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Forum: Copywriting 23rd September 2011, 03:48 AM
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Posted By LeonForLinks
Re: Critique request :)

I'd definitely shorten your headlines and get rid of the "__?__" stuff.

I actually think emphasizing it is cheaper to do it yourself is totally superfluous - it is really obvious that doing it...
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