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Forum: Copywriting 6th March 2010, 12:11 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 953
Posted By ryanmberg
Re: Considering Hiring Copywriter

Not sure if closing leads over the phone would be profitable with what you're selling here ($100 product). I'm assuming you sold a higher ticket service like consulting when you were doing phone...
Forum: Copywriting 2nd March 2010, 11:35 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 978
Posted By ryanmberg
Re: Releasing My Book Online: Help Review My Salesletter

Hi Adebola,

Good advice from the others so far.

I'd also add that if your target market is Nigerians you should make it obvious when a Nigerian lands on the page that they know this site is...
Forum: Copywriting 1st March 2010, 09:42 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 839
Posted By ryanmberg
Re: I Can Take A Punch

I agree with travlinguy. The concept of the video is good, but the delivery could be improved. I don't like all the transitions... if you have to have transitions because it's hard to get good long...
Forum: Copywriting 29th October 2009, 05:21 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 875
Posted By ryanmberg
Re: How to write an 'early bird' squeeze page?

Hi Ashley,

The advice I gave above would work best if you were telling people on an existing list you have or your blog.... a group you already have a relationship with. Which I'm thinking after...
Forum: Copywriting 29th October 2009, 05:05 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 875
Posted By ryanmberg
Re: How to write an 'early bird' squeeze page?

Hi Ashley,

I think the key here is to build up people's curiosity.

Don't reveal the exact details of the product, but instead tease people about all the unique aspects of it and the benefits...
Forum: Copywriting 26th October 2009, 03:12 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 1,091
Posted By ryanmberg
Re: Latest Sales Page - Please Take a Look =)

First thing I would do if I were selling a health related product is get on some of Agora Publishing's lists and watch how they sell stuff. They are masters at grabbing attention, drawing people in...
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