thedailyalbum

Hey all,

I'm relatively new to IM/Niche and am having trouble with landing page conversions. I'm hitting 3-6% on my CTRs but time spent on page isn't great and no sales yet. I'm posting a couple iterations I've been using -- please any critique would be great.

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Again, I'm open to suggestion.

Cheers,

Sean

Lance K

Sean,

The high bounce rate isn't surprising. Visitors have to be too actively involved. It took me a couple of seconds to figure out I had to click through your pictures on my own. The only reason I stuck around long enough to figure that out is because I visited your page via this thread asking for help. If I was a member of your target audience, I would have just gone on the the next Google listing as soon as your site confused me.

As for the 2 pages where visitors have to scroll down, I didn't find the copy compelling enough to keep me engaged to the point where I was enticed to scroll.

Hope that helps.

thedailyalbum

Thanks for the feedback -- I'll work on the copy and stick to the one-page format.

AzzamS

You headline 'Don't remove Tonsils, prevent them' Will not help someone who has got tonsils, most likely will be doing the search; so you ending up getting high bounce due to that headline alone.

Make it compelling and effective

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w3prince

There is lack of Call To Action Button on the landing page, you have to be specific about the product whether its FREE or PAID.

Use Compelling Call To Action Buttons like "Buy Your Copy Today" "Subscribe Now", if its paid one then mention payment methods and delivery time.

I hope it will work out..!
Good Luck..!

arillera

From a design perspective the site is clean but you have no clear call to action.

I am guessing from your pages you want people to click "download now" but its very tiny on your sidebar. I would make that a button instead in stand out color "DOWNLOAD NOW".

Also, when you click download now it takes you to a different url sendowl with no enticing reason to optin. Instead create a single page with a single purpose and get people to sign up with that.

Checkout the Survival Life site for some ideas (they are a million dollar a month blog):
Survival Life | Preppers | Survival Gear | Blog - Be Prepared with Survival Life

I create high converting pages for big clients so have some ideas on this

Hope this helps man and best of luck.

banwork

Hey Sean,

I went to take a look at your pages but all of them gave me 404 errors in Google chrome?

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