How Hot and Sexy are these Headlines?
I'm just beginning my journey of learning copywriting, and I'm working on my very first sales letter. I must say, I'm really enjoying this and I fully intend to learn this art/science and become a skilled copywriter. So, these headlines are all potential headlines I have thought up for a Jewelry set. To put them in perspective, the people reading this sales letter will have opted-in to receive a free necklace and will be presented with this very special one time offer to purchase a complete 18KT Gold Plated Jewelry Set for an "amazing price."
So here are some of my top candidate headlines that I'm working on. If any of you would be so kind as to chime in with your thoughts or suggestions I would be forever grateful!
Here they are:
This Offer Is Available For 30 Minutes Only And Then It Will Disappear FOREVER!
So, ladies and genetlemen, these are the headlines I've thus far developed. I'm still working on it, and my goal is to get it narrowed down to 3 or 4 good ones that I can test initially and then apply the proven formula for direct marketing success: test, test and test again!
So if you have any thoughts about these headlines, what is good about them and why, what is bad about them and why, or anything at all, I am going to make you a crazy amazing offer: for a limited time....available only to warriors...I'll give you 1,000,000 Karma Points. Yes, that's right: ONE MILLION KARMA POINTS just for contributing valuable information to that thread. But hurry, this is a limited time offer, and once the Universe runs out of Karma you'll be out of luck. Don't miss this once-in-a-lifetime opportunity!
Always looking for badass direct-response copywriters. PM me if we don't know each other and you're looking for work.
Always looking for badass direct-response copywriters. PM me if we don't know each other and you're looking for work.
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Mark@IMCopywriting.com