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Forum: Copywriting 5th February 2012, 10:02 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 855
Posted By Don Schenk
Re: Could you please critique my sales letter?

* How to get a .COM name for your website - so people will find your site quickly, because most people search for a .com first

* How to put your website online - I will show you how easy it is to...
Forum: Copywriting 4th February 2012, 08:07 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 855
Posted By ewenmack
Re: Could you please critique my sales letter?

Melanie,

My first reaction, "10 hours to build a website?"

A totally non techy person like me can have a Wordpress site,
using templates and free instruction videos on Youtube, up and running...
Forum: Copywriting 4th February 2012, 02:36 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 855
Posted By Ross Bowring
Re: Could you please critique my sales letter?

Maybe it's just me but ten hours seems like an awfully long time.

You can watch Titanic back-to-back three times in ten hours. How depressing.

Maybe you can find a statistical "average" of how...
Forum: Copywriting 4th February 2012, 11:32 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 855
Posted By NickN
Re: Could you please critique my sales letter?

To add to Andrew's point, always put yourself in your prospects' shoes and ask, "What's in it for ME?"

For example, say you're buying a high-definition TV. One of its features is 1080p. Now, if...
Forum: Copywriting 4th February 2012, 11:19 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 855
Posted By Andrew Gould
Re: Could you please critique my sales letter?

To uncover benefits, you need to think about what the feature does for the customer, what the advantage is of having it, why it exists, etc.

So for your first one, what's the benefit of having a...
Forum: Copywriting 4th February 2012, 10:41 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 855
Posted By Steve The Copywriter
Re: Could you please critique my sales letter?

Hi Melanie,

Yes your bullets need to be spiced up.

Sorry I haven't got the time to do it.

But try the FAB formula.

Feature - Advantage -Benefit
Forum: Copywriting 4th February 2012, 10:02 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 855
Posted By kayshaw
Re: Could you please critique my sales letter?

Hi Melanie,
Just took a look at your webpage and its off to a good start! I always like to bold my subheadings or certain words in red that you want to draw a lot of attention to, but that's just...
Forum: Copywriting 3rd February 2012, 07:57 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 855
Posted By sethczerepak
Re: Could you please critique my sales letter?

The copy isn't that bad for starters, it should convert. The problem is, I'm looking at this and thinking: "If my website is going to look like this one, I'm out."

Keep the copy and get a decent...
Forum: Copywriting 2nd February 2012, 06:12 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 855
Posted By homenotion
Re: Could you please critique my sales letter?

Hey Melanie,

You're on the right track, you just need to pack a little more punch.

Your header is where it all starts so make it appealing. For example;

"How You Can Create your Own...
Forum: Copywriting 2nd February 2012, 05:34 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 855
Posted By thetrafficguy
Re: Could you please critique my sales letter?

Mr Subtle is right on.

If you're gonna teach someone to make a website first of all yours needs to look better than it is.

Sorry but its the truth.

There are plenty of templates out there...
Forum: Copywriting 2nd February 2012, 05:22 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 855
Posted By Mark Andrews
Re: Could you please critique my sales letter?

To help you Melanie (following on from Rick's comment)...

A feature is one of the components, facts, or functions of your product or service. Describe what it does, how it works, or what it...
Forum: Copywriting 2nd February 2012, 04:17 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 855
Posted By RickDuris
Re: Could you please critique my sales letter?

Melanie,

Here's what I suggest:

1. No offense, but your webpage here looks rather dated. Not "sexy" at all, like the kind of websites you're describing.

People want a cool looking website. ...
Forum: Copywriting 2nd February 2012, 04:15 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 855
Posted By NickN
Re: Could you please critique my sales letter?

Mr. Subtle's post is kinda harsh, but he has a point: You're not going to instill people with confidence in your website-design system when your site looks so... blah.
Forum: Copywriting 2nd February 2012, 03:47 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 855
Posted By Mr. Subtle
Re: Could you please critique my sales letter?

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Forum: Copywriting 2nd February 2012, 03:46 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 855
Posted By Mark Pescetti
Re: Could you please critique my sales letter?

Hey Melanie!

So I read until you introduced the system...

...And I stopped because the copy, tone and organization is too far off.

I would start by immediately introducing the system/brand...
Forum: Copywriting 2nd February 2012, 03:43 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 855
Posted By Hans Klein
Re: Could you please critique my sales letter?

Hi Melanie...

You're on the right track. But, here are some notes for you to make your sales copy even better...

First... the biggest objection you face is... "I can't do it." Your target...
Forum: Copywriting 30th January 2012, 09:55 PM
Replies: 51
Views: 5,896
Posted By BrianMcLeod
Re: Best Font to Use?

There's no such thing as "best".

But there are some typefaces that are easy to depend on. And lately, these are what I've been turning to mostly:
...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 23rd January 2012, 12:03 AM
Replies: 33
Views: 985
Posted By Gengis
Re: Do You Have Any Unfinished Projects?

Great post Melanie.. This is definitely a wake up call! I have a couple i haven't finished
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 21st January 2012, 10:44 AM
Replies: 46
Views: 2,396
Posted By harrydog
How to use Linked in for Success

Hi Everyone
sometimes its strange where your biggest breaks come from. I have started using Linkedin for my Bricks and Mortar business and have spent quite a bit of time building up my profile and...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 19th January 2012, 06:47 PM
Replies: 275
Views: 12,801
Posted By BigNorm
Re: MegaUpload Shut down by Feds

I'm surprised by peoples reactions. It was a file storing site which allowed people to download copyrighted files. The site was breaking the law.....and before people say "The powers of SOPA are...
Forum: Search Engine Optimization 5th January 2012, 10:17 AM
Replies: 654
Views: 64,677
Posted By NickWatson
The EXACT strategy i use to rank for ANY KEYWORD!

(SEE FURTHER ON IN THE THREAD FOR A LIVE CASE STUDY)

Hi guys,

I’ve seen a lot of talk about SEO and link building strategies lately, and thought I’d chip in and give you guys the EXACT SEO...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 30th January 2011, 04:19 PM
Replies: 42
Views: 8,538
Posted By marcuslim
Re: Does anyone have a list of evergreen niches?

The 3 mega niches -
Health, Wealth, Relationships.

Then identify sub niches within these mega niches.
Examples
Health - Weight Loss, Muscle gain
Wealth - Internet Marketing
Relationships -...
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