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by Lucas Adamski
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#graphic #headlines #pack
  • Profile picture of the author Tim R
    How does one 'secretly exploit' graphics?

    Are the graphics being taken advantage of without their knowledge?
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    • Profile picture of the author Lucas Adamski
      Originally Posted by Tim R View Post

      How does one 'secretly exploit' graphics?

      Are the graphics being taken advantage of without their knowledge?
      I wanted to emphasize the exclusivity & uniqueness, exploit because these are new and most people would not have access to them, potentially giving them a better advantage.
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      • Profile picture of the author angiecolee
        Originally Posted by Lucas Adamski View Post

        I wanted to emphasize the exclusivity & uniqueness, exploit because these are new and most people would not have access to them, potentially giving them a better advantage.
        He wasn't asking you to justify the word choice. He was pointing out a more common interpretation of that phrase. I had the exact same reaction.

        If it doesn't make sense, don't be afraid to cut it.
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  • Profile picture of the author Cam Connor
    Lucas, you should ask in the Copywriting section for this one.

    You could get something better I'm sure, but #3 is the best of those ones.

    Edit: Also it should be "which will transform you..."
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    • Profile picture of the author angiecolee
      Originally Posted by Cam Connor View Post

      Edit: Also it should be "which will transform you..."
      Only if your audience is offended by incorrect grammar. Write like they talk, not like an English prof.
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      • Profile picture of the author Cam Connor
        Originally Posted by angiecolee View Post

        Only if your audience is offended by incorrect grammar. Write like they talk, not like an English prof.
        I know the deal with grammar and copywriting... but there's never a point to incorrect grammar that serves no purpose other than just being a mistake. It's not a big deal, but Lucas isn't a Native English speaker, so I was just helping.

        Best,
        -Cam

        Edit: And nice job, Lucas
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  • Profile picture of the author Raydal
    I'll go with the first half of 3#. The last part is a little over the top and
    not believable.

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  • Profile picture of the author Shaun Everett
    I'm new here but Adam I really like number 3.
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  • Profile picture of the author Lucas Adamski
    Thanks guys, i split tested a new headline and it's currently a winner at 11.23% conv:

    Never Wait For Your Graphic's Guy Ever Again With 857+ Conversion-Boosting Graphic Templates


    Swipe me... converted at 10%.
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    • Profile picture of the author ewenmack
      Originally Posted by Lucas Adamski View Post

      Thanks guys, i split tested a new headline and it's currently a winner at 11.23% conv:

      Never Wait For Your Graphic's Guy Ever Again With 857+ Conversion-Boosting Graphic Templates


      Swipe me... converted at 10%.
      Lucas, do you know why that headline beat out others?

      Knowing the reason becomes your biggest pay-off because you understand the hidden cause
      and therefore use the same principle in all your other headlines until you stop fogging a mirror.

      Does anybody else see the hidden reason?

      Best,
      Doctor E. Vile
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      • Profile picture of the author BudaBrit
        Originally Posted by ewenmack View Post

        Lucas, do you know why that headline beat out others?

        Knowing the reason becomes your biggest pay-off because you understand the hidden cause
        and therefore use the same principle in all your other headlines until you stop fogging a mirror.

        Does anybody else see the hidden reason?

        Best,
        Doctor E. Vile
        Pain.

        For me, at least.

        One point, though. I don't know whether you tested this with and without the 's on the end of Graphic, but my impression is that it's a bit of a...stop.

        Otherwise, it's spot on for me. Simple.
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      • Profile picture of the author Cam Connor
        Originally Posted by ewenmack View Post

        Lucas, do you know why that headline beat out others?

        Knowing the reason becomes your biggest pay-off because you understand the hidden cause
        and therefore use the same principle in all your other headlines until you stop fogging a mirror.

        Does anybody else see the hidden reason?

        Best,
        Doctor E. Vile
        Instant Gratification, Specificity.
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