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Forum: Copywriting 18th January 2013, 08:29 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 717
Posted By 1robert
Re: How a 30-second "change" doubled my client's sales

That's a catchy headline.

I was wondering did you try and test different numbers like...

How to Turn $500 into $500 Thousand With these
3 Stocks Below..."

You are good at writing headlines...
Forum: Copywriting 5th January 2013, 12:14 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,000
Posted By 1robert
Re: can you help me "de-muddyfy" this copy?

I would move the demo video right below the headline.

It looks like you have a good product, so I would just dive right in and show people how it works. This will get people hooked right away.
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 4th January 2013, 01:17 AM
Replies: 27
Views: 1,020
Posted By 1robert
Re: Advertising for traffic on a tight budget?

I would be careful buying solo ads.

They seam good at first, but you can lose a lot of money fast.

For example, you can buy 300 clicks at $150 so it appears your getting a good deal. But if...
Forum: Copywriting 31st August 2012, 01:16 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 648
Posted By 1robert
Re: Headline Innapropriate?

Congrats Gene :)

This is a HUGE improvement.

I was shocked to see how much better your letter is now.

Nicely done!
Forum: Copywriting 30th August 2012, 11:41 PM
Replies: 45
Views: 2,117
Posted By 1robert
Re: I really NEED some serious feedback on this site.

The headline and deck copy do nothing to get my attention. Its not your fault, writing a sales letter is hard work.

The first thing I would do is break up your sentences to make your copy more...
Forum: Copywriting 29th August 2012, 05:18 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 883
Posted By 1robert
Re: If it's crap, rip it. If it's good, pat me on the back...

The name of your product is catchy and the sales letter is excellent for your first attempt.

The design is excellent too.

You should have no problems selling this product :)
Forum: Copywriting 22nd August 2012, 02:15 AM
Replies: 33
Views: 1,293
Posted By 1robert
Re: Copy Critique Please

This product is interesting Gene, but the letter does need some work.

If this was my letter, I would make it look like an article by placing testimonials on the right side of the page.

You...
Forum: Copywriting 21st August 2012, 12:13 AM
Replies: 63
Views: 1,875
Posted By 1robert
Re: Which of These Book Titles Work Best?

The titles above reminded me of Joe Vitale and his famous book "Hypnotic Writing - How to Seduce and Persuade Customers with Only Your Words"

In his book he has a section called - 30 Ways to...
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