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Forum: Copywriting 7th September 2009, 09:48 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,311
Posted By green1
Re: Critique Request: Unlocking Writer's Block (Hypnosis Product)

It's quite long... I'm curious as to whether the copywriters here think the story he's told is compelling enough to hold the reader's attention? Personally I didn't find it all that interesting.

I...
Forum: Mind Warriors 6th September 2009, 03:56 AM
Replies: 65
Views: 2,877
Posted By green1
Re: My most favorite quote

Oh, I couldn't pick one but here are two:

"There's nothing in a caterpillar that tells you it's going to be a butterfly" - Buckminster Fuller

"This is the real secret of life: to be completely...
Forum: Copywriting 5th September 2009, 08:20 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,367
Posted By green1
Re: Can you help me improve my sales letter?

Fair enough, DT, thank you for taking the time to correct me.

o.k., you've just qualified the price for me but if I were one of your prospects, my doubts about your advertising claims would still...
Forum: Copywriting 4th September 2009, 02:36 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 1,202
Posted By green1
Re: Are these sentences too long to you?

Yes, you need to remove extraneous ideas from your writing. For example, in this sentence: "I’m talking serious cash that, if only you had it resting in your bank account this very moment, could be...
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