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Subtitle Needed

by cima
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Hi There,

In few days, I'm going to launch my new product which will be named the UltimateForexTradingMethod. Even, if I've already found the title of the product (lucky me) which remains very simple :
"Samuel Cimamonti's Ultimate Forex Trading Method", I'm still looking for a subtitle (or catchy phrase, actually I don't know how this is called ! :rolleyes: )

For example, on this website : Dean Saunders's 10 Minute Forex Wealth Builder, the title is "Dean Saunders' 10 Minute Forex Wealth Builder" and what I call the catchy phrase is "Building wealth in forex with only 10 minutes a day".

I'm completely new at copywriting so I was wondering If you would be kind enough to give some ideas concerning my "catchy phrase", knowing that my product is a forex method (a good one I hope )


Thanks again !

Samuel.
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  • Profile picture of the author TimCastleman
    Why not 8 minute wealth? Same idea, same concept, just 2 minutes quicker?

    Tim
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  • Profile picture of the author EaglePiServ
    What your asking for is a USP - A Unique Selling Proposition. What is so different/better/quicker about your product over one of the other thousand or so forex methods/robots out there?
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  • Profile picture of the author travlinguy
    The subtitle is often a showcase for the main benefit in the program, something that sets you apart from all the other Forex programs. Since we don't know what that is, why not post a set or two of your juciest bullet points. Then we might have something to work with. Good luck.
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  • Profile picture of the author Smyle
    Another thing to focus on are what people don't like so look for bad reviews of some of the competition. If there are any downsides, play on that as a strength of yours. (If it's true of course)..

    Case in point, I never looked into Forex trading becuase it seemed complicated. Even some of the established systems seemed complicated to me.. So a tagline I would be looking for would be "Forex Trading Made Simple" Just my thought.
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  • Profile picture of the author Steve Thompson
    Hi Samuel

    Just a couple of thoughts - the first on your title. Are you well known in the Forex arena? If not, then I suggest that your name in the title is maybe misplaced and wastes valuable real estate in the most crucial part of your "pitch". The title should ideally include the principal benefit. For example "How To Create Massive Wealth in Forex Without Risking Your Shirt".

    Then you could have a sub head something like "22 Secret Guerrilla Tactics For Beating The Market - Even In Bad Times!".

    Hope it helps.

    Regards

    Steve
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    • Profile picture of the author cima
      Thank you very much everybody ! That's very kind !
      I really love the "How To Create Massive Wealth in Forex Without Risking Your Shirt", that's why I think I'm going to take that one.

      I will let you know when the product will be launched.

      Thanks again !

      Samuel.
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      My Brand New Forex Trading System :
      www.UltimateForexTradingMethod.com

      And My Forex Review Blog : www.UltimateForexReview.com
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      • Profile picture of the author cima
        In the end, do you think "Finally Create Massive Wealth in Forex Without Risking Your Shirt" could be good ?

        Thanks again.
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        My Brand New Forex Trading System :
        www.UltimateForexTradingMethod.com

        And My Forex Review Blog : www.UltimateForexReview.com
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        • Profile picture of the author dorothydot
          Dear Samuel,

          One thing I dearly love to include is a quotation. No, not a testimonial - a quote.

          Like, "Cause and effect are two sides of one fact." - R. W. Emerson

          Or, "Don't compromise yourself. You are all you've got." - J. Joplin

          That sort of thing, used sparingly, can really command attention and interest. Use a google search on "Money Quotes" or something of that ilk. I'm sure you can find a lot of great ones.

          Hope this helps,
          Dot

          PS - "Don't take life too seriously. You'll never get out alive." - Bugs Bunny. LOL!
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  • Profile picture of the author rconejr
    Not liking the "finally" in there, it seems like it can be a little awkward if you read it with the wrong emphasis. Maybe just me. But I like the rest of it.
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