by Mark Andrews Banned
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...aspect of copywriting confuses you the most?

What do you most want help with?

Tell us your pain and we'll see how we turn your
frustration into pleasure by giving you the answers
you need to your copywriting questions below...
  • Profile picture of the author angiecolee
    I'll go first since no one else wants to

    I'm frustrated because I'm having trouble with 1) selling myself and 2) sometimes reading between the lines with clients. I feel like maybe my questions aren't clear enough when trying to help discover what exactly it is they want.

    The selling myself is something I know I'll have to become comfortable with. It's just odd because I feel perfectly comfortable selling other people. Me? Not so much.

    And the questions - I've looked at other copywriters' questionnaires and tried to pull the questions that seem the most relevant. How do you phrase your questions in a way that the client understands what information you're trying to uncover?

    If anything's unclear, please let me know. The hour is late, but if you guys are feeling generous I definitely don't mind throwing myself out there.
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    • Angie,

      One of the best questions to ask a client is -

      "What problems do you most want to solve?"

      Sit back and take lots of notes - they'll usually talk for hours.

      And then you explain how and why you have the right answers.


      Steve


      P.S. If the "selling yourself" bit is a little difficult.

      Just concentrate on selling "copywriting" and how it'll significantly help the client.

      They'll see that you know what you're talking about and you'll automatically be "selling yourself" - without having to (if that makes sense...)
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    • Profile picture of the author Mark Andrews
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      Originally Posted by angiecolee View Post

      I'm frustrated because I'm having trouble with 1) selling myself and ... questionnaires and tried to pull the questions that seem the most relevant. How do you phrase your questions in a way that the client understands what information you're trying to uncover?
      Hello Angie

      Selling yourself is all part of the package of being a copywriter. If you're not comfortable selling yourself this could just be a little bit of low self esteem going on. Or, a little too much modesty. Every copywriter needs to be fantastic at marketing themselves. If you cannot market yourself effectively with total confidence, how can you market other people, their goods, products, and services?

      Look, you're the expert at copywriting. There's no need to put yourself down or to hold yourself back from telling the world how great you are. You've got a valuable skill which 99.9% of the rest of the population haven't got the foggiest clue about. You need to put yourself out there at every opportunity.

      The IM gurus, the only reason why they're referred to as 'gurus' (on top of imparting superb advice which fills a gap in the market) is because they're bloody good marketers. They're not ashamed to shout out to the rest of the world, "Here's who I am, this is what I do and this is what I can do for you and your business."

      You've got to have or be prepared to acquire more self belief. If you cannot bring yourself to believe how great you are, this will come shining through the rest of the wording used in your marketing efforts.

      Suggestion...

      Find a high cliff, no, don't jump. Stand 20' back from the edge of the cliff edge and scream your lungs out for 30 minutes. I mean really let rip. You'll find this to be quite an uplifting experience. I mean it. Just do it. Try it out.

      I want you to stand in the middle of nowhere where nobody can hear you, where there's no need for you to feel self conscious and I want you to use the full power of your lungs to shout at the top of your voice just how great you are. "I AM THE WORLDS BEST COPYWRITER."

      "I DESERVE NOTHING BUT THE BEST IN LIFE BECAUSE I'M BLOODY BRILLIANT AT WHAT I DO."

      Write down half a dozen phrases of personal importance to yourself, phrases which are relevant to your personality. Whatever the self doubt is, write down it's opposite number. Defy your own logic by force even if you feel that what you're writing down is not true of yourself.

      Now go do some shouting at the top of your voice. And I don't mean just an ordinary shout, I want you to really work yourself up into a veritable frenzy. Give it some rip girl. Go for it.

      Surprisingly enough, on top of feeling as daft as a brush you'll also feel at the end of the 30 minute session quite invigorated. Empowered even. You'll feel a sense of release of old self limiting thought patterns. Your brain will be tuned to accept new patterns of belief in your own abilities. You'll be primed to accept new personal challenges. And ready to take on the world. And yourself.

      You Angie are as good if not better than the next wo/man in the street. Self limiting thought patterns are just that. Thought patterns. And if you don't like a thought pattern or one keeps entering your mind via the pineal gland, kill it right there and then. Tell it to piss off or whatever word you need to use to tell it to go away. And replace the negative thought with a more positive affirmation.

      You've got to reinforce good feelings about yourself to have total self confidence in your own abilities to deliver your skill package to the rest of the world and not be ashamed to tell everyone else just how great you really are.

      Now, as regards the copywriting questionnaire...

      I'll send you mine by pm and you can rephrase each of the questions to your own liking.

      I hope this advice was helpful to you.

      Warmest regards,


      Mark Andrews
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  • Profile picture of the author angiecolee
    Steve,

    I do love taking face to face meetings with clients and just letting them talk. Often they'll ask me why I'm writing down certain things and recording the conversation, and I think it affirms their faith in my abilities when they know I like to reference them in their material. I haven't asked what problem they'd most like to solve though - that will be a great one to add to my repertoire. Thank you, sir!


    Mark,

    Part of the problem might be me going after the wrong markets. After the initial shock wears off when I quote a price, I often find myself explaining to people why good writing is an investment, not a line item expense. I've been doggedly pursuing this for over a year, and one thing I'm certain of is that I will be a successful copywriter. I think the newness of being a business owner and handling everything on my own is overwhelming me and doing a little dance on the ol' self confidence.

    Amazingly enough, I've done the primal scream thing before and I do know about its amazing restorative power! I've just got to work on finding a place around here (I'm still relatively new to the SF bay area in the US) where I can go be alone and scream these things into the void. Thank you for taking the time to write out such thoughtful advice, and for sharing your questionnaire.

    Thank you both for sharing your wisdom! I'm sad more copywriters aren't taking you up on your offer.
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    • Profile picture of the author Mark Andrews
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      I forgot your in San Francisco. Then...

      ...drive over the bridge and at the end, turn left up the hill towards the old army camp at the top of the headland.

      Halfway up that hill is a pull in where you can park the car overlooking the bridge with SF in the background. I know, I've parked there myself in the past. It's as good a place as any to give your voice a bit of welly.

      Or, carry on to the top of the road and there's a gravel car park there overlooking the Pacific Ocean on top of the cliff. Another good spot.

      I might be about 5,000 miles away but I've got a bloody good memory.

      Just take your business one step at a time. You can't hope to do everything overnight. I've been self employed for over 30 years and every day is still a new learning experience. Just enjoy the journey. Self employment shouldn't be a chore, every day will always present new challenges - just take it all in your stride and break the entire processes involved of running your own business down into easy steps.

      If you break tasks down into little steps, you'll find everything becoming a lot easier to manage and you can congratulate yourself on each step accomplished.

      Kindest regards,


      Mark Andrews
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  • Profile picture of the author Steve Hill
    This is more of a business question, Mark, but it applies directly to copywriting as a business, and to your other post about ways to find business.

    Specifically, the question is how to convince a business decision maker that they NEED better copy?

    Let’s say it is readily apparent that the copy they have could be far more effective, and perhaps one has taken the trouble to write a better version.

    However, the business decision maker just does not agree change is needed, and will not even consider trying the improved copy, regardless of the cost or how much better it may seem.

    They are completely sure that what they already have “works well enough” for them, or are convinced that their colleague’s friend’s sister, “who took some marketing courses” has already produced the best possible copy.

    The dilemma here is how to show them that “what they know” ain’t so.

    While it has been my experience that closed-minded clients like that are usually not worth the trouble, it would be interesting to hear alternative suggestions.
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    • Profile picture of the author Mark Andrews
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      Ask how s/he is tracking his/her current ad response rate Steve.

      Many business owners won't even stop to consider whether or not their ads are converting and from where their customers are actually coming from.

      You might bring him/her on side by offering to do a split test with him/her. S/he uses one of his ordinary advertisements whilst you on the other hand provide him/her with a direct response advertisement free of charge at this stage. An advertisement which can be tracked to see precisely from where these customers are actually coming from.

      S/he then drives an equal amount of traffic to both offers the test being, which one is going to convert better? Which one generates the most profit and by what percentage difference in a precise timeframe?

      Assuming yours is the clear cut winner Steve by a good margin, you can then pitch him/her again. If he still refuses to listen, dump him/her and move on to your next prospect.

      If on the other hand s/he does listen to your commonsense approach knowing it's now in his/her personal interest to take your advice on board because at the end of the day you're going to put more profit his/her way, then you can reel him/her in on your elevated pricing plan to make up for time already spent trying to help him/her and for the 'insult' given not employing you in the first place.

      Either way, just demonstrate that you can do better than anything else which s/he is currently bringing to the table. In other words, take direct action whether s/he likes it or not and prove to him/her that you do know precisely what you're talking about.

      If s/he receives one hec of a lot more profit as a result of your direct action you can bet your bottom dollar s/he's going to start listening to you a lot more attentively in the future.

      Best,


      Mark Andrews
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      • Profile picture of the author Steve Hill
        Originally Posted by Mark Andrews View Post

        Ask how s/he is tracking his/her current ad response rate Steve.

        Many business owners won't even stop to consider whether or not their ads are converting and from where their customers are actually coming from.

        ...You might bring him/her on side by offering to do a split test with him/her.
        There's certainly a potential client quality issue here. If the client is either so small or so clueless that their only tracking consists of seeing how many times the phone rang, it's probably not going to be a good client. (There can be notable exceptions to this, like if the widow inherited the company or something, and just doesn't know what is possible.)

        Or, if the person in charge of marketing is always so certain they are right that they won't even consider anything else (such as split testing) even if they are tracking, there may be a client quality issue there too. (Again, there are exceptions.)

        In internet development, I've long since learned to just move on to the motivated clients, as videolover7 mentions. When there is a significant degree of unreasonably obstinate resistance, then there's usually a good reason why they have crappy websites and/or copy. That reason usually has a name, and lives in management.

        @ewenmack, you've got a good point about citing case studies and dropping examples, especially for online marketing (where it is easy to make and track changes, and split test with quick results). I've read simliar anecdotal stories of turnarounds that amazed the clients by Bly, Halbert, Ogilvy, and others.

        What is a good source for current examples specifically related to copywriting? Advertising Age and Adweek cover a wide spectrum of marketing, but may be too broad. There are SEO magazines like Search Marketing Standard, but that's a specific niche. If anyone has current literature recommendations (provable case studies, periodicals, journals, books) about how copywriting changes improved results, please let me know, here or by pm. Thanks.
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    • Profile picture of the author videolover7
      The best selling situations are those where the prospect already knows he wants the product or service. In those cases, it's simply a matter of communicating why you should be the provider.

      There are tons of prospects who already know, so ignore the rest and go after them.

      If you're not currently drawing prospects to your service, it's a positioning problem.

      VL
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    • Profile picture of the author ewenmack
      I'll jump in here Steve, since Mark is not logged in.

      By asking ad performance questions on their existing ones,
      you get to see if they are actually measuring them.

      You can tell stories of others who "knew" were getting great results,
      but when proper measurements were put in place, they were crap.

      Just keep probing deeper to see what's really going on,
      without antaganizing the critter, because he will sense that you really know what you are talking about.

      Keep dropping case studies of results.

      Things like, a 1 letter change to a headline increased sales by 200%...
      A change in the order button increased sales by 25% within 3 days,
      at no cost...

      A split test change in a order button increased sales by 157%, no cost to implement.

      Drooping little nuggets like them really does work.

      I did it last week in a face to face meeting.

      The guy couldn't take it any more...he offered me 50% profit share
      in a region and a share in overall division sales.

      He was growth motivated, not all decision makers are though.

      Best,
      Ewen

      P.S. Huh, Mark did beat me!
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  • OK, I did the screaming thing in a open field outside Los Angeles.

    Turns out I didn't see a new housing subdivision behind a nearby row of tall scotch pines.

    Ten of the homeowners called the cops.

    Two of them hired me, one for a sales letter and one for an autoresponder series.

    Thanks, Mark!
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  • Profile picture of the author NickN
    Thanks for posting this, Mark. I have a few Q's.

    1. When you are getting a commission on the product you wrote copy for, what's the best way to collect that money? Regular checks? Paypal? Credit card?

    Also, how do you "keep tabs" on your client, to ensure they're giving you the money you're owed? I know the best way to do this is to work with trustworthy, honest people. But sometimes these situations occur.


    2. What is the best way to split-test web copy for a client? Do clients usually give you access to their hosting account? I haven't done much direct-response web marketing, so I'm kinda clueless.

    Thanks.
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