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Feedback on product graphics

by eman_atx
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I had this site and graphics designed bu ecoverbox.com

www[dot]ecoverbox [dot]com/k1/projectdraft/LifestyleFlipping-V4.0.jpg

I would love to get some feedback on it.

Our product targets people who want to learn real estate investing but don't where to start. We teach them these strategies along with lifestyle strategies to continue to succeed.

I don't have the sales copy finalized but wanted to get your impressions of the graphics design.

Feel free to be brutal.

Thanks

EG
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  • Profile picture of the author Andrew Gould
    Link: http://www.ecoverbox.com/k1/projectd...pping-V4.0.jpg

    It looks too big to me, it'll draw attention away from your headline.
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  • Profile picture of the author Loren Woirhaye
    My eye went right to the star in the headline - the pseudo-lens-reflection
    diamond-gansta-tooth bling-bling thing. I think it may be a distraction.

    There is some debate about big headers, but a lot of marketers who've
    tested wide vs. narrow headers prefer:

    a) the narrow header, or
    b) wide header with selling copy words integrated in the graphic.

    Your copy in the header does tell "what it is" but there's little sense
    of movement in the way it's written, the layout or the font choice.

    One reason is because people will be looking at your site on computers
    with ever-smaller "viewports". Your present header will fill up the
    entire viewport on my Asus eee and doesn't really offer a compelling
    reason to scroll down.

    I might use a badge of something in such a header, if I were doing
    it, overlaid with CSS - that said something like "Click Here for
    blah blah get rich quick cel-phone millions free report!"
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  • Profile picture of the author Dan Axelrod
    I think you could scale down the photos.
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    • Profile picture of the author eman_atx
      @Dan - were you talking about scaling down the pics on top of the header or on the DVD, or both?

      @Loren - Thanks for pointing out that the graphics may be to big. hen I finalize the graphics I'll need to make sure that they stay within the viewable boundaries of every computer screen.

      Loren, you make a good point about the flashy bling. It really serves no purpose for it to be there

      Thanks.

      Anymore feed back will be appreciated.

      EG
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  • Profile picture of the author travlinguy
    Since it's not to scale in your model it's hard to guage. Even so, I'd compress the header by about a third. You don't want it dominating the real estate above the fold. I think the design itself is good. It's at least typical for the niche and it does have a certain appeal. Good luck.
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  • Profile picture of the author Kezz
    My first thought is that the graphics are a bit too busy.

    The actual design itself is quite nice but it could benefit from some more balance.

    With any graphic and in any individual section of a sales page there should be one clear point of focus.

    People can only really give their full attention to one thing at a time so you don't want to present too many options at once.

    Both the header and the cover have three points of attention sitting next to each other:
    1. The polaroids
    2. The gentleman - who I assume is the vendor
    3. The title and byline
    I would recommend that you decide which of those three you want to your visitors to give their attention to and then tone down the other two elements.

    You can do this by making one element larger and the others smaller. You can also do it by making one element brighter and the others softer.

    Give people a clear indication of where they should be looking and what they should be absorbing.

    Do this little bit of re-balancing and I think you'll be in good form.
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  • Profile picture of the author gridley
    I actually really like it. Professional look to it but maybe I agree it is a bit too busy.
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