I'm searching for a headline improvement maybe you could help me out?
"Fire your old sales page and hire a super-seller instead, who knows your customers' disires, and will make these dreams come true, immediately and automatically!"
But I got the feedback, that "super" is hyped up.
Which proposals do you have?
I'm wondering about "mega seller" or "#1 seller"...
What do you think?
Please ignore the signature, I do not want to promote the product at this post. I really want to get a feedback about the headline... Sorry