Sales Page Help Would Be Greatly Appreciated - Thanks Guys!
So to give you a little info up front, I have just finished a new parenting guide (my first ever info product) and am currently in the process of having a go at writing my own sales page.
I have read through a few free guides that I could find on the net and have a fairly good Idea of how to write one.(pretty low on cash at the minute to purchace a decent guide)
I am about half way through and would like to know whether the info I have right now is any good (before I waste any more time on something doomed to fail), so I would be very greatful if any of you could spare a few moments to take a look at it. ---> Home
I have tried my best to put my myself into the mindset of my target audience and think I have done quite well for a first attempt (im sure you guys will put me straight lol).
One thing I am having trouble with is the bullets I know they are probably way below standard and also I think the way I have gone from the story to actually introducing the product is probably bad.
Your thoughts and advice would be greatly appreciated,
Many thanks in advance for your help.
Stephen.
P.S dont worry about the domain I just put it up there to show you guys it will be placed onto the correct domain once it's been registered.
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