Kyle Chapman - CEO - Conversion Marketing Services a Conversion Rate Optimization Firm

10th Sep 2015, 07:39 AM	#5
Benj25204 STA Mobiles Join Date: 2015 Posts: 15 Thanks: 3 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Re: A good review of the website Share on: Thanou thats some great feedback. Ill change some of them . thanks alot
	UK supplier of brand new and used smartphones and electronics.http://www.stamobiles.co.uk

11th Sep 2015, 08:22 PM	#7
Rajbir1994 Active Warrior Join Date: 2015 Location: Bangladesh Posts: 70 Thanks: 6 Thanked 7 Times in 7 Posts	Re: A good review of the website Share on: I didn't find anything while visiting your site. Looks really good. Carry on@

9th Sep 2015, 07:57 AM	#2
askmarcus HyperActive Warrior Join Date: 2015 Posts: 167 Thanks: 0 Thanked 12 Times in 12 Posts	Re: A good review of the website Share on: why there is 2 parts of bar? top bar and side bar, use one of them will do... and why there is a about us content at the main page? missing the title of your webpage... you might wanna refer to ebay or amazon... to see how they do the layout for their page...