Can I have some feedback on my copy
Hi (name),
As I write this, more and more IPOs are announcing terms and are planning their debuts. Over the past two weeks, I have seen filings come down from some incredibly large companies such as Dole Brands, the fresh produce company, 2 Chinese backed ADR IPOs, a mineral mining company, a Chinese electric motor company, Frozen food co, Birds Eye, Vitamin Shoppe, National Beef and a Baltic drybulk Shipping company.
Not only have the filings come in at record pace but the quality of these companies are hardly speculative. These are proven money makers and in the public markets, they should fly.
I am very excited about this latest round of IPOs set for debut as the potential for them is incredible, not to mention the demand is growing by the minute.
In speaking with a lot of you, you've expressed the desire for us to offer a quarterly option for IPO reports instead of a pay-per IPO report. I realize this can be quite expensive in the long run, so I decided to offer you a promotional deal because you are a reader of or have been a subscriber of mine.
The quarterly option typically goes for $375 per quarter but because you are a subscriber or have been one in the past you won't be paying anywhere near this...
I am going to offer a one time promotional offer which will cover unlimited IPO reports for as long as you are a member and I'm offering this to you at $99 per quarter!!
This offer is a one time deal and will never be offered again from us and because of the price, we're only taking 25 subscribers. After this, the price will go back to $375 and will most likely never be available again.
Because of the demand and price of this IPO quarterly option, I am expecting it to sell out within just a few hours so I encourage you to strike quickly if you're interested.
If you're interested, please follow this link to our "Count Me In" section of the website where all you have to do is "RSVP" and we'll invoice you at a later date. AOL users, please copy and paste the following:
Have a great day.
Tim Fields
Editor In Chief
The Upper Class Investor
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