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Warriors,

What do you think?

Is hypnotic copy an ethical way to sell your products and services to customers?

I really think convincing people naturally that they are doing the best thing by making a purchase is much better than using hypnotic copy that rips a customer of his/her money.

Conversions are often low because the site owner targets prospects who may / may not buy. Whereas if you target customers who would definitely buy, the conversions would be higher. Your sales offer & sales strategy makes all the sense in the world when the copy is perfect.

If you use hypnotic copy for the right customer, that's okay. I'd still be skeptical to trick people out with all BS hypnotic copy.
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  • Profile picture of the author teamnirvana
    I personally think that a customer who has researched over the product and is WILLING to try a product, would definitely go through the entire copy in order to understand the benefits that the product offers.

    The sales copy, even if it is not top notch, if it has glorified the benefits attained by using the product would convert the visitor into a consumer.

    Hypnotic or not!!! It has to be appeasing.
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  • Profile picture of the author Ronak Shah
    Originally Posted by Matt Jutras View Post

    You can't force people to buy something that they wouldn't have in the first place. The only time ethics come into play is if you're lying in the sales letter somewhere.
    I mean some copywriters trick or rather "hypnotize" prospects into buying stuff.

    I really do not think that's a fair idea! What do you you think?

    Some of the best copywriters on the planet promote hypnotic copywriting so this is a BIG question whether this actually is done or not. I haven't known hypnotic copywriting well enough. Just that it sounds like as if it's written just to get credit cards out of a person's wallet. Well is it fair or its not?

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    • Profile picture of the author Johnny12345
      Originally Posted by ronakshah View Post

      I mean some copywriters trick or rather "hypnotize" prospects into buying stuff.

      I really do not think that's a fair idea! What do you you think?
      I think you're giving "hypnotic" copywriting far more credit than it deserves.

      Hypnotic copywriting is actually a rather vague concept... depending on who you ask. It can mean appealing to the prospect's secret ulterior motives (see Loren's post) or it can refer to the cadence and flow of the copy.

      In either case, it's not black magic, it's not evil, and it can't "force" people to buy.

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    • Profile picture of the author Collette
      Originally Posted by ronakshah View Post

      I mean some copywriters trick or rather "hypnotize" prospects into buying stuff...

      ...It's unclear to me so I want people to comment.
      I recommend you find out more about the process of real-world hypnosis.

      Any reputable hypnotist will tell you that you cannot get a person under hypnosis to do something they would not be prepared to do in real life.

      For example, if someone would never, even under the threat of death, strip naked in front of an audience, you cannot "hypnotize" him and "force" him to do so.

      If, however, in the prospect's subconscious, there is a line that can be crossed which will allow him to rationalize the decision to strip naked in front of an audience, then the hypnotist can "command" and he will "obey".

      A skilled hypnotist taps into an existing, unconscious, or deep-seated desire or motivation. They know how to frame their command or request in such a way that it works with the subject's existing belief system.

      So, in another example...

      If you went to a hypnotist to stop smoking, but you believe yourself to be someone entirely without willpower in all areas of your life - all the hypnosis in the world will not get you to stop smoking permanently.

      If, however, you believe that you have willpower in some areas of your life, if not others, then the hypnotist can frame the suggestions to stop smoking in a way that aligns with what is already "acceptable" to your self concept.

      And you'll be "hypnotized" into following the commands.

      "Hypnotic" copy, as Loren pointed out, is nothing more than the skilful application of social science concepts.

      No copywriter or marketer can "force" people to buy anything that they have absolutely no desire for, under any circumstances. So ethics simply don't enter into it.

      If you're questioning the use of lies or misrepresentations in copy - that's a whole other issue.
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      • Profile picture of the author Ronak Shah
        Originally Posted by Collette View Post

        I recommend you find out more about the process of real-world hypnosis.

        Any reputable hypnotist will tell you that you cannot get a person under hypnosis to do something they would not be prepared to do in real life.

        For example, if someone would never, even under the threat of death, strip naked in front of an audience, you cannot "hypnotize" him and "force" him to do so.

        If, however, in the prospect's subconscious, there is a line that can be crossed which will allow him to rationalize the decision to strip naked in front of an audience, then the hypnotist can "command" and he will "obey".

        A skilled hypnotist taps into an existing, unconscious, or deep-seated desire or motivation. They know how to frame their command or request in such a way that it works with the subject's existing belief system.

        So, in another example...

        If you went to a hypnotist to stop smoking, but you believe yourself to be someone entirely without willpower in all areas of your life - all the hypnosis in the world will not get you to stop smoking permanently.

        If, however, you believe that you have willpower in some areas of your life, if not others, then the hypnotist can frame the suggestions to stop smoking in a way that aligns with what is already "acceptable" to your self concept.

        And you'll be "hypnotized" into following the commands.

        "Hypnotic" copy, as Loren pointed out, is nothing more than the skilful application of social science concepts.

        No copywriter or marketer can "force" people to buy anything that they have absolutely no desire for, under any circumstances. So ethics simply don't enter into it.

        If you're questioning the use of lies or misrepresentations in copy - that's a whole other issue.
        I'll elaborate:

        Say, you get a "maybe" prospect on your site who is reading your "hypnotic" copy and he falls for it because he gets tempted by every other hypnotic offer. A "maybe" customer is one who isn't sure whether your product actually helps his scheme of things. They often research and check back on offers before buying an offer. Some "maybe" prospects will give it a try whereas "sure" buyers are always confident of your offer. The "maybe" prospects are never sure they want to do just what the sales letter offers so refund rates increase because of that.

        The "maybe" prospect practically uses everything you have offered him and gets results that are worse than he would have expected.

        However, your offer does not make sense to his scheme of things & he feels ripped off by your sales copy with all the BS NLP triggers & stuff. He feels he's been ripped off by your sales copy and he files for a refund. If not, he curses your sales copywriter and you for cheating him and tells 10 other prospects about your hypnotic sales copy.

        You've just lost reputation in front of a customer who could potentially talk great things about you as a product seller/marketer online/offline.

        Now what do you guys have to say about this one?
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        • Profile picture of the author Collette
          Originally Posted by ronakshah View Post

          ...

          Now what do you guys have to say about this one?
          1) You're writing for the wrong kind of client
          2) You're in the wrong line of work
          3) Don't give up your day job

          Everything we do in Life is "manipulation".

          You convince a friend to see the movie you want to see... persuade your child to do his chores... convince your wife to order in so you can watch the game instead of going out to dinner... get the pretty girl to let you buy her a drink... impress the boss enough to nail that big promotion... talk yourself out of having a second helping at dinner, or going to the gym when you don't feel like it...

          It's ALL "manipulation".

          Manipulation makes things happen. Without manipulation, most of us would be sinking in a swamp of inertia.

          The most successful people in life - the people who have the most impact, who inspire others, who create lasting change - are always Masters of Manipulation.

          If you believe otherwise, you're kidding yourself.
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          • Profile picture of the author Ronak Shah
            Originally Posted by Collette View Post

            1) You're writing for the wrong kind of client
            2) You're in the wrong line of work
            3) Don't give up your day job

            Everything we do in Life is "manipulation".

            You convince a friend to see the movie you want to see... persuade your child to do his chores... convince your wife to order in so you can watch the game instead of going out to dinner... get the pretty girl to let you buy her a drink... impress the boss enough to nail that big promotion... talk yourself out of having a second helping at dinner, or going to the gym when you don't feel like it...

            It's ALL "manipulation".

            Manipulation makes things happen. Without manipulation, most of us would be sinking in a swamp of inertia.

            The most successful people in life - the people who have the most impact, who inspire others, who create lasting change - are always Masters of Manipulation.

            If you believe otherwise, you're kidding yourself.
            If everyone does just that, I think..

            There would NOT be any original products existing in the marketplace.

            Everything and every person will be manipulated. Manipulation is shady.

            I respectfully disagree with Collete.

            If everyone is going to manipulate, who's going to be honest?

            It's about ethics.

            And it's not about people making bad decisions and then feeling ripped off like Paul said.

            It's mainly about brand building. It's about building "trust" through your sales copy that would not only generate "short-term" customers but "long-term" life-time customers. Thus, your product has to be A+++++.

            I've seen and used Rich Schefren's products. I can vouch for his products if not for him. Just like people do for Allen in this forum.

            See, what I mean?

            I had rather focus on the COMPLETE picture rather than focusing on short term gains using manipulative NLP tricks and shady techniques as some copywriters do.

            Believe me, I think if you're not able to be your self who's going to believe you?

            There is no point of debate on this thread. If you've something valuable please comment.

            Wanted to know if hypnotic copy is the in-thing to do? is it ethical? Loren and lenlatimer replied intelligently.

            I'd say deception and manipulation are the same things and if you as a copywriter advocate such practices, you're hurting both - clients and customers. You're not realizing that there are natural ways to hit a higher number of sales.

            If you target the wrong keywords in SE's & attract the wrong prospects, your conversions are bound to drop. LOL
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            • Profile picture of the author Collette
              Originally Posted by ronakshah View Post

              If everyone does just that, I think..

              There would NOT be any original products existing in the marketplace.
              I have no idea what product creation has to do with manipulation. you're gonna have to connect the dots for me on this one.

              Originally Posted by ronakshah View Post

              Everything and every person will be manipulated. Manipulation is shady.
              You're confusing "manipulation" with "deception". They're not the same thing.

              Originally Posted by ronakshah View Post

              I respectfully disagree here with Collete.

              If everyone is going to manipulate, who's going to be honest?
              Manipulation is not, ipso facto, dishonest. You can use manipulation for dishonest purposes. Or you can use manipulation for good purposes.

              Say I promise my high school senior a new car for getting straight As on all his classes for an entire year. He gets straight As, and he gets the car. He's happy, I'm happy, and the college of his choice is happy.

              Was it unethical for me to provide an incentive (i.e. to manipulate his desire for a car) in order to get a result that is good for both of us?

              Originally Posted by ronakshah View Post

              It's about ethics.
              No, it's not. It's about understanding what people want and giving it to them.

              Originally Posted by ronakshah View Post

              And it's not about people making bad decisions and then feeling ripped off like Paul said.
              From this, I take it you believe none of us have free will. We're going to have to disagree on this.

              Originally Posted by ronakshah View Post

              It's mainly about brand building. It's about building "trust" through your sales copy that would not only generate "short-term" customers but "long-term" life-time customers. Thus, your product has to be A+++++.
              And what is the point of your attempt to build trust? It's to get people to buy your stuff. Plain and simple.

              You present yourself as a trustworthy source so that people will buy more stuff from you and less from your competitors.

              You just manipulated them.

              The fact that you feel morally compelled to offer good products and services is neither here nor there. The fact is, if you don't try to influnce the way people think about your product or service - they won't buy from you.

              Offering an A++++ product merely converts your manipulation into a win/win situation. The customer gets something that is geniunely useful to him, and you get more money.

              Now you're both happy.


              Originally Posted by ronakshah View Post

              I've seen and used Rich Schefren's products. I can vouch for his products if not for him. Just like people do for Allen in this forum.

              See, what I mean?
              What I see is that you believe that people should buy and use Rich Schefren's products. You believe he provides products that are valuable, useful, and will help others. And you believe that, by offering your positive opinion, you can help them make (what you believe to be) the "right" decision.

              So you seek to influence their thinking (and their purchasing decision) by vouching for the efficacy of his products.

              And by doing so, you attempt to manipulate potential buyers.

              The fact that you believe in what you're saying, that you believe that for someone else to purchase this product, that you believe that the product will help them, that you believe you are acting in their best interest, and that you believe you are doing a good thing - none of these changes the fact that you are engaged in manipulation.

              Originally Posted by ronakshah View Post

              I had rather focus on the COMPLETE picture rather than focusing on short term gains using manipulative NLP tricks and shady techniques as some copywriters do.
              Then you should focus on whether persuasive copywriting should be used for good or evil. A technique is only a tool. No more, no less.

              I can use a hammer to build a house for a homeless family, or use the same hammer to smash a baby's toy.

              Same hammer. Different purpose. Different result.

              Originally Posted by ronakshah View Post

              Believe me, I think if you're not able to be your self who's going to believe you?

              There is no point of debate on this thread. If you've something valuable please comment.

              Wanted to know if hypnotic copy is the in-thing to do? is it ethical? Loren and lenlatimer replied intelligently.

              I'd say deception and manipulation are the same things and if you as a copywriter advocate such practices, you're hurting both - clients and customers. You're not realizing that there are natural ways to hit a higher number of sales.
              Unfortunately, unless you separate "deception" and "manipulation" to their rightful places, you will ALWAYS struggle with converting browsers to buyers.


              You seem to be deeply conflicted with the concept of "selling" and extremely uncomfortable with the idea that, as a copywriter, your job is - by definition - to sell.

              In fact, it's unclear to me why you want to be a copywriter at all.

              Originally Posted by ronakshah View Post

              If you target the wrong keywords in SE's and target the wrong customers, your conversions are bound to drop. LOL
              Once again, I have no idea what that last bit has to do with the subject at hand. You're going to have to connect the dots for me.
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              • Profile picture of the author RichPirate
                I think you should read up a little bit on what hypnosis is. Hypnosis is basically just a special form of social influence. It's not something magical, but hypnotic language can be more effective than plain content.

                Being hypnotic however isn't mind control, If I encounter hypnotic copy I might be more willing to buy the product it is advertising, but if I have serious doubts for whatever reason, or I wasn't looking to buy in the first place i am still unlikely to change my mind.

                Hypnotic copy isn't really an ethics issue in my opinion more than just regular copy is. Which is to say all copy convinces someone to buy a product usually without ever seeing it or being able to truly evaluate it.
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            • Profile picture of the author Revolves
              Originally Posted by ronakshah View Post

              I had rather focus on the COMPLETE picture rather than focusing on short term gains using manipulative NLP tricks and shady techniques as some copywriters do.

              Believe me, I think if you're not able to be your self who's going to believe you?
              First of all, I believe you haven't taken the time to understand what others have posted.

              You haven't given any concrete examples of "such' hypnotism. You are not being specific.

              You have not even defined what you believe is a Hypnotic Copy.

              If you're talking about Joe's products, it is just clever "positioning."

              You say people use shady NLP techniques in their copy. Where? How?

              Here, we're already discussing a "problem" which we have not even proved to exist, or at the least, have not even defined properly.

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          • Profile picture of the author Ronak Shah
            Collete,

            You are confusing manipulation with "positive influence". You require to stop by and think on what I've written. I feel you certainly need to go deeper into what I've written. I find you aren't getting what I'm really saying.

            Manipulation according to me is forcing your will on someone else in unethical obnoxious ways. It's like manipulating someone's choices who is ignorant & fearful.

            Manipulation and confidence are opposites according to me. Most buyers buy with a sense of fear or they buy due to sense of confidence.

            You can scare a person into buying your product or you can make the person confide completely in buying your offering. Either there can be fear or there is confidence. Those who use fear & ignorance as a tool to hit more sales won't survive in the long run. Those who build a "reputation" (read: confidence) from the sales copy make a whole lot of money not just short term but in the long run as well.

            Remember, a great sales offer will sell no matter how bad their copy may be and how bad their design would be if they know how to sell.

            I chose sales copywriting because I CAN SELL. LOL

            I'll edit this posts when I come back because now its' going to be a really great post. So just wait till I come back to connect all the dots for you & for everyone reading this thread as well.
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            • Profile picture of the author David Babineau
              Originally Posted by ronakshah View Post

              Manipulation according to me is forcing your will on someone else in unethical obnoxious ways. It's like manipulating someone's choices.
              Ronakshah,

              Unless you are personally delivering your salesletter by hand and forcing your prospect to buy or else you'll kill them... I don't see how you can force your will on someone in print.

              At the end of the day, people will buy, or they won't. It's their choice. And their choice alone.

              Every human being has the ability to make a rational decision based on what they hold to be in their best interest.

              Now as a salesman (in person or in print) it's also your job to do the best possible presentation you can, as honestly as you can.

              As long as you're not lying, what's the harm?

              At the end of the day, everyone is responsible for their own decisions - including buyers.
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            • Profile picture of the author Killer Joe
              Originally Posted by ronakshah View Post

              Manipulation according to me is forcing your will on someone else in unethical obnoxious ways. It's like manipulating someone's choices.
              Copy gets read. Reading is not the primary sensory input you are making it out to be.

              If someone is reading your 'hypnotic' copy and the doorbell rings, your copy just got trumped. Same with the phone, a baby crying, and a million other things. Our choices are not absolutes, many times they are reactionary in nature.

              A doorbell, a phone, the buzzer on the stove, they are all somewhat manipulative. We can choose to react or ignore. We generally choose what gives us the greatest satisfaction, or the least amount of pain. Most people choose expediency over substance.

              Forcing your will on someone else in the context that you are referring to is fantasy. You can provide a path for them to choose, but the choice will remain theirs.

              Unless the doorbell rings...

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            • Profile picture of the author J. Barry Mandel
              Hi Ron,


              Collette has it right.

              To me it seems like you are twisting things and contorting them to fit what you think is happening, which is actually not the case.

              I think that part of what's happening is you have set ideas about how things should be and not how things actually are.

              For example, you are making things out to be black and white like in the following case:

              Most buyers buy with a sense of fear or they buy due to sense of confidence.
              However, can you really separate the 2 of them from each other in a sales letter?

              For example is SCARCITY a fear tactic?

              People might have fear that they won't have the opportunity to make the purchase if all units are just about sold out and they might have confidence in the product based on the copy, testimonials, and video proof.

              etc. etc.


              Best,

              Justin


              Originally Posted by ronakshah View Post

              Collete,

              You are confusing manipulation with "positive influence". You require to stop by and think on what I've written. I feel you certainly need to go deeper into what I've written. I find you aren't getting what I'm really saying.

              Manipulation according to me is forcing your will on someone else in unethical obnoxious ways. It's like manipulating someone's choices who is ignorant & fearful.

              Manipulation and confidence are opposites according to me. Most buyers buy with a sense of fear or they buy due to sense of confidence.

              You can scare a person into buying your product or you can make the person confide completely in buying your offering. Either there can be fear or there is confidence. Those who use fear & ignorance as a tool to hit more sales won't survive in the long run. Those who build a "reputation" (read: confidence) from the sales copy make a whole lot of money not just short term but in the long run as well.

              Remember, a great sales offer will sell no matter how bad their copy may be and how bad their design would be if they know how to sell.

              I chose sales copywriting because I CAN SELL. LOL

              I'll edit this posts when I come back because now its' going to be a really great post. So just wait till I come back to connect all the dots for you & for everyone reading this thread as well.
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    • Profile picture of the author Rezbi
      Originally Posted by Paul McQuillan View Post

      Hypnotic is just another name for persuasive copy.
      Exactly.

      Just because someone chooses to give his site or copywriting a name doesn't make it so.

      If you can't make people do things against their will in person, how are you going to do it in print?

      Meanwhile...

      ...Look into my eyes....
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  • Profile picture of the author Loren Woirhaye
    The way I look at it hypnotic copywriting is the sort
    of situation where the REAL reason a person would
    buy your product is not something you can come right
    out and say, because it's a hidden agenda the reader
    wouldn't admit to himself, but it's the real reason people
    will buy.

    For example: few people would openly admit the are
    lonely and feel friendless, yet they undoubtedly buy
    products for which the hidden sales appeal is that the
    thing will attract friends to you.

    So it's sort of like slipping in the real buying appeal
    under the radar, so the person can say "I'm buying
    this for such-and-such rational reason" when really
    they are buying for a thoroughly irrational reason.

    You don't tell the guy who is looking at a sports car
    "Buy this so you can feel better about yourself," you
    tell him something else that leads him to the vague
    conclusion that if he buys it from you he WILL feel
    better about himself. So when selling it to the guy
    you elicit the criteria he will admit to: speed, engine
    size, trim, brand name, color and so forth. As he
    gets more specific he gets involved in the decision
    making process, and voila! he starts to feel more in
    control of his life and does actually feel better about
    himself, which is what he really wanted in the first
    place.
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  • Profile picture of the author Dean Dhuli
    "Hypnotic copy" is probably more of a branding thing than anything else.
    So don't worry too much about it.



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  • Profile picture of the author Loren Woirhaye
    the term "Hypnotic Copywriting" if it wasn't coined by
    Joe Vitale, has certainly been claimed by the guy.

    The two books he refers to as the most useful for
    learning to write in this way, aside from his own books,
    are:

    "The Robert Collier Letter Book" by Robert Collier
    and "How To Write Letters That Sell" by Christian Godefroy.

    The Robert Collier book is easy to get. The Godefroy
    book not so easy to get, being out-of-print.

    I'm just saying this because I define "hypnotic copywriting" in
    terms of Joe Vitale's definition of it, which is a synthesis
    of approaches found in those two books. Neither Collier nor
    Godefroy advocate deception but both say that there is
    often a hidden reason people will buy - the real reason -
    but you have to approach bringing that reason into play
    with care lest the reader grow skittish and put the letter
    aside, which is tantamount to losing the sale.
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  • Profile picture of the author lenlatimer
    Hi,
    I think you're really asking is it OK to manipulate people. Whether it's hynopic or persausive or selling - there's a degree of attempted manipulation-
    If you're not scamming them and are providing good value I see nothing wrong at all with that.

    Let me quote Ziglar: Timid salesmen have skinny kids.
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    • Profile picture of the author Ross Bowring
      Get comfortable selling. As a copywriter it's your job to sell the darn thing.

      To do that you do everything in your persuasive powers to make the sale. It's your job. If it's a job you don't like then you get another job.

      As Paul said up top... hypnotic copy is a sexier way of saying persuasive copy.

      I don't know about you, but I stuff, or I should say "artfully scatter"... (because I'm fancy like that...) as much stealth NLP... Cialdini... nasty *ss techniques into every letter as I can appropriately fit.

      Am I a scam artist, or a copywriter who feels a responsibility to paying clients to make every letter as powerfully persuasive as possible?
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  • Profile picture of the author BrianMcLeod
    In sales, there are usually points in the conversation where a prospect
    will ask a question or raise an objection.

    If you know your prospect well enough... and know your product well
    enough... you can often leapfrog right past the question asked or objection
    raised by addressing the REAL core emotional desire they're not bringing
    forward...

    For example...

    Prospect says, "how long does it take to get this done..."

    You answer, "that's a great question.. and I think what you really want to
    know is 'How do I know that if I get started today, I won't lose money...',
    am I right?"

    Prospect: "Yeah, exactly..."

    The prospect doesn't want to be impolite or reveal his hand, so he couches
    his question timidly and indirectly.

    You see through that and deliver what HE REALLY wants to know.

    The prospect is happier now and trusts you more.

    How is that unethical? Simple answer is... it's not.

    Even though it falls squarely under the sales rubric of "Jedi-Mind Trick".

    Writing copy is arguably the LEAST effective form of direct selling there is...
    because we can't get that direct feedback from our customer and have to
    instead create scenarios with our words where we can recreate it.

    NLP, Hypnosis, Core Influence, brand them however you like...

    None of the above are tools of evil... they are simply tactical strategies for
    climbing inside the mind of our customer and meeting them where they are
    so that they are most comfortable giving us their money.
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  • Profile picture of the author Chris Ramsey
    Being "The Hypnotic Copywriter" I probably should have replied sooner, but I just haven't put much time into the forums lately.

    In my past, I was a hypnotherapist. Having seen the amazing power of persuasion that is hypnosis, I eventually decided to use it in my copywriting.

    For me, it's not just a USP. It's part of who I am and what I do. My sales copy is filled with hypnotic phrasings and stories.

    But as mentioned, you can't FORCE someone to buy anything. You can simply nudge them in the right direction, which I find hypnosis to be a powerful tool to do just that.

    So, is it morally wrong? Nope - not at all. Like I said, you can't force anyone to do anything they don't already want to.
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  • Profile picture of the author rickstooker
    I don't think you'd know actual hypnotic copywriting if you read it -- which you probably
    have.

    Please give us an example of a sales letter that forces prospects to buy the product against their
    will.

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  • Profile picture of the author Ronak Shah
    Didn't you guys saw the hype behind Arbitrage Conspiracy when it was launched the first time and all that manipulation going around by hyping up its reputation. The product didn't live up to its' promise even while some of the biggest names gave their testimonials. It all went bust. I call that "manipulation".

    I've a dear friend who's a highly reputed internet marketer (not quoting him) and he stayed away from that launch. Most of you know him well enough.

    If you make people believeyour false promises that's what I'm against.

    They promised a get-rich-quick scheme is what most people write on some forums. They couldn't deliver. Maybe they did not have the infrastructure to handle it. Some folks were really yelling at this launch because they manipulated people into buying their product but couldn't deliver it's promise. This is what I've observed from reading the forums.

    I wouldn't like to bad mouth anyone so please.. you already had me talking about one example and I gave it here. If there is going to be a hoo-haa-haa here, I'd rather ask the mods to close the thread.

    I recently bought a backlinking report from our Warrior Forum fellow member (wouldn't like to name that person or give you a link as I am not sure whether its okay as per forum rules) and when I read it, it was plain simple stupid. I was being charged $7 for the report when it had no "substance" in it. I felt I was being ripped off. It gave a false promise when the matter was so plain stupid.

    Maybe, the Arbitrage conspiracy product could be an excellent one this time around when they launch but what you guys actually don't realize is:

    You must build your solid reputation by offering solid value even for free. You get solid reputation and soild response from people.

    HELP - HELP - HELP!

    You have to help people get better at themselves. Make people feel that you are there to help them and that they are not all alone sitting on the fence. There has to a movement in the positive direction within their lives through your sales offer and sales copy. Adding value is the objective and that's how you gain a rock-solid reputation.

    For me, reputation is more a crucial factor to my success than money. I call it self-confidence / self-esteem.

    Money can bring you only short term happiness.

    In the long run, if you can't see your self in the mirror and say "I'm
    beautiful" to your self, I doubt you've made the MOST of your life.
    Likewise everyone wants to feel that charm about themselves in their own
    lives.

    So I really mean to say is "under-promise and over deliver".

    If you can give away invaluable incredible information for free that may even costs a $1000 to a few deserving people who have a reputation and authority in the marketplace, you get a chance (a platform) to position your self correctly and build a STRONG rock-solid career for your self. Free ain't bad either.

    Time is value but value is not definitely money. Money is a form of value. It's just one part of life. Not the whole and sole. Time once gone won't come back so I want to make the most of my lifetime. Likewise HELP your customers make the lives much better, easier, lighter, joyful and simpler.

    If you are selling a product and people aren't buying it, it's because you
    are failing to persuade people and make them believe what you are saying.

    You have to realize that they have a "desperate" need for a product which is why they are buying a product.

    Manipulation and persuasion are two different things altogether. They aren't the same my friends.

    You can't manipulate people's confidence for a lifetime. Once you can, twice you can - not every single day. Some day the truth prevails & when it does, you are bound to fall deep down in people's eyes.

    Reputation is everything in an online business and you know that deep down your heart. I call it self-respect / self-belief / self-esteem.

    Manipulation and driving people with a positive purpose are two different
    things. You can drive people towards "buying" your product positively or
    you can drive people towards "buying" your product negatively i.e.
    manipulating them. It's either of them.

    Selling and buying are two different things. Even if you try to force a sale on a buyer, there are chances aplenty a person may not buy.

    People buy because they want it, not just because you are selling it. It's the "WANT" which drives people to buy.

    Your job as a marketer / sales copywriter is to make people buy WHAT THEY WANT rather than manipulate a sale which they don't need / want.

    Ahem! you CAN'T manipulate a wise man can you? People are wise. They know what they are looking for.

    You can't fool them.

    Chris Ramsey is a hypnotic copywriter and I think he is one of those who could really tell us what hypnotic copywriting is all about. Thanks Chris for posting! Sounds really interesting after I started this thread! DUH!

    Most importantly:

    It's not the product, it's the experience that the product creates for the end user which is termed as value in a variety of forms such as leisure, excitement, ecstasy, joy, freedom, privilege, self-esteem, confidence, etc.

    If your product over-delivers 'X' times the value promised and your sales
    offer is great, the sales copy will work. But before that to happen there
    has a to be deep driving "WANT" for the product. It's called attraction.

    Attracting genuine buyers is like a magnet that completes and complements the other half that is missing to complete their whole existence. It drives people to be themselves and feel joyful.

    A sales copywriter is a human being first, a salesman second & a copywriter third.

    If you've an incorrect sales strategy, you're bound to fail. You've to have the right marketing mix.

    Look, I can't justify what I feel because if you don't understand what I'm saying I can't say anymore. Neither do I need to justify.

    I got a new spark from this thread which people won't be able to realize so soon. I got what I wanted. Whoaaa~~~~ You've to go through the thread to know exactly what I'm saying.

    As Paul said, Hypnosis is neither good or bad. It's just some people misuse the power of it to do business.

    TeamNirvana may be a rookie but he understands things even most pro copywriters don't.

    First be a great human being, everything will automatically fall in place.

    Justin: You require to read this re-read this thread until you are able to realize what I'm saying buddy. I recommend it buddy. Love, Ronak.

    In one sentence: build respect at every step of your sales letter.

    I've what it takes to succeed and I feel I will. I have succeeded.

    P.S. No arguments. Be neutral.

    P.S.S. This is NOT a debate going on here or to pull someone's self-image down. If you don't understand what I'm saying doesn't mean you have the right to blame or say I'm not right. You've to go through the thread to understand what I am saying if you aren't getting what I am saying.

    P.S. I know what I am saying. Nothing personal. Respect everyone's opinion.
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    • Profile picture of the author CopyMonster
      Originally Posted by ronakshah View Post

      Didn't you guys saw the hype behind Arbitrage Conspiracy when it was launched the first time and all that manipulation going around by hyping up its reputation. The product didn't live up to its' promise even while some of the biggest names gave their testimonials. It all went bust. I call that "manipulation".

      I've a dear friend who's a highly reputed internet marketer (not quoting him) and he stayed away from that launch. Most of you know him well enough.

      They promised a get-rich-quick scheme is what most people write on some forums. They couldn't deliver. Maybe they did not have the infrastructure to handle it. Some folks were really yelling at this launch because they manipulated people into buying their product but couldn't deliver it's promise. This is what I've observed from reading the forums.
      But no one was forced against their will, were they? I mean, the marketing and copy may have lead people to believe the product was better than it was but I don't see how they were forced...
      I recently bought a backlinking report from our Warrior Forum fellow member (wouldn't like to name that person or give you a link as I am not sure whether its okay as per forum rules) and when I read it, it was plain simple stupid. I was being charged $7 for the report when it had no "substance" in it. I felt I was being ripped off. It gave a false promise when the matter was so plain stupid.
      Hence the saying "caveat emptor"

      You must build your solid reputation by offering solid value even for free.
      Who said so? Not saying that it isn't better to but there's no law that says you have to offer value for free.

      If you are selling a product and people aren't buying it, it's because you
      are failing to persuade people and make them believe what you are saying.

      You have to realize that they have a "desperate" need for a product which is why they are buying a product.
      Actually, people don't buy needs. I mean few would argue that in many developed countries large portions of the population could do with eating healthier and doing more exercise (ie. need). Why do they opt for the burger and fries, fast food and pass on the fruit and workout etc? Because they buy WANTS! Desperate wants smashes needs any day. You can take that to the bank.

      Now get this, most people think they know what they want. That they came up with these ideas themselves. Unfortunately not. Marketers, big corporates have been telling people for years what they want and then offering it to them. I'm not talking about a sales pitch where salesperson or copy says you want to get this because it's great. I'm referring to levels several layers deep. Just read the other day (nothing really new) - survey of young women in the UK reveals that a majority would change their body (via surgery) if they could. Is this an accident? Did they just wake up one day and decide I need to be thinner, have a better looking nose, bigger lips blah, blah...

      What about the American dream? It was a nice ride, right? Everyone bought into it and got to spend lots of money on lots of shiny things, now look at the country... facing unprecedented levels of debt that it will have to devalue it's currency to no end in order to make creditor nations forgive most of it. Sure there are some wealthy people around in the US but let's not forget 1 in 6 in the US are living in poverty... how did it all happen... think about that. Was it really just poor leadership?

      You can't manipulate people's confidence for a lifetime. Once you can, twice you can - not every single day. Some day the truth prevails & when it does, you are bound to fall deep down in people's eyes.
      Happens everyday... of course you have to throw the odd bone or two to keep the villagers happy.


      Ahem! you CAN'T manipulate a wise man can you? People are wise. They know what they are looking for.

      You can't fool them.
      Of course you can't Ronak. You just tell them what they want to hear... and then offer to help get them what they want... they just have to do this and that and they can get it (read - DO whatever you want them to do)

      Only those who have actually evolved as an individual will be able to understand what I'm saying and I've understood on this thread.
      What are you saying Ronak? Anyone who doesn't understand is a caveman/woman?

      P.S.S. This is NOT a debate going on here or to pull someone's self-image down. If you don't understand what I'm saying doesn't mean you have the right to blame or say I'm not right. You've to go through the thread to understand what I am saying if you aren't getting what I am saying.
      Actually people don't have to do anything. Communication is a two way channel. Just because you're not getting through, doesn't automatically mean it's the receiver. It could be, but it's not conclusive.

      Just saying.
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    • Profile picture of the author Collette
      Originally Posted by ronakshah View Post

      This is NOT a debate going on here ... If you don't understand what I'm saying doesn't mean you have the right to ... say I'm not right.
      Well... dude..

      Why didn't you say so in the beginning?

      Here we all were, thinking that since you said this


      Originally Posted by ronakshah View Post

      Warriors... what do you think?
      and this

      Originally Posted by ronakshah View Post

      ... Now, what do you guys have to say about this one?
      - that you actually wanted to know what we thought!

      How could we have been so dense??

      Originally Posted by ronakshah View Post

      Manipulation according to me is forcing your will on someone else in unethical obnoxious ways. ...

      Manipulation and confidence are opposites according to me.
      ...
      Then I highly recommend you add this to your reading list.

      Originally Posted by ronakshah View Post


      ...I recently bought a backlinking report from our Warrior Forum fellow member (wouldn't like to name that person or give you a link as I am not sure whether its okay as per forum rules) and when I read it, it was plain simple stupid. I was being charged $7 for the report when it had no "substance" in it. I felt I was being ripped off.
      You paid 7-whole-$$ for a report with "no substance"??? OMG OUTRAGEOUS RIPOFF!!!!

      Quick, someone call the FTC.

      And so, instead of asking for a refund, or chalking it up to experience, you started a thread to lambast and insult all competent copywriters.

      Got it.

      Feel better now?

      Originally Posted by ronakshah View Post

      Look, I can't justify what I feel ...


      Clearly.

      Originally Posted by ronakshah View Post

      ..Only those who have actually evolved as an individual will be able to understand what I'm saying and I've understood on this thread.


      Judging by the responses, you're the only one who's understood what you've understood. So I guess you're the only evolved individual here.

      I'm happy for you. Really.

      Originally Posted by ronakshah View Post

      You've to go through the thread to understand what I am saying if you aren't getting what I am saying.
      Seems that's been done. And done.

      Originally Posted by ronakshah View Post

      Respect everyone's opinion.
      Except those you don't agree with. Or those who don't agree with you.

      Got it.

      Originally Posted by ronakshah View Post

      Collete,
      Originally Posted by ronakshah View Post

      ...You require to stop by and think on what I've written. I feel you certainly need to go deeper into what I've written. ....
      Deeper. Mmmm... Yeah. I'll get right on that.
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  • Profile picture of the author Ronak Shah
    I just wanted to know what folks really thought about hypnotic copy?

    Very few answers were accurate.

    I believe a sales copywriters job is to "persuade (convince) buyers to buy a product" and not overtly push a sale while hurting long term gains along with reputation.

    Collete, I was never here to blame, lambast and insult competent copywriters.

    If you think so, I apologize even though I never did that IMHO.

    I opened this thread to know some insights on hypnotic copywriting and share some insights about how people can really succeed as marketers. I thought it is completely okay to learn and share something with people.

    BTW, Collete please use a better alternative for your skills. Mind you no more insults.

    What I learned is hypnotic copywriting can be used in a positive manner by using triggers that target a "sure" buyer. This way we can help people who really & desperately want help.

    Paul, If you can't accept me then it is you who has a problem. It isn't me. It's you.

    I really don't have any problems with you. People who can't accept other people are one's who can't accept themselves.

    If you can't understand something that's because you don't realize certain things.

    And who cares what you think about me Paul? I really don't care what you think about me or whether you believe me. You are still a stranger and I won't take any of your insults again.

    I am not here to insult anyone. Did I blame or insult anyone? NO. Not at all. Stop taking this thread down the road. I am here to learn and share.

    PAul, You are NOT allowed to post your personal opinions and personal decisions about me on this thread. You're insulting me publicly. I did not ask you for your personal decisions with respect to me in a public forum. Mods, please take a note of this immediately.

    Paul, I am not here to listen to your berated judgments.

    I just asked for views on hypnotic copy. I am shocked at your response & exaggeration Paul and Collete.

    Just because I stand to disagree with your views you started insulting and blaming me.

    Paul and Collete, there is no rule book that says "just because Paul & Collete think they're competent copywriters I've to agree with each of their beliefs".

    I asked a question and people replied an answer. If you're not interested, please don't comment. No one's forcing you.

    Ignorance never yields results. That's the truth.

    There was a purpose.

    I achieved my purpose. I realized how to use hypnotic copy effectively in the most amazing way and still be ethical at the same time. Its true some people "manipulate" / "try to control" their buyers in desperate search for tons of sales. I believe in generating money with confidence & respect.

    You are special in your own way and so am I.

    I have the right to agree and choose what to believe and what not to believe Paul & Collete.

    You think you're a competent (self-proclaimed) copywriter. I really don't believe every word you've to say. I just believe what I want to. I've every right to do what I feel is best.

    Collete, you ain't no Jesus either. Stop behaving like children from kindergarten accusing me of something or the other which isn't happening either by me. It's so easy to blame other people when you don't understand what the person is saying and not take responsibility for your self.

    If you feel offended easily, that means there is something terribly wrong with you.

    I love this forum as much as you do.

    I am here to contribute to this forum while learning a lot from the WAR room. Not to believe every word you say.
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    • Profile picture of the author Collette
      Mark - Descriptive. Pithy. Colorful. I'm positively... hypnotized....

      Ronakash - If you don't want opinions, don't ask for them. No one here has insulted or blamed you ("blamed"? Blamed you for what, exactly?). You, on the other hand, have insulted everyone who doesn't agree with your definition of "manipulation".

      You apparently only wanted people to agree with you. That didn't happen. Life goes on.

      And you appear to have taken particular issue with Paul and me - for what reason, I cannot fathom. Every poster here (except you) has said the same thing: "Manipulation" is a persuasion tool, not an ethical conundrum.

      But if it makes you feel better to imagine me your enemy - have at it. Every fantasy needs a Don Quixote.
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      • Profile picture of the author Ronak Shah
        Here's what you wrote:

        Originally Posted by Collette View Post


        You, on the other hand, have insulted everyone who doesn't agree with your definition of "manipulation".
        You are blaming me that I have insulted everyone i.e. you who doesn't agree with my definition of "manipulation".

        Before you go beat around the bush, please check its definition here.

        Mods, I really wish you would close this thread.

        It's a waste of time replying to people who don't seem to respect a person's individuality and integrity.

        God Bless! MODS PLEASE CLOSE THIS THREAD.
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    Rest in Peace now, Dear Hypnotic Copy!!!
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  • Profile picture of the author Ronak Shah
    You cannot post your berated comments and opinions about me in a public forum. Why do you've to get personal?

    Did I say what I feel about you as a person ? There are manners. There are rules of the forum. Never abuse anyone's self image in public. There's a saying "Washing dirty linen in public". You're just doing that. If you've something to say ABOUT ME, please PM ME. You're not allowed to post your opinions about me.

    I asked Mods to close this thread so why did you post on this thread even after I warned you to not post here. You could've PM'd me. I will answer you in private.

    You feel its nonsense. I feel it makes perfect sense.

    Paul, You can't talk about what everyone feels. Everyone does not agree with every single thing that you believe.

    I asked a question. People replied. I got to know what I wanted. Matter over.

    Originally Posted by ronakshah View Post


    I respectfully disagree with Collete.
    Collete, I said "I respectfully disagree with you Collete". You feel offended. LOL.

    I am amazed that you've taken offense so early. I didn't mean to offend anyway.

    Collete, I didn't agree with your meaning of manipulation. Better still, use the tool I gave you. I do not think of you as a enemy either.
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    • Profile picture of the author Killer Joe
      ronakshah,

      "Young people often make issues where there are no issues."

      It's an old saying, but it carries a lot of truth.

      Here's another one...

      "When I was a boy of fourteen, my father was so ignorant I could hardly stand to have the old man around. But when I got to be twenty-one, I was astonished at how much he had learned in seven years." ~Mark Twain

      Just food for thought...

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    • Profile picture of the author Collette
      Originally Posted by ronakshah View Post



      Collete, I said "I respectfully disagree with you Collete". You feel offended. LOL.

      I am amazed that you've taken offense so early. I didn't mean to offend anyway.

      .
      I'm not offended. Never was.
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      • Profile picture of the author Hugh Thyer
        There is really no such thing as 'hypnotic' copywriting.

        There are things like NLP, but it hardly puts people into a trance. I've never heard of a product getting a 100% response rate so I guess there really is no such thing.

        End of the day, a copywriter has to get inside the heads of their prospect. They have to be on the same 'wavelength'. Its not what I'd call hypnotic, just good salesmanship. Its something we should all do when we want to negotiate a deal or sale with someone.

        If you warn a prospect about a possible outcome then that's OK as long as its true.

        If you're lying then that's NOT OK. Its wrong...plain and simple.

        If you say it will deliver X, no problem as long as it does. If it doesn't, again its lying and its definitely NOT OK.

        I'd actually like to see a sales letter you'd refer to as 'hypnotic'. You've spoken a lot about it, so its time to put some evidence on the table to show us what you're talking about.

        Anyway, two words of caution for you...
        1. Never argue with a copywriter. Our job is to pursuade and convince in the written word. We know how to argue, we know how to do it emotionally, we know how to get under the skin by saying just the right words. Many copywriters also have large egos. So the last thing you want to do is engage one in an argument. You'll lose.

        2. Many people who read these threads are looking for copywriters. You have to be careful about how you present yourself. If you get into a thread like this it will be a major turnoff to anyone looking to hire you. I see you've thrown your hat into the ring for a couple of jobs recently. This thread is likely to damage your chances. So be careful about protecting your reputation.
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  • Profile picture of the author rickstooker
    How Many NLP Patterns Can You Find in This Post?

    Chances are, you've heard a lot of wild stories about hypnosis. You've watched movies with slimy suspicious characters waving gold disks in front of their patients and telling them, "you are getting verrrryyy sleeeeeepyyyy . . ." Maybe you've heard or seen a hypnosis stage show where people crowed like roosters and did funny, silly things. You're appalled at the power seems to have . . . and you don't want to be manipulated yourself.

    Do not be afraid, young grasshopper.

    I suspect you've heard lots of wild hypey claims by copywriters who claim they use NLP in their salesletters to suck money from prospects like a vacuum on steroids. Or you read the Mind Power section of the Warrior Forum and see people exchanging information on self-hypnosis tapes. Or you've seen the WSOs and people such as Steve Meade on self-hypnosis. You naturally wonder if that if self-hypnosis is so effective that maybe so is hypnosis done to one's self.

    Ah, but you're protected from harm by your moral and ethical principles. You're protected by your self-image.

    Maybe you've read the NLP section of Mario Veloso's book and so you're wary of another writer using that information to make you buy something you don't really need or want. Or you've heard of other copywriters using embedded commands. You may also wonder how you can compete with such writers using them in their copy.

    Just understand that everybody's mind contains violent and unsocial impulses and desires. Because you're adult, you've got them under control. Nobody can make you do something you'll be sorry for.

    Hypnosis have a long history. Of course, charlatans have used it or its trappings to try to manipulate or to con people who don't understand it.

    Yet hypnosis has been approved for medical use for about fifty years. NLP has helped many people since Bandler and Grinder first introduced it. Dr. Milton Erickson cured many people who other psychiatrists had given up. So it has tremendous power for good.

    Of course, you have to choose for yourself whether to use it in your copy or not.

    As you think about it, you'll remember that everybody who pays attention to an advertisement is to some degree interested in it. If they determine the product is not right for them, they won't buy it. They will buy it if their emotions in favor it are higher than the reasons against buying it. A decision not to buy is still a decision with far-reaching consequences. If they need that product or service and you let them get away without buying, you did not do them a favor.

    I don't know if you've ever read Mark Twain, but he's one of my favorite authors since he grew up in Hannibal Missouri which is also on the Mississippi River and only a little ways up north.

    In one chapter, his tyrannical Aunt Polly forces him to white wash a fence as punishment. Yet he's very clever.

    When another boy comes by, Tom acts very happy and enthusiastic to being white washing the fence. He's so totally congruent in body and voice that the other boy is so convinced that fence white washing is actually fun and not hard work, that he actually pays Tom for the privilege of taking over. He's happy to do so.

    It's amazing what Mark Twain knew about NLP a hundred years before it was invented.

    The final scenes of the book take place in caves in the bluffs of Tom's little town and are quite an adventure.

    My little hometown of Alton Illinois had river bluffs too, and two caves -- Spring Cave and Dry Cave. I used to enjoy trying to go as far as possible into both caves, though of course eventually it was scary without equipment.

    And I never dared to swim in Blue Pool which is a body of water at the bottom of the bluffs, reputed to have no bottom. Some people have drowned in it, so the owner blocked it off.

    Although I never swam in a bottomless pool, I am a strong swimmer and have enjoyed many artificial pools, various oceans, seas, lakes and river, including the Mississippi although it does have a very strong current that cannot be swum up against.

    Just a note, for those of you who know who the writer James Joyce was. He is a darling of high literature because he wrote a very difficult style known as stream of consciousness.

    James Joyce had a daughter who had schizophrenia.

    I have read letters written by psychotics (in my day job), and it is fascinating to see how they get on a topic, such as their particular obsession, for a few sentences, but then in mid-sentence will skip to some piece of current news they obviously just saw on TV. It's like an old-fashioned phonograph needle skipping out of one groove to another.

    So one day James Joyce was introduced to the famous psychiatrist Carl Jung and asked him, "What my daughter writes reads a lot like my novels. What's the difference?"

    Jung said, "You're swimming. She's drowning."

    Obviously while you're sitting in front of your computer, you open another tab in your
    browser, log in to your Pay Pal account and SEND ME ALL YOUR MONEY!

    When you send me all the money in your Pay Pal, you'll get a nice warm dreaming feeling
    of high self-worth and self-esteem.

    One small part of you resisted this suggestion, and yet the part of you that fears missing
    out and which knows it's right, moral and ethical to provide value for value received, is
    grateful for this lesson in NLP copywriting.

    Because Twain understood that with the right words, even 19th century boys could be persuaded to pay to perform a chore they'd normally hate.

    Now you see that there's much more than you can learn about both hypnosis and NLP.

    Obviously, they're deeper than you realized, but you can learn to swim.

    And as a writer, thinking about science fiction writer Poul Anderson's advice to always include at least three senses in every scene helps you understand the significance to your own copywriting.

    Clearly, there's no reason to fear hypnosis and NLP anymore. (Outright lying is another story.)
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  • Profile picture of the author ghyphena
    Sometimes power can be abused - especially if left unchecked. When you think about the use of hypnosis and NLP in copy, you can probably see why some people worry about this.You recognize that there is a potent technique in use, and this makes you wonder how people might be tempted to exploit it - and you don't want to see it misused.

    Copywriters who use NLP patterns in their sales letters can appear to dabble in the occult. We've all heard the notions of copywriters using hypnosis to compel people to buy products against all merits, but most of us realize that these are exaggerations.

    A copywriter's job is to persuade, which means that they have a duty to their clients to present the product in the best light possible. Copywriters who refuse to do this in effect betray their clients.

    The more you look into it, the more you see just how many people argue that all persuasion must be ethical. Who are we to say that NLP and hypnosis have no room here? You probably agree that maintaining a sense of ethics is important, and this knowledge causes you to think carefully about balancing your duties - to your audience, and to your client.

    As you think about this, you appreciate how important it is to do a good job.

    Telling the truth is usually valued as a virtue. We know that in advertising is no different - and it's this belief that lets us be ethical in our persuasion.

    You know that those of us who tell the truth in our ads enjoy not only better reputations, but better successes as a result. To achieve this, we need to produce work that we can be proud of.

    It follows that all honest copywriters need to ensure that their copy indeed converts as well as it can.

    Successful conversion rates are all about closing as many sales as possible... and what the people who get these sorts of results know is that it isn't easy. You know yourself that it takes dedication to the craft.

    It's this dedication that leads many truly committed copywriters to pursue all ethical channels to close the sale, even if they may appear unsavory to the layman.

    Just realizing this by itself means that you realize something important about the use of NLP in copy, and you understand that acknowledging it can get you to see the real truth about this subject.
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    • Profile picture of the author Ronak Shah
      I CAN'T THANK GHYPHENA ENOUGH!

      THANKS A TON!

      THANKFULLY THERE IS SOMEONE WHO UNDERSTANDS WHAT I'VE TO SAY.

      THANKS A MILLION IN LETTING PEOPLE KNOW WHAT I REALIZE.


      Originally Posted by ghyphena View Post

      Sometimes power can be abused - especially if left unchecked. When you think about the use of hypnosis and NLP in copy, you can probably see why some people worry about this.You recognize that there is a potent technique in use, and this makes you wonder how people might be tempted to exploit it - and you don't want to see it misused.

      Copywriters who use NLP patterns in their sales letters can appear to dabble in the occult. We've all heard the notions of copywriters using hypnosis to compel people to buy products against all merits, but most of us realize that these are exaggerations.

      A copywriter's job is to persuade, which means that they have a duty to their clients to present the product in the best light possible. Copywriters who refuse to do this in effect betray their clients.

      The more you look into it, the more you see just how many people argue that all persuasion must be ethical. Who are we to say that NLP and hypnosis have no room here? You probably agree that maintaining a sense of ethics is important, and this knowledge causes you to think carefully about balancing your duties - to your audience, and to your client.

      As you think about this, you appreciate how important it is to do a good job.

      Telling the truth is usually valued as a virtue. We know that in advertising is no different - and it's this belief that lets us be ethical in our persuasion.

      You know that those of us who tell the truth in our ads enjoy not only better reputations, but better successes as a result. To achieve this, we need to produce work that we can be proud of.

      It follows that all honest copywriters need to ensure that their copy indeed converts as well as it can.

      Successful conversion rates are all about closing as many sales as possible... and what the people who get these sorts of results know is that it isn't easy. You know yourself that it takes dedication to the craft.

      It's this dedication that leads many truly committed copywriters to pursue all ethical channels to close the sale, even if they may appear unsavory to the layman.

      Just realizing this by itself means that you realize something important about the use of NLP in copy, and you understand that acknowledging it can get you to see the real truth about this subject.
      Finally he understood what I mean't.

      A sales letter can virtually guarantee lifetime customers if done correctly.

      What most sales copywriters do is put in some tricks and manipulate customers into buying stuff. It doesn't work that way. People are wise. Some people are naive and they get tricked by all the hypnotic triggers (all BS) even though the product isn't the right fit for them.

      Just making money from your sales letters doesn't prove you are a great copywriter. It's reputation that you create from your sales letters & sales copy which will further create a viral effect just like word of mouth marketing is the real asset. If you can create a reputation from your sales letters for long term benefit of your clients and audiences, I really think you're going to become a top-notch sales copywriter i.e. if you can ethically persuade people to buy with confidence (read: awareness of their gains).

      Gyhyphena, how can I thank you?

      I am dancing like a hurricane! HURRAH! HURRAH! I can't explain what I'm feeling when people pissed me with their incomplete observations about my realizations.

      A copywriter is one who makes people "buy" (Read: persuade) your product. He is smart, savvy, intelligent, emotional and strategic in his copywriting. He isn't your pushy telephone marketer/salesman who manipulates you into buying his stuff.

      Basically, I was offering a free sales letter to a certain number of people on my thread while some fellow copywriters got annoyed with my strategy and discouraged me on the same. Some were accurate at what they meant and some were feeling enraged about it.

      Not all but a few felt I was doing it all wrong - trading my time for nothing when the fact is I was doing something they won't realize until they do it themselves - Building my reputation in front of my clients while just starting out. It shows commitment.

      I did not KNOW how to get started as a sales copywriter without a portfolio so I offered a chance to myself and people started criticizing me for the same.

      It was a strategy for me to establish my self and give my self time & space to grow my career.

      I don't see anything wrong in that. Some of these people think giving a sales letter for free is not good enough as a strategy and that's why they hold on their beliefs about me.

      Fact is I have a few paid gigs with me even after writing that thread now and I'll give every bit of my self to do justice for the person who's paid me money.

      I am NOT working on any free gigs until I complete my paid ones. I will follow through on my promises to a few people though if I have no paid work.

      I still feel certain people on this thread haven't understood even a cinch of what I am as a person while they start judging me.

      If you weren't here, it would definitely had been a rat race (Read: war).

      It is one of the most beautiful ways you could explain what I've to say. Reputation is the key. In one word: Self-Esteem.
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      • Profile picture of the author rickstooker
        Originally Posted by ronakshah View Post

        I CAN'T THANK GHYPHENA ENOUGH!

        THANKS A TON!

        THANKFULLY THERE IS SOMEONE WHO UNDERSTANDS WHAT I'VE TO SAY.

        THANKS A MILLION IN LETTING PEOPLE KNOW WHAT I REALIZE.


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        Excellent job, Ghyphena!

        I don't know how many other people here understand, let alone
        appreciate what you did, but it was terrific.

        I tried to show off instead of meeting the "client" where he is -- as
        you obviously did so well.

        My hat's off to you.

        Rick
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        • Profile picture of the author BrianMcLeod
          Originally Posted by rickstooker View Post

          I don't know how many other people here understand, let alone appreciate what you did, but it was terrific.
          Well, we certainly know ONE who didn't see it coming...

          Such manipulation... Tsk tsk...

          ; )

          Well played, indeed.

          Brian
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          • Profile picture of the author CopyMonster
            @ ghyphena & rick

            Ah the irony... too much ... oh well... now what am I gonna do for a laugh?
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            Scary good...
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            • Profile picture of the author Collette
              *does little whoohoo dance*

              It was a good World Series. The teams were pretty evenly matched.

              And I just LOVE the fact that baseball players (as a general rule) can string more than five words together into a meaningful sentence.
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              • Profile picture of the author Killer Joe
                Originally Posted by Collette View Post

                And I just LOVE the fact that baseball players (as a general rule) can string more than five words together into a meaningful sentence.
                Let's not forget what an accomplishment that is given a mouth full of chewing tobacco...:p

                KJ
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                • Profile picture of the author Collette
                  Yankees can chew and spit AND hit the ball, at the same time!
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                  • Profile picture of the author MissTerraK
                    To be totally truthful here, I have been put under hypnosis, and I know what it is to be hypnotised. Having said that, as there are many, many talented copywriters in this and other forums, I must tell you never, or never have I read copy that put me into hypnosis!

                    So where did you come up with the phrase "Hypnotic copy? Personally, I don't think it exists!
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                    • Profile picture of the author MissTerraK
                      Originally Posted by Paul McQuillan View Post

                      You may have to wait for that answer MissTerra....
                      Are you teasin me? Cut it out! LOL!
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                    • Profile picture of the author MikeHumphreys
                      Originally Posted by MissTerraK View Post

                      To be totally truthful here, I have been put under hypnosis, and I know what it is to be hypnotised. Having said that, as there are many, many talented copywriters in this and other forums, I must tell you never, or never have I read copy that put me into hypnosis!

                      So where did you come up with the phrase "Hypnotic copy? Personally, I don't think it exists!
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                      When Paul snaps his fingers, you will awake and then you will know the answer.
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                      • Profile picture of the author MissTerraK
                        Originally Posted by MikeHumphreys View Post

                        When Paul snaps his fingers, you will awake and then you will know the answer.
                        Well, Paul must have forgotten how to snap his fingers, because I still don't know!

                        Perhaps his fingers are delightfully dancing across his keyboard as he makes money? Just a thought!

                        PS I am still listening!
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                    • Profile picture of the author Killer Joe
                      Originally Posted by MissTerraK View Post

                      So where did you come up with the phrase "Hypnotic copy? Personally, I don't think it exists!
                      Originally Posted by Paul McQuillan
                      You may have to wait for that answer MissTerra....

                      Originally Posted by MissTerraK View Post

                      PS I am still listening!
                      Terra,

                      I'm guessing Paul was referring to the OP getting banned. If that's the case you may never hear his answer.

                      KJ
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                      • Profile picture of the author MissTerraK
                        Originally Posted by Killer Joe View Post

                        Originally Posted by Paul McQuillan
                        You may have to wait for that answer MissTerra....



                        Terra,

                        I'm guessing Paul was referring to the OP getting banned. If that's the case you may never hear his answer.

                        KJ
                        Thanks for the info KJ, I'll just shut off my hypnotized ears then!
                        Terra:p
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  • Profile picture of the author Ronak Shah
    Thanks a ton for realizing after a long thread that I indeed know what I am talking.

    People are wise. Not fools. When you observe this thread with a sharp mind, you'll find many clues as a marketer.

    Yeah! I am a winner!

    I am a strategist. I know what I speak.

    I am the best and I know it. If some people are really oblivious to who they really are, I can't help it. Ignorance sucks big time. Ignorant people suck more. LOL.

    Learn to be neutral folks - nonjudgmental! It will help you realize quite a few things about your own self. You'll learn to respect everyone (only for those who don't know just that).
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    • Profile picture of the author CDarklock
      Originally Posted by ronakshah View Post

      I am the best and I know it.
      Let me put this very, very simply.

      Everybody sucks.

      Everybody. Even the biggest, baddest gurus on the planet suck.

      The difference is that they KNOW they suck. They see where they suck, and why they suck, and they strive constantly to suck less.

      So if you "know" you are "the best," you're really just oblivious to how much you suck.

      Let me know how that works out for you.
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    • Profile picture of the author Killer Joe
      Originally Posted by ronakshah View Post

      P.S. My head is going in a tizzy.. Looks like the warrior forum is really a place where people launch personal attacks sarcastically without realizing any wisdom! Hope the mods take a note of sarcastic insults - indirect insults!
      ronakshah,

      This is just a word to the wise...

      What you are doing in this thread is commiting a form of forum suicide. Slamming the Warrior Forum and it's members with your childish rants helps exactly no-one. In fact, it hurts you most of all.

      If you had any credibility before you made this last post I can assure you that has evaporated away.

      Perhaps it would be a good time to take your loses and lay low for now. On this topic, at least. There's an old saying by Will Rogers that "When you find yourself in a hole, stop digging."

      Seriously, you're killing your reputation here faster than you can imagine.

      KJ
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  • Profile picture of the author Ronak Shah
    Awesome support for me! That's double ice-cream for me! Whoa~~~

    Thanks Rick and GHyphena!

    Love you TONS and TONS!

    Regards,
    Ronak Shha
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  • Profile picture of the author Igor Kheifets
    Many times we see that people don't do what is best for them, even if the product has the right copy, guarantee and so on..

    Therefore, personally, after going through Frank Kern's Mass Control home study course, I don't see nothing wrong with it... since the person who isn't interested in your product probably isn't going to visit your page anyway

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  • Profile picture of the author teamnirvana
    "Hypnotic copy? Personally, I don't think it exists!"
    Rightly said, Terra.

    I presume that so called writers here or elsewhere do have the tendency to cope up with people who do not wish to be Hypnotised. And, to perceive it online, is a risk to be taken.

    As a member already said, no matter what the approach is, if the reader is not well inclined to what the copy is asking him to do, will never do it.

    There is always a "close" button, not invisible, of course.
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