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Can you help me review my Facebook Page?

by glinda2011
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I have set up a Facebook Page GlindasBlueprint.com - Website - Dryden, ON - IFrame | Facebook and I want to know about what I need to improve in it. Need your opinion on this.
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  • Profile picture of the author sweety555
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  • Profile picture of the author Jarrod Morris
    Your banner on your page seems to be really squeezed, making the text quite narrow and difficult to read.

    Also (this is in no way a jab) if you're promoting that you can teach someone how to make $365,000 in a year, I'd invest in some super nice graphic design so that your advertising better reflects your success.
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  • Profile picture of the author leppozdrav
    Also (this is in no way a jab) if you're promoting that you can teach someone how to make $365,000 in a year, I'd invest in some super nice graphic design so that your advertising better reflects your success.
    Sounds good to me. If you can really make $365bla bla bla, You could have hired a better designer to create a good niche page. I personally as a designer (www. udgraphia . com) dont find the page interesting!
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    Hard to read
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  • Profile picture of the author francischan35
    make the fonts bigger..join more groups..
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  • Profile picture of the author Jhones
    Go to Involver.com and see the different tabs for business fan page,there are attractive APPs and design for facebook page more over they are free.
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  • Profile picture of the author supershoesclub
    just add more friends on facebook. and ad more interesting content into your facebook page.thus if someone like it,they will review your page.
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  • Profile picture of the author Karen Barr
    You definitely need to invest in a better header graphic.

    The "click this image to get your free videos" image has been compressed and is not good quality.

    I would replace that with a headline that will make your readers desperate to click through and watch the videos.

    then under that image/headline, format the list of videos nicely, e.g. instead of "video-01-overview" write "Video 1: Overview - An introduction to the course" or whatever.

    You're giving the potential customers a lot of hoops to jump through, too. First they have to like the page, then they have to go somewhere else, then they have to fill in a form, then presumably confirm opt-in, then return to the site. I would consider putting your opt-in form directly on the Facebook page. People are lazy and if they have to go somewhere else to do something, a lot of them will not bother!

    If you're looking to add more fans to your page, check the link in my sig, you can get some free from me
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  • Profile picture of the author puedall
    Hello, Glinda
    You should check IWIPA application on facebook, this is what i use for my pages and they are beautiful. It is free, but if you want more options you can get premium.
    Although, free is just fine.
    This is the link to my facebook page, if you like what you see, just get the application.

    Create a Website With Free Programs In One Week With Geena Antunovic - Welcome | Facebook
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