I'm testing a new offer on my site and i'd love some feedback on the copy from you folks who do it all the time. Here it is -
How To Get 10,000 views - Free Report
I'd love your feedback, good or bad.
Thanks in advance
Edit, 29 Oct '11 #1
Folks a little bit of important context I didn't originally explain. This page is presented at the end of an optin sequence, where visitors have already opted in for other stuff they originally joined to get access.
This was intended as "bonus for those interested" and hence is presented at the end of the sequence.
ASCW makes some good points below RE this feeling like a bit of a con, but I hope this explains the intention a bit better. Nevertheless, the original implementation is a bad idea I'm rectifying.
Edit, 29 Oct '11 #2
I've updated the page implementing some of the feedback so kindly provided. It still needs more work but it's more reader-benefits focused. Thanks guys