Really need help on Landing page - No conversion
 

Hi,

I would really really appreciate some help or feedback or guidance on what I can do to improve my product sales. I know this product can change thousands of lives and I am totally inept and getting the message out there - over 400 visits, not one conversion.

I don't want to blow my changes on clickbank - and my product is bombing big time

the landing page: What every cancer patient should know
Squeeze page for free series - Cancer Fighting Foods

I would be happy to work with someone on a split or pay for help to help me convert.

Thanks so much for any feedback or advice

Brigitta

Re: Really need help on Landing page - No conversion
 

Is your site down?

Server not found
Firefox can't find the server at What every cancer patient should know

Re: Really need help on Landing page - No conversion
 

I don't think so.

I just checked via chrome and google :( But other people have said they can't get in? I hope that isn't the problem but a lot of visitors are staying between 2 and10 minutes.

Darn. Don't know what to do about that :(

Re: Really need help on Landing page - No conversion
 

I think that you're target audience is the problem.

Your potential customers will have spent hours listening to highly qualified doctors, reading books and info online, and probably paying thousands for medical bills, and here you are with a eBook for $17.

What's more, is that you have spelling mistakes. You can;t even spell "members"

Find a different niche, cancer is super heavy.

Re: Really need help on Landing page - No conversion
 

Sorry about the spelling mistake. I am not sure how it crept through :( But I have fixed that. I will think about the niche but this is my life not just a niche so canning the whole project feels a little premature. But thanks for the feedback :)

Re: Really need help on Landing page - No conversion
 

Yeah, my suggestions would be to move your opt-in box above the fold so that people will not have to scroll to see it. Also, your headline leaves people hanging at the end. You should add a benefit to your headline, for example...

"Top Anti Cancer Foods and How to Use Them Stop Cancer In It's Tracks!"

That's not so great, but I just gave an example of what I'm talking about.

You also might want to make sure your traffic is highly targeted for this product.

Hope This Helps.

Re: Really need help on Landing page - No conversion
 

Brigitta,

I've done a quick critique for your sales letter you can view here:


Best,

-Ray Edwards

Re: Really need help on Landing page - No conversion
 

Thanks so much John D. That does help me a lot. I will try that :)

Re: Really need help on Landing page - No conversion
 

Wow. Seriously. Thank you so much Raydal. I will take it all on board. Thanks

Re: Really need help on Landing page - No conversion
 

There are so much text and broken images on the landing page it is an instant turn off and I clicked exit the moment I landed.

Work on the design of the landing page. Make sure you keep in mind the call to action should be most attractive and above the fold.

Re: Really need help on Landing page - No conversion
 

Your sites are down:

How do you expect any conversions when the site doesn't even load in a browser?

Re: Really need help on Landing page - No conversion
 

I was told the host I was using- Kajabi -was very reliable but apparently there is some doubt about that now. But thank you I have sent in an email requesting response.

Re: Really need help on Landing page - No conversion
 

I wanted to thank all of you for the very helpful advice and I will be working on the page to improve. I really really appreciate the help and valuable feedback