Website isn't converting. What copy mistakes am I making?
I paid some guys on Elance to make a site for a client of mine. I wrote the copy. Client says both versions (English and French) haven't generated any calls.
They are getting enough traffic though, as I am also doing SEO and the rankings are good (and I have statcounter installed, so I know he is getting clicks - about 12 a day on average for both.)
Hundreds of visits over a period of several months... and no calls. Something is wrong. Also no one signed up for the free report and newsletter, so I am taking Aweber off for the time being.
The site seems to be lacking some oomph, but I can't quite put my finger on it.
I'd be grateful if you could give me your thoughts on the copy, layout and general impression you get from taking a look at it.
Montreal Dental Implants
Thanks!
Gabriel
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