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Forum: Copywriting 10th June 2010, 12:13 PM
Replies: 78
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Posted By Mr. Enthusiastic
Re: In Your Face Crapping Headline

Well, that's what you should use as the basis for your next attempt.

For example if you want to stay with the monster metaphor:

GIVE YOUR MONEY TO THE BEAST WHO GIVES YOU BACK VIRTUALLY...
Forum: Copywriting 9th June 2010, 06:14 PM
Replies: 78
Views: 3,460
Posted By Mr. Enthusiastic
Re: In Your Face Crapping Headline

Now there's a headline for a New Yawkeh!
The Original Rejection Line (http://www.rejectionline.com/press/observer.html)
Forum: Copywriting 9th June 2010, 01:37 PM
Replies: 78
Views: 3,460
Posted By Mr. Enthusiastic
Re: In Your Face Crapping Headline

I'm so sorry about that. :eek:
Forum: Copywriting 9th June 2010, 12:40 PM
Replies: 78
Views: 3,460
Posted By Mr. Enthusiastic
Re: In Your Face Crapping Headline

If it's an ad for a Honda Element (the ultimate surfer-mobile), they could hose down the inside too while they're at it.

To stay kind of on topic, what if the beauty in the ad was a foreign...
Forum: Copywriting 9th June 2010, 12:31 PM
Replies: 78
Views: 3,460
Posted By Mr. Enthusiastic
Re: In Your Face Crapping Headline

Rich, I join the chorus of the dismayed.

The first line says that FOREX has not been easy to crack, until now.
Therefore I expect the next line will explain that FOREX has now been cracked.
The...
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