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I received this magalog in the mail the other day. It has a good headline on the front cover ... got my attention and compelled me to read on.

Alex
#good #headline
  • Profile picture of the author johnlagoudakis
    Thanks for sharing Alex.

    Definitely a great headline.

    I like to do that too... i.e. take note of which headlines, images, etc get my attention.


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  • Profile picture of the author rosario1990
    Awesome headline express everything what has in the inner side.
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    • Profile picture of the author Alex Cohen
      I like this headline because it...

      1. Creates mental imagery,
      2. Arouses curiosity, and
      3. Implies a powerful benefit.

      Not the best headline I've ever seen, but certainly good enough to get the job done.

      Alex
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  • Profile picture of the author max5ty
    Figure the headline mostly attracts seniors. Doubt anyone young or middle aged would care if they lived to be 100.

    Saw a post from Frank Kern a few days ago (an old post) where he thought this sales letter was one of the best he'd seen in a while. Thought the headline was pretty good...speaking of headlines. Didn't do a search to see if anyone ever mentioned this...if they did, sorry.

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    Here's the post:

    https://www.facebook.com/Frank.Kern....08941562485768

    The comments were pretty interesting.

    Discovered what's his name (Kennedy) once sent out a direct mail piece with the deadline already past and did good.

    Also comments about how typos increase profits.

    Thanks for the post.

    P.S. Not an affiliate of this or any other product.
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  • Profile picture of the author ElminaKenley
    Fabulous headline as it's creative and looks catchy to eyes. Alex appreciates you for sharing such informative stuff.
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  • Profile picture of the author sethczerepak
    Originally Posted by Alex Cohen View Post

    I received this magalog in the mail the other day. It has a good headline on the front cover ... got my attention and compelled me to read on.

    Alex
    Got me hooked. I actually searched for the product as a potential buyer, not just a curious copywriter.
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  • Profile picture of the author shawnlebrun
    I think I got hooked by a similar headline a while back....

    "Take this One Blue Pill and Call me if You have An Erection that
    Lasts Longer than 4 Hours"
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    • Profile picture of the author sethczerepak
      Originally Posted by shawnlebrun View Post

      I think I got hooked by a similar headline a while back....

      "Take this One Blue Pill and Call me if You have An Erection that
      Lasts Longer than 4 Hours"
      Think I saw that on a bathroom stall once ^.
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  • Profile picture of the author EllieThomos
    Nice headline thanks for sharing this Alex
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