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Forum: Search Engine Optimization 28th August 2011, 07:31 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 461
Posted By Mel White
Re: Can I Sell De-Indexed Articles?

April's giving you some excellent advice -- do see if they were put up somewhere else.

I agree on the rewrite as well -- even a quick tour through an article spinner will help. And if they're...
Forum: Copywriting 28th August 2011, 06:52 PM
Replies: 40
Views: 1,521
Posted By Mel White
Re: Please Critique My First Draft

I think that's better, yes.... but it's "on demand" (no dash in there.) And no comma after the word "want" -- it goes after the word "days".
Forum: Copywriting 31st July 2011, 11:23 AM
Replies: 29
Views: 890
Posted By Mel White
Re: Critique Request-Squeeze Page currently converting less than 1%!

Ken's got some very good suggestions.

Now... I'm (in real life) your target market (a woman in the age range you're trying to reach) -- here's what I saw.

* page didn't load instantly
*...
Forum: Offline Marketing 24th July 2011, 12:26 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 623
Posted By Mel White
Re: Feedback Needed, Huge Prize!

Frankly, I can't tell what's being offered. You ramble about a bit, then throw in some testimonials (which shouldn't come before an offer.) I don't see a hard concept that I can comment about...
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