My "conversion" increased by 20%!

by Raydal
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Just wanted to share with my fellow copywriter Warriors the new addition
to our family.

Her name is Avyel Emidal Edwards and was born on March 2, 2010.
She came in at 9 lbs 12 oz.

She is even cuter than her daddy!


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  • Profile picture of the author Ross Bowring
    Congratulations Ray, you must be an awfully proud Dad.
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  • Profile picture of the author Chris Ramsey
    "You know you're a copywriter when you call your new kid a conversion"

    Congrats Ray!
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  • Profile picture of the author BrianMcLeod
    Precious child, Ray.

    Congratulations!

    Best,

    Brian
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  • Profile picture of the author Scott Murdaugh
    Ray, with enough split testing you could double, triple or even multiply that conversion rate

    On a serious note, Congratz!

    -Scott
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  • Profile picture of the author David Raybould
    Congratulations Ray, that's excellent.

    Best wishes to your and your family,
    especially the newest one =)

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  • Profile picture of the author paytonlowe
    I feel cheated by your thread title and lucky at the same time.
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  • Profile picture of the author VeitSchenk
    Brave man, we stopped at 4 -- doesn't it usually happen the other way around, you've got one and then suddenly you've got a double-whammy?;-)

    congrats and all the best

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    • Profile picture of the author davidjames42973
      Hey! Great news!!!

      Congratulations...
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    • Profile picture of the author dorothydot
      Ray,

      Let me add my own congratulations! Uh, with two sets of twins and now your cutie newbie... sure is a good thing you rank right up there with the Greats copywriter-wise.

      BTW, maybe it isn't always wisest policy to cuddle cute babies while wearing a spiffy business suit? Could be more catastrophic than usual if those all-too-common wet burps happen. Y'know?

      Again congratulations. This world can't get enough RayDals!
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      • Profile picture of the author Kay King
        She's precious - much cuter than daddy. Congratulations!
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      • Profile picture of the author Raydal
        Originally Posted by dorothydot View Post

        Ray,

        BTW, maybe it isn't always wisest policy to cuddle cute babies while wearing a spiffy business suit? Could be more catastrophic than usual if those all-too-common wet burps happen. Y'know?
        Interestingly, she has never thrown up! I guess it's because she is
        breast-fed only. Come to think about it, I can't remember any of
        my other kids throwing up--again, I think it's the breast milk and
        vegetarian diet--we didn't give them cow's milk.

        -Ray Edwards
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  • Profile picture of the author Jag82
    Hi Ray,

    Although your conversion has increased by 20%,
    I'm sure your ROI is infinite!

    Congratulations on your bundle of joy.

    Jag

    P.S Please get her signed up to the WF
    Copywriting section to give her the precious
    headstart over the rest of her peers.
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    So cute!!!!!! Congrats
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    • Profile picture of the author Pierre!
      She's georgous!

      You will enjoy being on her pinky... I did! Mine is 20 now and doing very well. The bad news is that being on her pinky settles down after a while...

      You will love the part when she turns 12 or 13... Just learn how to clean a firearm, you don't even have to know how to shoot... (grin)

      God Bless, and Best Wishes!
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    Congratulations on your newest addition. She is gorgeous.
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  • Profile picture of the author DougBarger
    Congratulations Raydal!

    And welcome Avyel Emidal Edwards!
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    => Stay tuned...

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  • Profile picture of the author aaallday2010
    Yes!! Congratulations Ray.

    That girl will make a fine copywriter.
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    • Profile picture of the author Collette
      She's utterly adorable, Ray. Is that her christening gown?
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    Very nice and congrats on your new born now lets get back to work ha ha
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    Congrats Ray. Cute baby.
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  • Profile picture of the author Raydal
    Thanks for the many good wishes, shows that this forum is not always
    fire-hot but can be just as warm--even the copywriting section!

    -Ray
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    • Profile picture of the author marciayudkin
      Congratulations, Ray!

      Thanks for sharing that very cute photo.

      Many blessings,
      Marcia Yudkin

      P.S. I clicked on the headline wondering why you had put "conversion" into quotes. It made perfect sense after I read your message.
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    From one proud dad to another your right she is cuter then you, congratulations Ray, a job well done.

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    Awesome. I finally became a dad and it's an amazing feeling. Cute baby!
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    • Profile picture of the author LauriS
      She is absolutely stunning!!

      Way to go on giving your kids such a great start in life with their diet.

      Two thumbs up!

      Lauri
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    Congrats Ray!

    I'm a father aswell to my 15 month daughter. They do keep you on your toes!

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    Gives new meaning to "Conversion Funnel."

    Congrats Ray
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    • Profile picture of the author tomcam
      Congratulations! They're the most wonderful gift ever! Daughters totally rock, BTW!
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      • Profile picture of the author Raydal
        Originally Posted by tomcam View Post

        Congratulations! They're the most wonderful gift ever! Daughters totally rock, BTW!

        For sure, men always want sons because they think this is the
        macho gender to have but it's the daughters who look out
        for their fathers. Sons belong to mothers.

        -Ray Edwards
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        • Profile picture of the author ElGatito
          So cute! Congratulations! I bet you're going to be a wonderful super protective daddy which won't able to refuse anything to their daughter

          I wish you Joy and Happiness for the years to come.

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    LOL Congrats man!
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    Congratulations, Ray! She's so adorable!
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  • Profile picture of the author CopyMonster
    Just beautiful... congrats to you and your family on Avyel!

    Girls are great! They keep you on your toes though
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    Scary good...
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  • Profile picture of the author Maddi
    Many congratulations mate. Wishing her all the happiness, success and prosperity in life.

    Warmly,
    Maddi.
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    All the best to you and your daughter

    (she looks so tiny in your hands)
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  • Profile picture of the author Shaun Lee
    Wow, congratulations!

    I can't really imagine your happiness but I'll try to.

    Wishing your family all the best!

    -Shaun
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    • Profile picture of the author Josh Krenzke
      Congratulations! Spoil her every chance you get!
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    Congratulations, she's adorable.
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    Congratulations Ray...

    The New "Copy Queen"?
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    Good for you Ray! Best wishes to you and your family.
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  • Profile picture of the author TrafficMystic
    Congrats Ray.. and welcome to the DAD's club.. You must be very proud.. I know i am extremely proud of my son and daughter...
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  • Profile picture of the author Sylvia Meier
    Did I read that right, two sets of twins and then this little precious one? If so welcome to the fiver club LOL, they really are a blessing and after about 3 (or I guess you went from 2-4) the extra ones don't seem to change things much.

    Congrats to you and your wife on your pretty little girl.

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    • Profile picture of the author Raydal
      Originally Posted by Sylvia Rolfe View Post

      Did I read that right, two sets of twins and then this little precious one? If so welcome to the fiver club LOL, they really are a blessing and after about 3 (or I guess you went from 2-4) the extra ones don't seem to change things much.

      Congrats to you and your wife on your pretty little girl.

      Sylvia
      For sure after having four babies an extra one doesn't change things
      that much. (That's except for the older kids who never really had a
      baby around since they were all babies together.)

      Thanks for all the well wishes.

      -Ray Edwards
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  • Profile picture of the author Rounded
    Congratz!
    I really thought it's about IM... lol
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    Congrats Ray
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