
Why didn't this convert

I'm pretty upset. Here's the final draft. Where did I go wrong? please help.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0BwL...ew?usp=sharing
I have a situation where one or more of my websites pages shows as being indexed in Google Search Console and in any search using (site that I do, but ... [read more]
https://www.facebook.com/TravelButle...90089942878299 The County Visitor's Bureau came out to my friend's farm to film what we do and put it on their website.... I wasn't able to be there that day....but ... [read more]
I want to reach out to my targeted audience without investing any money. Please any contribution of free converting traffic source will help
I have a facebook group targeting leisure sketchbookers that is already almost 40k members strong. Now I want to create a blog, and while I already have an idea of ... [read more]
Might as well post it here for maximum visibility. Don't forget to add a checkout/opt-in link to your marketplace thread. I've been receiving complaints from members saying their paid threads ... [read more]
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