Please Review My Website Design

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hi

i'm still training but i designed for now two websites and i need your opinion about designs to know what's my mistakes and what i can add for design

my first design https://www.behance.net/gallery/3865...oper-Portfolio

​my second design https://www.behance.net/gallery/4012...design-concept

and Thank you
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  • Profile picture of the author DenniseTan
    The first design looks good but it lacks your personal logo. You should create a logo of you as a graphic designer. Th font that you used on your tagline is a bit tacky, try using another font. But all in all, it looks nice.

    The 2nd design, I'm guessing that's it's a parallax type of website(?) It looks good. Really.
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    • Profile picture of the author saeed Dameer
      Originally Posted by DenniseTan View Post

      The first design looks good but it lacks your personal logo. You should create a logo of you as a graphic designer. Th font that you used on your tagline is a bit tacky, try using another font. But all in all, it looks nice.

      The 2nd design, I'm guessing that's it's a parallax type of website(?) It looks good. Really.
      Thank you very much for your feedback i will focus on it in the next works

      about the 2nd design, yes it's a TV series

      thanks again for feedback
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  • Profile picture of the author Sara20
    Hello, I like both of them, but I want to suggest you improve your web design! I' m the biggest fun of " The Dame of Thrones" and I like it!!!
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    • Profile picture of the author saeed Dameer
      Originally Posted by Sara20 View Post

      Hello, I like both of them, but I want to suggest you improve your web design! I' m the biggest fun of " The Dame of Thrones" and I like it!!!
      thank you for you feedback
      and i'm proud because you like them

      but what's problem with design so i can improve it ?
      i really need to know my mistakes to work on it in the coming work
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  • Originally Posted by saeed Dameer View Post

    hi

    i'm still training but i designed for now two websites and i need your opinion about designs to know what's my mistakes and what i can add for design

    my first design https://www.behance.net/gallery/3865...oper-Portfolio

    ​my second design https://www.behance.net/gallery/4012...design-concept

    and Thank you
    Hello Saeed,

    I have review both page and here are my feedback:


    Your website design looks good, it is fully responsive. If following add-ons can be applied it will tell story of website very clearly.

    **Put search button in mobile view with search text field.
    **On https://www.behance.net/gallery/4012 page background image is not visible. It can be solved by putting this page code common and applied on each page by including it.
    **For first time visitor it is difficult to find the actual story of this website. So, It is suggested to put slider on home page instead of "Showcase & Discover Creative Work" and sign up button.
    **Website has rich content but need to show them on home page. For me it took too much time to understand the theme of website.
    **If you do not want to do any changes, just do one thing put home page's navigation bar and other information on single page and include that on every page. So on every page navigation bar sign option will remain same. Only their below page's content will change.
    **Show images in modal and slider instead of scroll down.
    **Add scroll on top button in left side of page.
    **Use a logo.
    **Create navigation bars based on major category or on home page put images in particular division based on category heading.

    Hope that helps. Good luck

    Thanks,
    Sumit
    247easysupport:Outsourcing Technical Support and IT Services
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    • Profile picture of the author saeed Dameer
      Originally Posted by sumit@247easysupport View Post

      Hello Saeed,

      I have review both page and here are my feedback:


      Your website design looks good, it is fully responsive. If following add-ons can be applied it will tell story of website very clearly.

      **Put search button in mobile view with search text field.
      **On https://www.behance.net/gallery/4012 page background image is not visible. It can be solved by putting this page code common and applied on each page by including it.
      **For first time visitor it is difficult to find the actual story of this website. So, It is suggested to put slider on home page instead of "Showcase & Discover Creative Work" and sign up button.
      **Website has rich content but need to show them on home page. For me it took too much time to understand the theme of website.
      **If you do not want to do any changes, just do one thing put home page's navigation bar and other information on single page and include that on every page. So on every page navigation bar sign option will remain same. Only their below page's content will change.
      **Show images in modal and slider instead of scroll down.
      **Add scroll on top button in left side of page.
      **Use a logo.
      **Create navigation bars based on major category or on home page put images in particular division based on category heading.

      Hope that helps. Good luck

      Thanks,
      Sumit
      247easysupport:Outsourcing Technical Support and IT Services
      hank you very very very much for your time, I really appreciate this, in the coming works i will work in this notes and i will try to don't have mistakes
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      • Originally Posted by saeed Dameer View Post

        hank you very very very much for your time, I really appreciate this, in the coming works i will work in this notes and i will try to don't have mistakes
        You're welcome Saeed

        Please let me know if you need any further assistance.
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        • Profile picture of the author saeed Dameer
          Originally Posted by sumit@247easysupport View Post

          You're welcome Saeed

          Please let me know if you need any further assistance.
          i really need your assistance and your review for my coming works

          so if you can give me your facebook account or something like that I'll be thankful but if this does not bother you
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  • Profile picture of the author clemsonwebdesign
    The first page looks like any other bootstrap portfolio theme. The ability graphs look cool but provide absolutely no worthwhile content or seo. The second page the CTA buttons dont stand out at all. Some of the buttons look misplaced and the margins, space seems off on a few of them.
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    • Profile picture of the author saeed Dameer
      Originally Posted by clemsonwebdesign View Post

      The first page looks like any other bootstrap portfolio theme. The ability graphs look cool but provide absolutely no worthwhile content or seo. The second page the CTA buttons dont stand out at all. Some of the buttons look misplaced and the margins, space seems off on a few of them.
      Thank you for your feedback and about CTA buttons i will find another way in the coming works
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  • Profile picture of the author JaMoke
    Hey Saeed, nice start to your sites, better than most beginners.

    Work on your typography, Right now you kind of just have basic type faces, switch it up use some bold fonts for headings on your personal page. Look at the "Learn More" buttons on the GOT page, This should probably be similar to the main text (look at About) A personal logo would be good for your branding as well. Also, instead of using just a radial gradient on your page add a texture to the background. Just some tips, you will improve as you do more sites, good luck.
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    • Profile picture of the author saeed Dameer
      Originally Posted by JaMoke View Post

      Hey Saeed, nice start to your sites, better than most beginners.

      Work on your typography, Right now you kind of just have basic type faces, switch it up use some bold fonts for headings on your personal page. Look at the "Learn More" buttons on the GOT page, This should probably be similar to the main text (look at About) A personal logo would be good for your branding as well. Also, instead of using just a radial gradient on your page add a texture to the background. Just some tips, you will improve as you do more sites, good luck.
      Thank you for your feedback
      i added some textures but in the next works i will add more and i will work on fonts

      thanks again for your tips and time that's will help me
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