Pleae review my headlines

Hi,

I am trying to come up with some headlines for a squeeze page for a new product. The product will focus on the weight loss niche.

I must point out that I have very little copy writing skill all I have done is followed some headline advice from Copy Blogger.

Please be a harsh as possible and if you want come up with your own ones.

1. Who else wants to lose 30lbs
2. The Secret of Losing Weight Forever
3. Here is a method that is is helping people to lose weight forever
4. Little Known Ways to lose weight permanently.
5. Get Rid of your unwanted fat once and for all
6. Now you can have the body you have always dreamed off
7. Here's a quick way to start losing weight
8. Look like a model
9. Get a body you can be proud of
10. What everybody ought to know about losing weight.
11. Give Me 3 Minutes - And I'll Give you the secret to losing weight forever!
12. If you don't read this now, you'll hat yourself later.
13. The Lazy Way to Lose Weight.
14. See How Easily You Can Lose Weight Forever
15. You Don't have to be a celebrity to lose weight.
16. Do you make these mistakes when trying to lose weight?
17. Warning: Most People fail when trying to lose weight- Will you be one of them
18. Warning: The secret that they don't want you to know about losing weight.
19. Are you ashamed of the way you look?

Cheers