Help: Need to add more power in my headline

Learn to swipe... unabashedly... famous old headlines:

Here's another one:
Get Prospects to Stampede to Your List!

Nice graphic Mr. Subtle

Maybe: "Flood Your List With Subscribers Instantly"

Urgent Time descriptive words like Today, Now, Instantly, etc give off an instant gratification vibe that people love.

1 easy way to come up with great headlines is by writing your bullets first before writing the headline. Bullet writing is an art and a science in itself so I assume that you know how to write them. As Mr Subtle said above, you must also learn how to swipe from winning copy. I suggest you study salesletters by great copywriters like Ben Settle, Clayton Makepeace and Bob Bly. Maybe I should throw in a shameless plug for my name as well. Lol.
To add more power to the headline, make it specific and put in some curiosity. For example you could say something like:
"Attention Ezine Owners: Discover the Fastest Way To Double Your List Up To At Least 50% It's Present Number in 24 Hours Or Less. You Either Pull This Off Successfully Or I'll Eat My Hat and Give You A Double Refund for Wasting Your Time"
Now tell me that headline wouldn't catch your attention if you saw it and I'll eat my hat. Lol.
All the best.

I think this is very suitable "Discover The Secret Ways To Start Building Your List immediately" try this....Thanks and very nice pic Mr.subtle

Try add this to your original title...

Discover The Fastest Way To Start Building Your
List Using x Method In Record Time...

Subhead: If You've Ever Dreamt Of Owning A Responsive List, Then This Is The Most Important Letter You'll Ever Read... Here's Why...

What will building my list fast do for me? Building a list fast doesn't inspire me. It actually deters me. I'm more concerned with conversion than just building more of a larger list. To me, I associate building a list fast with spam. I was triggered automatically with "ok this guy is going to tell me how to get mass people to sign up which means it's not likely targeted and likely useless signups of uninterested people..."

Always try to leverage upon something in your headline. It can be a past experience or something you can predict in your prospect. Why do big-name marketers have over 100,000s of subscribers? Why are your prospects stuck at expanding their list?

Maybe that's not even the case. What they perhaps want... is to speed their list subscriptions up. Send their lists soaring with "hungry snapping crocodiles" to buy things from them.

Be more specific. Are you targeting the total beginner, or are you aiming for the intermediate marketers who already have a list? Tailor your headline to that. Sometimes, a wider basket simply means lower conversions.

Your product is pretty commonplace. That means that your copy has to be different & daring, charming or challenging... it has to piggyback the stronger competitors.

If your product uses a special mechanism... flaunt it right away.

People don't want *another* list-building product. They just want something that gives them a solution to their problem. Novelty is something you can flaunt immediately. Commonplace simply means ignored, not bought and deleted.

List-building is so commonplace the big benefit itself is easily understood by your target market... In fact, their emotional buttons might be somewhat numbed by previous products they've gotten. That's another reason why you'll need to shift your proof upwards in the copy and also gradualize reasoning in a quicker pace.

I don't know, but maybe you'd want to try these tiny alignments for a massive change. Your copy isn't great, these pointers could help a little.

1) Easy
2) Fast
3) Specific
4) Qualifying
5) Agitating
6) Seductive
7) Mystery

People don't want to Learn. They want spoon-feeding, convenience and total ease.

Look, the basics *alone* explode your list.... (You don't even need the advanced methods!)
The advanced methods stretch your list to more horizons...
Even big-name experts destroy their own lists with one post.... Here's how you can....

That kind of meaning.

Listen, don't be afraid to have a personality! You don't have to offend, but you can incite a soft challenge. You can insist. You can press on, be aggressive. It depends on your copywriting style. You can talk casually!

People don't want to do work. If you teach how to skyrocket conversions, use that to your advantage. You don't need a massive list if you can convert a high percentage from a small list, for example.

Gee, I rattled on too much here.

Good Luck,

-Ryan.

Hi,

I do have some ideas here but It's up to you if you will use these:

a.) Fastest ways to start up building your list
b.) Build your list within 2weeks!
c.) Easiest ways for building up your lists
d.) Learn the easiest ways to build up your lists
e.) Amazing ways to start your lists
f.) 10 ways to build up your list with faster results. 100% Guarantee.

Something like these. I hope it helps.