Joe Karbo FAMOUS "Lazy Man's Way ..." Free Swipe File Copy Example

by Drez
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Here's one of THE legendary ads by Joe Karbo.

This is a TRUE classic - and the very first direct response as that I bought from.

Joe's writing tone resonates with his audience and seduces them to send in their checks.

ANYONE can learn from this amazing ad.

BY THE WAY - in addition to the ad image is an image of the book cover! (Which I still own)

Check it out here (No opt-in required)

Joe Karbo: Lazy Man's Way to Riches (rare classic ad) | Must-have for Your Swipe File
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  • Profile picture of the author DougHughes
    Ha, yeah...that's a great ad. That was the inspiration for the one I wrote below. It worked, and continues to work well (even with bad editing. Thanks for sharing that Drez.

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  • Profile picture of the author Stephen Dean
    That's a great ad. I like it's "outside the box" style, essentially writing the ad in reverse and effortlessly throwing in the zeigarnik effect at the beginning.

    Just think what other ads appeared in the same publication as this. Do you think they asked for money before the 7th sentence? The way he does it is not only unique, it's like a damaging admission that gains trust and credibility.

    Say this was published in a magazine, and you put all the ads from the magazine in a line... can you imagine the prospect trusting any ad more than this one after that damaging admission?

    And notice his guarantee in the 9th paragraph. He doesn't say, "If you're not satisfied, I'll issue a refund immediately." No way, he never suggests there's a chance that you won't be satisfied.

    Instead he says, "If you don't agree that it's worth 100 times what you invested, send it back..." So even if you like it, even if you're satisfied, but you don't think it's worth 100 times your investment - you can send it back.

    That's similar to Makepeace's advice on guarantee language: "If you're anything but absolutely thrilled with your decision..."

    And he doesn't ask you to make a decision now, "just try it" and he'll keep your money in "escrow."

    It's essentially a blind offer with a list of "It's not's".

    So much to learn from this ad. Thanks for sharing.

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    • Profile picture of the author Alex Cohen
      Interestingly, a significant portion of the Karbo ad concerns itself with objection resolution...
      • It doesn't require "education"
      • It doesn't require "capital"
      • It doesn't require "luck"
      • It doesn't require "talent"
      • It doesn't require "youth"
      • It doesn't require "experience"
      • You don't have to give up your job
      A very important component of the ad.

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      • Profile picture of the author Drez
        I read somewhere that Joe just sat down and wrote the ad out - it just "flowed" out of him.

        And that he didn't make and changes from his first draft.

        This may be just "legend" ...

        And there were subsequent versions.

        No matter what this is one of the REAL classics
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  • Profile picture of the author Bruce NewMedia
    Boy, I still remember buying that book....and learning all about 'Dyna-Psych'.
    Halbert wrote about knowing Joe Karbo, I believe, when he lived near him in socal.
    Thanks for the pdf!
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    Bruce
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  • Profile picture of the author The Copy Nazi
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    Interesting thing is Karbo wrote the ad before he wrote the book. He ran a test to see what sort of demand there was. You can't do that today - you must actually have the product before advertising it for sale.
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  • Profile picture of the author Rezbi
    How many words are there in that ad?

    How ever many, it doesn't feel like a lot.

    It's easy to read.
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    • Profile picture of the author Drez
      You're right, the copy is very conversational.

      I also think he was one of the first to use the "accountant's statement" and the "I won't cash your check for 30 days" approach.

      It was groundbreaking copy.
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  • Profile picture of the author David Hooper
    Does anybody have the story on this book? Why is the Joe Karbo version no longer available?
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    • Profile picture of the author myob
      The rights to Joe Karbo's book was sold by his estate in the 1990's to Richard G. Nixon, who then re-wrote it to add some of his own information, thus becoming The New Lazy Man.
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  • Profile picture of the author wrcato2
    Thanks Drez, for the swipe. I actually have a copy of the lazymans way to riches and I'll keep the swipe with the book. The video was difficult to hear so I just had to put on my headphones, kick back and enjoyed.

    Rezbi, made a statement that the copy flowed well. However, I read Gary Halberts "Coat Of Arms" letter yesterday, it was the first time I have ever read it. It was fantastic. Well written, short and it was written to a friend from a friend, even though it was mass produced. I believe he got peoples names and addresses from the phone book too.
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    • Profile picture of the author eBay_Mastery
      MYOB, so, who owns the rights now? Richard G. Nixon was tragically and suddenly killed in a motor cycle accident in 2006.
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      • Profile picture of the author myob
        Originally Posted by eBay_Mastery View Post

        MYOB, so, who owns the rights now? Richard G. Nixon was tragically and suddenly killed in a motor cycle accident in 2006.
        As far as I know, his wife, Donna Scoates-Nixon now runs the business under the name of FP Publishing in Vallejo, CA. Website: thelazymanswaytoriches.com
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  • Profile picture of the author sethczerepak
    Wow, I'd forgotten all about this letter. Saw it a few years back and always thought it would make a great case study for my free newsletter. Thanks for sharing it.
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  • Profile picture of the author gjabiz
    Here is a link to a direct mail piece Joe sent out to his list...

    ONCE he started keeping one. The first few thousand names got tossed out because Joe didn't have a back-end...it wasn't until Harvey Brody started his list management service (and he served almost everyone in DR) that Joe started keeping names and had back-end offers.

    http://www.angelfire.com/biz/gjbiz/karbo7.jpg

    just change the 7 to 6, then 5 etc.

    This was a report for "Chatteling", before it was called that, a report on buying and selling personal property.

    When I talked to Joe, he was into buying boats and making a profit...and in his early days, he sourced some of his TV products from Kristee Products of Akron, OH.

    Anyhow, this ad WAS a hall of fame effort.

    Joe Karbo, one of the GREATS.

    gjabiz


    Originally Posted by Drez View Post

    Here's one of THE legendary ads by Joe Karbo.

    This is a TRUE classic - and the very first direct response as that I bought from.

    Joe's writing tone resonates with his audience and seduces them to send in their checks.

    ANYONE can learn from this amazing ad.

    BY THE WAY - in addition to the ad image is an image of the book cover! (Which I still own)

    Check it out here (No opt-in required)

    Joe Karbo: Lazy Man's Way to Riches (rare classic ad) | Must-have for Your Swipe File
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  • Profile picture of the author Rezbi
    When I first saw the ad in the 1980s I didn't go for it.

    I was a sceptic.

    I was young, had a decent job and didn't believe it was easy to make money the 'lazy way'.

    Unfortunately, I got older, had a family and needed to make money...

    And ended up losing more in my early days on the internet.

    It's easy to be taken for a ride by sleazy snake-oil salesmen when you're desperate.

    Especially by the ones who constantly call others snake-oil salesmen to make themselves out to be the good guys.
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  • Profile picture of the author aroth
    This is an awesome ad, thanks a lot for the share.
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  • Profile picture of the author DubDubDubDot
    Originally Posted by Drez View Post

    ANYONE can learn from this amazing ad.
    That's great news for people with a time machine that can go back three decades to a time when ads like this were still relevant to the masses. I don't understand the love for the obsolete ad concept.

    There's a reason why you don't see these long format text ads anymore. Nobody of value responds to them.

    You could use it if your target was a segment of seniors, but you'd be very limited in what you could do with it. Nobody else will respond at an optimal level. Youths (under 30) absolutely won't respond to it. Middle age would respond somewhat, but the level of skepticism would be too high.

    Scroll through a Google images search for "1973 advertisement"

    https://www.google.com/search?q=1973...ement&tbm=isch

    And now "2010 advertisement" (a bit too much irrelevancy on 2012 searches)

    Now https://www.google.com/search?q=2010...ement&tbm=isch

    What really pops out at you in the differences between the two? The modern ads are minimalist and straight to the point. Especially look at old car ads. They put as much text on the page as they could fit. Now it's something like "Live" and a photo of a BMW. I know that doesn't sell the car, but it illustrates how simplistic the masses need things to be here in 2012.
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  • Profile picture of the author Raymond Duke
    There's a great breakdown of this ad in Joe Sugarman's book, Advertising Secrets of the Written Word. Karbo attended Joe's seminar and wrote this ad shortly after, I believe.

    A great ad indeed.

    Also, here's a related article from another guy named Joe. The Secrets of Joe Sugarman Revealed! A review of three new marketing books
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  • Profile picture of the author Cityman
    Another thanks,
    Appreciate your post...
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