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Forum: Copywriting 3rd November 2014, 03:08 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,481
Posted By JakeFromStateFarm
Re: Copywriting Critique Results

One more question everyone:

Is there a single number of pieces you should mail in order to be certain that patterns you notice among customers is statistically significant?

Thank you.
Forum: Copywriting 1st November 2014, 05:19 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,481
Posted By JakeFromStateFarm
Re: Copywriting Critique Results

Hi everyone, thanks for your responses. My apologies for my delayed response, I have been getting over the flu recently.

Copy Nazi: Thanks for the tip on not selling from my heels, and I will most...
Forum: Copywriting 29th October 2014, 09:02 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,481
Posted By JakeFromStateFarm
Copywriting Critique Results

Hey guys, I have some results and would like your input on how to improve it.

Previous post is here http://www.warriorforum.com/copywriting/992706-copy-critique-please.html

Attached you'll find...
Forum: Offline Marketing 21st September 2014, 01:39 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 856
Posted By JakeFromStateFarm
Re: Prospecting & Lead Generation: Is there really a difference?

Lead Generation changes the mood of the conversation. If I sent you a piece of mail or you read an ad of mine and then you made the overture to me, it's inherently less adversarial.

Prospecting...
Forum: Copywriting 17th September 2014, 09:55 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,959
Posted By JakeFromStateFarm
Forum: Copywriting 15th September 2014, 02:29 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,515
Posted By JakeFromStateFarm
Re: Copy Critique Please

Copy Nazi: I was going to send a dollar bill FedEx letter along with my book that's professionally printed (perfect binding, looks like the smaller version Dummies Guides you see at Kinkos) and then...
Forum: Copywriting 15th September 2014, 08:47 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,515
Posted By JakeFromStateFarm
Re: Copy Critique Please

AMuscle: I think the all-cost will be right around $38, when I first heard about that phone idea I was like "what the hell, that is amazing!" but you can find them relatively cheaply at Tracfone's...
Forum: Copywriting 14th September 2014, 08:57 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 2,422
Posted By JakeFromStateFarm
Re: If you had 30 days to learn copywriting...

I would read all the books Halbert recommended, and add Dan Kennedy's Ultimate Sales Letter 2nd Edition, John Caples "How to Make Your Advertising Make Money" and also Dan Kennedy's No BS Direct...
Forum: Copywriting 14th September 2014, 07:33 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,515
Posted By JakeFromStateFarm
Re: Copy Critique Please

I'm wearing khakis :)

I'm going to be using a bank bag and a trash can, funny you say that

My 4th step will probably be a Tracfone that comes with 20 preloaded minutes.

I have a letter from...
Forum: Copywriting 14th September 2014, 05:11 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,515
Posted By JakeFromStateFarm
Re: Copy Critique Please

Hey guys, thank you very much for all the great advice and I wanted to apologize for being unclear about some things.

I am sending this campaign to expired listings of apartment buildings and I am...
Forum: Copywriting 14th September 2014, 04:37 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,515
Posted By JakeFromStateFarm
Copy Critique Please

Hi everyone,

Attached you'll find a copy of the lead generation letter I've written for my real estate brokerage.

Please let me know any critiques you have, and please don't be kind as I know...
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