Newbie question

by Nowyouknow12

Posted: 11 years ago 2 replies

COPY WRITING

I just joined today! I've written some copy for an sales landing page that I'd like to see if i can get some feedback on. I'm not seeing a great conversion rate. Actually, it's very sad lol.

I'd also like to know if anyone has a link to a good copywriter for squeez page and sales pages that I can use for $100 a page...

http://www.nyku.net/freebookoffer/

#copywrite #newbie #question

floydarthur 11 years ago

Put your thread in the right section.

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- angiecolee 11 years ago
  
  Originally Posted by floydarthur
  
  Put your thread in the right section.
  
  Wanted - Members Looking To Hire You
  
  Floyd Arthur
  
  If he's asking for a critique, he's in the right section.
  
  Unfortunately, he has not yet run his copy through this checklist:
  http://www.warriorforum.com/copywrit...-critique.html
  
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