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Hi Guys,

I have been working a long time on my product pages, i keep changing them up and am now going to create 2 more after this one in the same style. But before i do that i wanted to get some expert advice. Warrior advice !

My first product page (of three) is here: http://www.zinocovideo(dot)com/promotional-videos/

I focus on promotional video's i already have a couple of design in bu am always looking for things to create an extra value.

Of course i think my webpage is the best in the world lol but i like to be knocked out of my dream world time by time :p so give your best and most direct advice you got.

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Soryy, but I can't reach (from lithuania) your website.

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First of all - your site loads - this is NOT good - you need to take out any flash elements on your site to cater for a larger audience - some users may not have high speed internet. (I get that you are promoting video - and your homepage works so it may be worthwhile saying: "to hell with your conventional wisdom!" )

Secondly - the site is actually very good, the flowing of the scroll-down-the-page style of website is very good - the portfolio is very good - BUT:

a) The colour and font of the page just doesn't work. Try tweaking your font and colours of the text on the page - the site is two toned (blue and white) which works, but at the same time it simply doesn't - because of the font and text styling.

Try tweaking the font and structure - add in some more colour - or if you'd prefer to keep the blue then understand that different shades of GREY and SILVER go well with blue's too.

b) I'm getting 503's, missing pages on your links. - You need to make sure all your pages are online, up-to-date and ensure your SITE MAP is online and correctly structured.


Otherwise - I really like your site - and coming from a picky guy like me: that mean's a lot.

The overall layout, style and feel of the website is nice - it can be improved, but for a start it is better than 98% of the sites I am asked to critique - this is one I wouldn't redesign from scratch like most others.

Call to action - promotion of features - promotion of why we need your product - could be more. Include some better, full page info-graphics to let people know exactly why they need you - show them some stats, figures and facts.

Just little bits and pieces really (although all important) - the site is GOOD, work on your promotion/advertising.

Hope I answered your question,
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Originally Posted by time4vps View Post

Soryy, but I can't reach (from lithuania) your website.
Did you click the link or type it in your browser?

The OP has hyperlinked a dead link.

You need to replace the "(dot)" with a "." lol.


OP - it might be worthwhile fixing this
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Hey Bloodround,

You're quality is phenomenal! I love your portfolio!

Just remember it's about building a list of, in this case, maybe beginning entrepreneurs that need this stuff made so....

Create a capture page and start building your email list!

Create a relationship with them and build a community by promoting your Facebook page to them and have them start interacting with each other.

Then tell them about your service and how you can help them massively increase their business because a "Great" first impression is crucial and how video retains people's attention longer and attention is key for any business!

Just don't forget those rules... They are the basics! And you should have a great business ahead of you

And I love the site! Especially the colors I'd say make the info graphic bigger and get rid of or move the text below the info-graphic

Just my opinion though...

Hope this was helpful to you

Take care,

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Originally Posted by Anglo Shinobi View Post

First of all - your site loads - this is NOT good - you need to take out any flash elements on your site to cater for a larger audience - some users may not have high speed internet. (I get that you are promoting video - and your homepage works so it may be worthwhile saying: "to hell with your conventional wisdom!" )

Secondly - the site is actually very good, the flowing of the scroll-down-the-page style of website is very good - the portfolio is very good - BUT:

a) The colour and font of the page just doesn't work. Try tweaking your font and colours of the text on the page - the site is two toned (blue and white) which works, but at the same time it simply doesn't - because of the font and text styling.

Try tweaking the font and structure - add in some more colour - or if you'd prefer to keep the blue then understand that different shades of GREY and SILVER go well with blue's too.

b) I'm getting 503's, missing pages on your links. - You need to make sure all your pages are online, up-to-date and ensure your SITE MAP is online and correctly structured.


Otherwise - I really like your site - and coming from a picky guy like me: that mean's a lot.

The overall layout, style and feel of the website is nice - it can be improved, but for a start it is better than 98% of the sites I am asked to critique - this is one I wouldn't redesign from scratch like most others.

Call to action - promotion of features - promotion of why we need your product - could be more. Include some better, full page info-graphics to let people know exactly why they need you - show them some stats, figures and facts.

Just little bits and pieces really (although all important) - the site is GOOD, work on your promotion/advertising.

Hope I answered your question,
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Hi Anglo Shinobi,

The page load speed was this on the homepage or on the product page?

A) What type of font do you suggest? I'll definitely try the grey i never thought of it!

B) I have had this issues where my hosting company told me it was fine and was fixed but since you got it means i got to find out where this can come from, i 'll check the things you already told me to check, maby you got some more things for me to check?

I'll Add graphs underneath the intro text on the Product pages with stats of promotional videos!

Thanks bud =) I'll get back to work now
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Originally Posted by Adam Yunker View Post

Hey Bloodround,

You're quality is phenomenal! I love your portfolio!

Just remember it's about building a list of, in this case, maybe beginning entrepreneurs that need this stuff made so....

Create a capture page and start building your email list!

Create a relationship with them and build a community by promoting your Facebook page to them and have them start interacting with each other.

Then tell them about your service and how you can help them massively increase their business because a "Great" first impression is crucial and how video retains people's attention longer and attention is key for any business!

Just don't forget those rules... They are the basics! And you should have a great business ahead of you

And I love the site! Especially the colors I'd say make the info graphic bigger and get rid of or move the text below the info-graphic

Just my opinion though...

Hope this was helpful to you

Take care,

Adam
Thanks for the kind words =)!

Yeah i am getting Leadpages to start increasing my list building through my blog and PPC campaigns but i need to get my sales copy on par first =) The infographic is going to become a GIF where it show more precise what happens in the process, in an interactive way.
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