An Appointment - On A Postcard...

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Over all the years, I have mentioned more than a few times, that I am a Phenomenal Postcard fan.

As long as you have the target prospects' names and addresses. And the clients have a very worthy product or service.

And are willing to make an irresistible offer (financial, emotional or both). Have a "scarcity factor" and give away something useful with a perceived high value.

Adding a "no weasel" guarantee. And testimonials.

And the clients agree to send up to 7 plus postcards - or until the response goes negative or the recipients tell them to stop sending ...

...the odds are you're on the road to a good, excellent or an outstandingly successful campaign.


You could suggest that any Ad campaign that "adjusts" to the above criteria should also have favorable odds.


But Postcards are relatively inexpensive to "test." They can be budgeted for most advertisers. And the results and the boost in revenues are usually extremely fast.

Best of all - the Postcard "message" is virtually impossible to ignore (it's difficult to bin it without glancing at it).

And in the increasingly impersonal, digitalized, "automated" Ad world - they can make a refreshing change for the potential customers.

It's unusual to get a one - to - one personal "we really do care about you" type Ad popping through their letterbox rather than "here's another pitch we've sent to 100,000 people" email queuing up in their inbox.


If you follow the reasons why you sent your family and friends friendly, "Wish You Were Here" holiday postcards it helps keep you on track.

(they know you cared enough to send it. And told them the wonderful time they would have. And you wouldn't be sanctimonious to send them to people who had no chance of enjoying it all).


A campaign that can create rather astonishing results is "Your Appointment is Due" Postcards.

The ones you should get from - Dentists, Doctors, Chiropractors, Psychotherapists, Opticians etc.

As well as - Car, Home and Gardening Services. In fact any type of Maintenance or Ongoing Service.

The list goes on...(there's never a shortage of potential clients - consumer and business).

Many advertisers do send them. But they tend to be a little generic. And don't fully extoll the exceptional advantages the customer will experience.

They may remind the customer of the "need" but the copy is not powerful enough - and customers go to a more compelling competitor.


So, here are a few guidelines to create the "Appointment Postcards" to maximize the response for your client.

It's great if the front of the card has a picture of the staff in the gleaming offices surrounded with the latest "equipment" - with big welcoming smiles.

If possible with hands beckoning the customers to give them a call. The idea is to show the customer that they are all ready and waiting to "give an exemplary service."

The copy starts by saying their "appointment" is due at or by a certain date (this can be handwritten - with the name of the appointment scheduler typed underneath). There should also be a reference number. Ask the customer to phone. And quote the reference - which helps track the response.

List 5 - 7 major and irresistible benefits that the customers will receive. Including a guarantee.

And diplomatically list 3 - 5 dilemmas (and if appropriate possible catastrophes) if the customer doesn't make an appointment - and why the practice/company would never, ever want them to experience any of these awful problems.

Mention any new facilities that are now all set to make life so much easier for the customer.

If there is a charge for the Appointment you can mention it - maybe with a loyalty discount for being such a brilliant existing customer.

Indicate that because of the company's exemplary reputation, service and expertise / the current necessity / time of year/ etc. - appointments are booked quickly - and the customer should call within a specific time span ensuring they can be safely "booked in" - and won't lose out.

For doing this, offer the customer a suitable "gift" to acknowledge how important and how much the practice/company appreciates them.

Without knocking the competition - indicate any USP, the extra service, care and commitment that is given to all their valued customers.

Remind them again - that they are a VIP - and to phone and ask for the named person stating the reference number - to book their appointment.

And how much everyone is looking forward to seeing them.

Then 2 - 3 short testimonials proving how superb the service is.


In essence the copy should be crammed full of empathy and understanding of the customers needs.

And that the practice/ company is perfectly positioned and totally dedicated to deliver all of them.


Steve


P.S. Don't make the Postcard a "standard" size - it'll be too "samesy" much like others "pitch and miss" style.

To fit all the above on a Postcard - it will have to be bigger and of course 1,000 leagues better - because you've made your copy spellbindingly good.

If customers don't respond on the first card - have follow up cards with slightly different copy - "You may have "missed" our last card, we genuinely and sincerely care about you - so here are all the important reasons why we're sending it again..."



P.P.S. A special "secret" to ensure a Postcard is read. Put it in an envelope.

Because when you feel a card inside an envelope - you are almost certain to open and read it.


P.P.P.S. You can create an highly lucrative business just by doing "Appointment Postcards"

You can charge a set fee.

Ideally, you want a fee plus a share of the increased revenue the client makes.

This "extra share" can be quite dramatic - not just any appointment costs, but the necessary treatments, work, repairs, replacements and new items.

When I go to the opticians, I pay for the eye sight test and invariably get a new and a spare pair of glasses. I don't remember spending less than $1,000.

And what if a customer goes for a car service appointment and decides to buy a new car?


With all your clients...

Take the time and effort and make sure - you create an unbreakable bond with a titanium coated unshakeable trust.

Not always easy.

Some may let you down - but as you become an indispensable money maker for them - the more honest they'll be with you.

To prevent hassles - it's imperative that you tactfully "teach" the client and their staff to always be true to the copy - to be exceptionally caring and helpful to all the customers AND accurately measure the complete response.

It lets you make any adjustments to improve it.

And helps ensure you get paid the correct amount. You can see the added importance on this if you have an "arrangement" for the extra spends. Keep "thanking" the response collater - regular tokens of your appreciation goes down well - and keeps them happily focused and on your side.


Look at the whole scenario like this - if you're a chap - become the clients and staffs advertising "Brother in Arms."

If you're a lass - become the clients and staffs advertising "Sister in Arms."

Be willing to go the extra mile by offering all the advertising, sales and marketing acumen, tactics and techniques you possibly can. The client and staff gently learn the best avenues in "selling" what the customer needs and wants.

It's second nature to you - but so enlightening for the client particularly when they see the continued boost in sales (and greatly helps prevent any "grumbling" when they cut you a large check if you have an "arrangement" for the additional spends - they know you played a huge role in making it happen).

Being part of and contributing to the "family" or at least being an honourable, essential and vital expert, comrade, friend and ally - is an excellent way to get paid on time, every time.


One thought you may have - for no good reason - "families" can deal you out. And just use the Postcards without playing fair with you.

To bullet proof this - you can have a "best for all" written agreement which might include having the Postcards (c) in your name.


Fortunately it's rare, but if a client rips me off. I'll try and have a "pleasant" conversation to put things back on an even keel. If that's not possible - I would rather avoid the unpleasantness and just move on...

There is an abundance of great clients out there.


Of course please use any of my ideas.

But importantly, if anyone else has their unique thoughts - book your own appointment and type away...
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  • Profile picture of the author max5ty
    Thank you for posting this...it's loaded with helpful information!
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    • Profile picture of the author kanipo
      Begin by writing your message to the recipient, which should take just the left side of the postcard. Write something cheerful about your day, your hobbies, the place where you are... or check out these writing tips for some inspiration. The stamps should be stuck in the top right corner of your postcard.
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  • Profile picture of the author GordonJ
    Just a P.S. If you do offer any marketing services to local businesses, the POSTCARD is an effective way to get them to become your postcard customers too, at least raise their hands if interested.

    Love postcards. Thanks Steve the copywriter, good stuff.

    GordonJ
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  • Profile picture of the author SARubin
    Good stuff, Steve.

    I've done quite a bit of postcards and direct mail over the years, mostly in the trades (carpenters, painters, electricians, plumbers and other contractors) and I'll add one more little tidbit to your list...

    Simply using a word that reflects "local" or "hometown" has proven to measurably increase the response rates for me.

    Your local plumber... Your hometown electrician... Your neighborhood landscaper...

    I've tried it with, and without the "local" angle, and with is the undisputed winner.

    I guess it's because people figure if you're part of the local community you're more trustworthy?

    Never tried it with dentists or chiropractors, but I imagine it would work much the same...
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  • SA,

    Yes - an excellent point.

    I've used the word "Independent" with the emphasis on a superior, caring, expert personal "Service" at the best price possible.

    Using phrases like "you're never just a customer number to us" - and indicating they don't have stockholders and are definitely not in the game of cost cutting profiteering.

    The intention is to persuade potential customers not to leg it to a "national" company.

    I think the word "Local" or "Hometown" covers this! (much more than "Independent").

    And as you said, it enhances the all important "trust" factor.


    Steve
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  • Profile picture of the author Moodesburn1977
    i know someone that has a postcard, direct mailing service, i think it works really well if u have a list that is offline. i always consider different type of methods, there is so many methods out there that people have not heard of online and offline thanks for sharing
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  • Thing is, when your neighbor shipped off in a crate, bcs cain't actshwlly purchase nuthin' no more bcs dead, resta the fam gaht all kindsa shit to do.

    Splittin' the valybyools an' dumpin' the crap.

    So the Don's Electrics postcard goes straight in the trash.

    Recyclable Nuthin' far as anywan not Don happens to be.

    Love him or hate him, the shipped off guy tucked that Don's Electrics postcard away sumplace safe.

    "Don't need this right now, but it could be handy later on ..."

    The internet will never, ever bring you the immediacy an 'in your hands' spearience print whatevah will.

    You'll forget, you'll be distracted by LOLcats -- an' Far Woise.

    See, bcs Andy (Mr Shipped Off) slid that Don's Electrics postcard safe between a whole buncha other stuff like that.

    Fam found the guy an' figured Don's Electrics was junk.

    They gaht no clue why he gaht THAT electrics postcard steada Wanko Piss Face Electrics ... it all goes in the junk as they fight to the death ovah his secret celebrity undahgarment collection.

    * I know *

    Likely mosta us willa forgaht most stuffs we consoomed from outta the ethah tamara.

    (Unless it is Moi, in my princessly cupass.)

    But Andy made a place in his home for that small touch of promise.

    Walked to prussicely the spaht where you put that kinda stuff you don't need right now ...

    but you might.

    We're told it takes milliseconds to blank outta a lame online offah.

    One aftah anothah till'n you find the one you want.

    Postcard drahps on the doormat, an' it compels you to act or seek to act.

    It is a more immediate form of attention, kinda you gotta bend down to pick up the glories your eyes sense.

    An' then you gaht it in your hands.

    Salesmanship in print -- an' you can eithah act on it now or save for tamara.

    So, thanks, Stevo -- there is great advantage in advertisin' we come to believe is our own.
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    • Ahhh yes, what a great client "Don's Electrics" would be. And what a potential!

      I think I'll try and persuade them to offer a free safety electrical check on the good peoples abodes - and a complimentary measurement analysis to ascertain they aren't using more juice than they ought.

      And give out free torches to everyone who has the good sense to partake in this "limited" offer - with the emergency call out number etched on in luminous paint so they can phone should the power go off.

      And make a rather enticing offer on spotlights and for the grandiose clients "swing proof" chandeliers.

      All this to ensure the local neighbourhood has safe electrics, more spots than a dozen packs of dalmations and the couples all land in one piece.


      Steve


      P.S. Princess, it's enthralling, but I might not use your byline "Lightin' fuses is for blowin' stuff togethah"
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      • Originally Posted by Steve The Copywriter View Post


        And make a rather enticing offer on spotlights and for the grandiose clients "swing proof" chandeliers.

        Steve

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        In my experience, noplace gaht chandeliers is evah "swing proof".

        The more ostentatious the lightin', the more adventurous couples descend upon one anothah to cavort in its glow.

        Tellya, you evah served vol au vents at such a debacle, you learn to tread carefully.

        Speshly if'n you wearin' stilettos.

        Nuthin' ruins a chandeliah-lit swing celebration fastah than the nibbles waitress punckchahs sum guy's balloon.

        Spechly if'n he on his knees an' the heel rips it clean off.

        (This nevah happened btw, which is why I ain't in prison. But I did once spill canapés on a ménage à trois while creepin' 'bout in flip flahps.)
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        • Yea - on the "swing proof" chandelier offer - it would be wise to include accident insurance.

          And in bold type highlight that no cover is available if the ladies are wearing stilettos.

          Probably best to also exclude wearing flipflops and carrying any canapes...particularly the red hot chilli pepper ones.


          Steve


          P.S.My olivetti typewriter hooked up to the interweb by elastic bands with a bit of copper wire doesn't let me put a / on the e of canapes . And I would be f***ed if I tried to correctly communicate in letters - menage a trois. More chance of actually doing it with 2 lively lasses who are or aren't wearing stilettos or flipflops than typing it,

          That's why I don't worry about technology or AI - it'll never apply to me (intelligence was never my strong point anyway...).
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          • Profile picture of the author max5ty
            Originally Posted by Steve The Copywriter View Post


            And in bold type highlight that no cover is available if the ladies are wearing stilettos.
            Is this what the kids are calling them these days?
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  • You've gotta be in your 20's up until they day you conk out - to appreciate ladies in stilettos.

    And at my age - if an elegant lady clicks about with steel tabs on the heels - I may need to get my blood pressure checked...


    Steve


    P.S. I'm not sure if this is a UK thing - but hopefully it's crossed the atlantic...

    Dangling.

    When a lady wearing stilettos "dangles" one off and on one of her feet.

    Eminent psychologists are still trying to establish why this has such a breathtaking effect.

    Blimey, it's a lot more fun to watch than a blank page of invisible copy - that's for sure.
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    • Originally Posted by Steve The Copywriter View Post


      P.S. I'm not sure if this is a UK thing - but hopefully it's crossed the atlantic...

      Dangling.

      When a lady wearing stilettos "dangles" one off and on one of her feet.
      Gotta figure Benedict Cumberbatch does this without a care evry time he slips into his Dr Strange costoom.

      Bcs if'n the guy wearin' his own undahwear to the Marvel Yooniverse beneath alla the Eye of Agamotto schwango, frankly that kinda breaks the illusion for Moi.

      All we know is, nowan showed up to see the movies without no kinda prompt.

      "Let's all sit in this buildin' ain't been built yet an' see no movie ain't been made yet -- jus' in case we can catch sighta Benedict danglin' from outta his own boxahs as he negotiates the CGI durin' a key Thanos zappin' scene!"

      tbh once you hit superhero flight, ain't no way even a modestly quoiffyoored hairdo kinda dangles no more.

      Thing is, people respond to prompts like GO SEE DR STRANGE NOW, hence postcards of pure proclaim.

      Sumtimes like they cain't help ummselves, hence the recipients of the * ahem * desired spectacle.

      Tellya, if'n Benedict flies through the metaverse to Princess Central any time soon, I shall make it my personal goal to dispense with any kinda danglin'.

      Even if'n I hangin' off the backa a chair tryin' to keep muh frickin' heels flyin' off.

      "One at a time is merely dancing," he whispers. "Both at once is passion."

      (That is an outtake from a key Thor scene btw, when Strange hexes the guy to flex his pecs to the beat of sum subawful Asgardian folk song.)
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  • Profile picture of the author max5ty
    Actually saw something pretty cool today...

    a door hanger that looked like one of those 'while you were out' pink notes.

    If I knew how to upload a photo I would.

    I would bet just about everyone who got that would read it. It didn't have any images on it...just words.

    I like door hangers. I think they work almost just as well as postcards?

    Anyways, I might be a little off topic...just thought it was a neat idea that got my attention.
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  • Max,

    Uploading photos?

    I used to send them in a prepaid envelope with $2.50 and got them back within 5 days. Shame I had to pay for the blank and out of focus ones.

    Anyway...

    Yes, door hangers are great - usually even more impossible to "ignore" than postcards.

    And as you said - it's always good not to make the Ad look like an Ad - to prevent people screaming "Nooo, please no, not another bleeping Ad."

    There is a mathematical theorem that I apply to Door Hangers/Postcards.

    DH x PC = BR (best response).

    To explain...

    Door Hangers can be more costly to produce and deliver - but if all is bang in place - empathetic benefit laden response driving copy, caring and honest details of the problems by not taking superfast action, an irresistible offer, a value intense "gift", a genuine and compassionate "please don't lose out" scarcity scare, precision targeted audience etc. - the incoming revenues should be on a scale from good all the way to outstanding.

    I just have to balance this with postcards - because I can get more produced - can I equate this to the same or better results.

    A "unscientific" test wasn't entirely conclusive - but a fair few people - maybe in a rush - opened the door before taking the hanger off - gravity caused it to drop. Some stood on it and didn't pay close enough attention to the wondrous message.

    This "analysis" usually sways me to use postcards - of course the gravitational force will always happen - but with less chance of treadmarks obliterating the hours of crafted "get the client the best possible results" copy (and the decades discovering how to do it).

    And I am less concerned about the delivery services hanging the hangers as accurately as possible - and I have less worry about weather conditions - torrential rain, gusts of high wind, heavy snow and whatever else. Theft is unlikely but possible - there are a few "collectors" who'll pay a reasonable price for the right hanger without taking due diligence of the provenance.

    Postcards are a bit more resilient in arriving and staying in their destination.


    Steve
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    • Profile picture of the author GordonJ
      Originally Posted by Steve The Copywriter View Post

      Max,

      Yes, door hangers are great - usually even more impossible to "ignore" than postcards.
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      There is a mathematical theorem that I apply to Door Hangers/Postcards.
      DH x PC = BR (best response).

      To explain...

      Door Hangers can be more costly to produce and deliver - but if all is bang in place - empathetic benefit laden response driving copy, caring and honest details of the problems by not taking superfast action, an irresistible offer, a value intense "gift", a genuine and compassionate "please don't lose out" scarcity scare, precision targeted audience etc. - the incoming revenues should be on a scale from good all the way to outstanding.

      I just have to balance this with postcards - because I can get more produced - can I equate this to the same or better results.

      A "unscientific" test wasn't entirely conclusive - but a fair few people - maybe in a rush - opened the door before taking the hanger off - gravity caused it to drop. Some stood on it and didn't pay close enough attention to the wondrous message.

      This "analysis" usually sways me to use postcards - of course the gravitational force will always happen - but with less chance of treadmarks obliterating the hours of crafted "get the client the best possible results" copy (and the decades discovering how to do it).

      And I am less concerned about the delivery services hanging the hangers as accurately as possible - and I have less worry about weather conditions - torrential rain, gusts of high wind, heavy snow and whatever else. Theft is unlikely but possible - there are a few "collectors" who'll pay a reasonable price for the right hanger without taking due diligence of the provenance.

      Postcards are a bit more resilient in arriving and staying in their destination.

      Steve
      So, this week (Sept. 17-22; 2023) so far, I've had two door hangers and 12 postcards delivered. I noticed some door hangers still on the front doors, some folk seldom use them. Also, on a street mail box route, I saw a lot of hangers still hanging...even though the person has to go to the street to get their mail, I guess they didn't see or didn't care about the door hangars.

      Steve, your test may not be scientific, but it is better than nothing, so thanks for that.

      My observation, none of the 14 direct to my home offers were worth a spit to me. General look at me, here I am, buy from me, NOTHING remotely as you described. If I had time, I'd walk the hood and try to find a buyer. My money would be on NONE.

      Getting the message in their hands is a lot of the battle, BUT, having them act on the message is where the money is. I think an active copywriter could make a very nice living collecting these duds and turning them into winners. Also, my notes, these businesses have more money than brains for their advertising budget...my worst is the Leaf Guard folks, just a pic on postcard and that has to be one of the most glutted industries out there.

      I love postcards and door hangars.

      Except the ones I get. What shoddy copy work MOST of them have.

      GordonJ
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      • Originally Posted by GordonJ View Post

        I think an active copywriter could make a very nice living collecting these duds and turning them into winners.

        GordonJ
        Yeah bcs we all gaht at least 3 DUDS in our lives.

        Coulld be malpufformin' tech.

        Could be fammuley.

        Could be intrinsic stoopedness means we forevah blighted.

        Thing is, evrywan knows what DUDS are.

        You don't even gotta write the fkr out bcs DUDS.

        An' it is like ANTI-GRAVITY.

        100% Propulse of 100% propulsah Repulse.

        Considah this direction for a moment ... as an idea or mebbe a gutsiah kindah thing.

        It is beyond all abominable datin' scenarios how you gotta figure Mr Right from outta a crowd of Mr Miscellaneously Taaahxic.

        An' I guess it is always a subtle interplay of evident halo vs dire consequences c/o oblivion.

        Do you reference DUDS an' contrast with yr brilliance ... or do you strike a noo narrative on a kinda mission sweep?

        All kinds factahs tip the balance of your story.

        An' you gotta get the messagin' jus' right.

        What may anti-DUD today may demand messianic fervor tamara.

        It is in the way of natchrl flooidity to shimmy this way between inevitable absoloots.

        Postcards an' door hangahs ain't forevah statues an' manuscripts.

        They are as first shootsa Spring or yellowed leavesa Fall, floatin' out into the moment of maximally witnessable evidence.

        * momentary blub *

        Is it Chrissmuss soon?

        Do we gotta go through ALL THAT ... AGAIN?

        Yanno, that FOUR MONTH HELLHOLE where muh monogrammed & myoosicyool Princess Balestra Bikini offah ain't worth no kinda ditz?

        Gotta figure cards're jus' cards ... but postin' (as an active verb, here kinda enda Septembah) demands an IRL recipient of rn wondahs.

        * honk *

        I seen Chrissmuss stuffs in summa the shahps an' I already drippin' involuntary mewlkiss.

        * sniff *

        K, so ima effervescin' musself hailf to death here ... but always there gonna be the more substantially deprived kinda whatevah gowin' down in yr POST hood.

        So you gotta reward 'em with immediately obvious advantage.

        CALL NOW gotta glow with promise all theirs -- naht Joon 2022 or random & unspecified kinda miracyool ... jus' kinda NOW.
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  • Yes, it is possible to fire bullets from duds (you just go to the pharmacy and ask for...).

    As far as Postcards are concerned.

    As so many are - somewhat lacklustre and a touch useless - the clients big objection is "Nah, not doing them again, they were a waste of time and money."

    It's not a big barrier - to reset to success - making back the losses and onwards to utopia.

    Remind them why they wanted and needed to do a Postcard campaign in the first place.

    Even though the answer is rather obvious.

    Then show them samples and testimonials of "how and why" Phenomenal Postcards can bring in substantial, ever increasing sales, revenues and profits.

    And with great tactfulness "show and prove" how a mediocre, clamped out - missed by a country mile drab advertising message - can be revolutionised into a - precise on target thermonuclear money explosion.

    Or words to that effect.


    Steve
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  • Profile picture of the author aduttonater
    I never have but may now start sending postcards to some of my top clients
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  • You may of meant you'll arrange phenomenal postcard campaigns for your clients.

    But you can of course send them a postcard to suggest the idea.

    It can work well.

    The copy can go something like this -

    "Just a thought, if YOU are reading this - with the "right" message (which we'll discuss) - so will your customers. I can tell you it has been astonishingly successful - it would be great to tell you why - give me a call on....."


    Steve
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